Although Cultivating Immortals Is Very Tiring, I Have Loli Junior Sisters

It's a very good article about cultivating immortals. The author can write about daily life very realistically, and the junior sister Loli is also yyds. The male protagonist is also very awesome, and the progress with the female protagonist is very delicate and traceable. All in all, it's very cute [send heart] [like]

An alternative article about cultivating immortality simulation (system), it's a bit mixed to be honest. I can accept that everything about the protagonist's start is not given by the system, and the presence of the system is not too prominent (mainly more towards tool simulation). As for the plot, I don't know what the main plot is. To be honest, I can get through the first chapter and get better. Every time the protagonist uses simulation to pass the plot, I feel more like a unit story, which is also quite good. I feel good about the description of the supporting characters. The character creation is good, and it can also highlight the entire world view. The author does not need to be unconfident; for the Loli junior sister and the male protagonist To be honest, I think the relationship progress is too fast. Although I don't like to watch the pull for too long (but Loli is a bit too fast for nothing), but the author can add later the reason why Junior Sister Loli likes the male protagonist so quickly [face covering] [laughing evilly], of course, the relationship between the two is really good. At present, it seems that it is a single female lead story. After all, the author said it is pure love. The above. [Learned]

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It's pretty good. The heroine's figure is in line with expectations. She's not a fake loli who only claims to be 1.6 Meters because of the title. The love line is a bit abrupt at the beginning but there's no big problem later, and she doesn't hesitate when it's time to eat meat. The simulation system is abstract but not completely useless, and the ratio between the main line and the love line is pretty good. But the part that puzzles me the most and I didn't give it five stars is: Why do the text sometimes contain minus signs with unclear meanings? This feature will appear when Hakimi generates text, but the description and plot arrangement of the book are not like those generated by AI - at least the memory and attention of the current model should not be able to do it? The author has cleared up the confusion and looks forward to the follow-up content.

Absolutely beautiful, the content is interesting and the plot is interesting A good book for those who are tired of traditional online texts Personally, I suggest that there be less sensational and rising plots.

The feeling of reading this book [smile] [smile] [smile] [admiration] [love] [love] [OK] [love] [love] [OK] [love] [love] [OK] [Petrochemical]

This book is suitable for those who are tired of reading traditional/pretending to be non-traditional fairy tales. Although there is a simulator system, it is indeed a light simulation. The system is mostly funny. Its main function is to predict the future. So if you want to get the system in the morning and stare at the screen yy in the afternoon, you will be invincible, and then ascend and continue to repeat the process. You can run away. Because the simulator in this book is a simulation, all useful functions cost money, and the length of the simulation is not much. In addition, it provides some weird talents and some auxiliary functions, such as plug-ins like "Land of All Living Beings". Secondly, the interaction between the novel and the heroine is very well written. The two like each other and have known each other since the Qi training period. It is really sweet and sweet, rather than talking about pulling, going from hating to liking, I suddenly became curious, and so on. The two understand and comfort each other. The heroine is not a flower vase, but has the functions of an alchemist, an array master, etc. As for the main line, you can refer to the process of "Who Let Him Cultivate Immortality". There is no main line that runs through the whole book. There is only a main line that runs through a realm, which is adventure, gossip, and small plots. Going to different places and writing different stories. Sometimes you can even see the immortal version of your hometown appearing in the book. Is it true that Yunling Nanfu will send text messages when it rains in the summer, telling you not to eat wild mushrooms? The author doesn't use bad jokes or bad jokes like other funny books, which I think is pretty good. In the end, the world of immortality in this book is more socialist than the mainstream one-sided law of the jungle, that is, the protagonist has absolute truth, and those who are stronger than the protagonist and those who are weaker than the protagonist have a way to die. The characters also have IQs. The author is currently writing about a close battle, which can be seen as a bit of the Samsara Paradise. No nonsense, no waves. The villain also has an IQ. He knows that the protagonist cannot take the initiative with the law enforcement image stone, so after a few words to stall for a long time, he directly uses a big move that will kill him. It's worth reading, with very few poisonous points, especially after the author has optimized the first few chapters. Of course, if you like the kind of foundation building stage, you will be invincible enough to cut mountains and rivers and run away, because the qualitative change in combat power in this book is in the Nascent Soul stage, and the mountains in the world of immortality are not ordinary mountains. The idea that the world of immortality is all ordinary things except monks is really out of date.

