World War I: Iris Withered in Winter

It's very beautiful. The author's description of the relationship between the two girls is sincere, and the description of the battlefield is terrifyingly sincere. There is no sensationalism. The author is portraying a real person. She has a lover, she likes to study knowledge, and she hates war. Although this is a fanfic, it doesn't feel like a fanfic. It just borrows the world view and background. The descriptions in this book are very delicate, so I was put off by the two-dimensional nerd flavor of the opening chapter. That one must be also very exciting. Unfortunately, after reading this one, I am used to focusing on the solid descriptions of individuals, so I can't get used to it when I read that one. I will read it when it is finished one day [currently working on it]. The full text focuses on the war experiences of lower-level officers and soldiers. Because of this, psychological description is the main focus. If the external environment does not change, readers