The plot progresses very quickly, is concise and clear, and does not drag on. The relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses very quickly, is very sweet, and is very interactive. The most important thing is that the author is a cat girl [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

This book is really imaginative and has many interesting settings that make people's eyes bright. Generally speaking, there are no big problems. It is a very interesting fairy tale. But there are some minor issues. First of all, the heroine, I feel that the emotional line can be written more delicately. Although the current emotional line is already comparable to most works of the same type, but if it can be more delicate. It would be better if it was clearly stated when the female protagonist fell in love with the male protagonist. The current relationship line gives me the feeling that the relationship between the male and female protagonists is a bit quick. But our daily interactions are indeed quite sweet. The second is the problem of the simulator. This simulator is considered a scam among similar systems, but it can also be used to predict the future. The overall effect is actually not small, but the protagonist is always cheated of money by the simulator. Some readers who like to read cool articles may not like it, but it is not a big problem. Those who just read and enjoy without thinking are probably in the minority. There is also the scene in the Duanmo Cult stronghold. I understand that the author wants to pay tribute to the real heroes. However, this plot always felt a bit abrupt and awkward. (I'm sorry, it's not that there's anything wrong with the plots about real-life heroes, it's just that the writing may be a little flawed.) There are also many daily tributes to reality, and I feel like the frequency can be reduced. Finally, there is the issue of the worldview. The worldview of this novel about cultivating immortality seems to be somewhat different from that of traditional novels. It can be said that there are really geniuses everywhere here. In the middle stage of Jindan, he can only be a small official. I always feel that I have lost some of the original flavor of cultivating immortality. And compared with other immortality novels, this immortality novel has obviously strengthened the country and weakened the status of the sect. I'm not sure whether other readers will like this, so I won't list it as a poisonous point for the time being. To sum up, this is an eye-opening and imaginative fanfic with some minor flaws, but they are not major. Among the same type of fairy tales, it can be regarded as eye-catching. Comprehensive evaluation A-about

Come on, author of the cat girl who writes about the emperor's uncle (I have a friend who wants Cat Girl Pill. Does the author have a way? [Laughter] [laughter] [laughter] [laughter])

Does Maomao think of himself as second on the list? It's interesting. When is the education and training [blowing kiss] Loli solo heroine is cute I want to see the content that has been deleted by review [sending my heart]

Haokan, come on, author, the heroine is very good [laughing evilly], quite sweet [laughing evilly]

Mainly abstract and funny, the lack of spiritual stones is only superficial, and there is no lack of what should be spent. The love line is progressing very quickly, Loli Junior Sister Zhenyu Meow [laughing evilly]

This is one of the better daily articles on immortality that I have ever read. Unfortunately, it is not popular. I hope the author will not be a eunuch. Otherwise, I'll let you wear your long johns inside out every night and come to my room.

The ideas are clear and logical, and the content is quite interesting. There are many and complicated elements, which is not very friendly to readers who are used to reading one type of book. This book is more everyday. There is also the tomato feature. The idea is good, but writing it down is another matter.

The author is actually a little lolita with white fur and animal ears

Good-looking, real world of immortality, great! ! !

It's okay, but I don't know if the author is a woman or Nanliang [laughing]

Where can I buy cat lady pills [laughs]

Very pretty. Come on, write about the emperor's uncle's cat.

It's very interesting to watch, the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also very warm, the plot is also very interesting, the supporting characters also have their own lines, and teasing the cats is really fun [Love]

Really very beautiful

Abstract, junior sister is cute

It's good to watch. I'd like to watch more. I'll keep watching.

Come on, cats who write brilliant books

It's beautiful, I love watching it, and I'll keep watching it.

I have a friend who wants to know about Cat Lady Pill.

When I read novels, I always regard the women in the novel and the women in reality as two different creatures, so that they can be easily incorporated into the plot. But now I no longer have that mentality. The writing is very good.

Come on, write about the emperor's uncle's cat

Looks good, not bad. The plot is quite interesting.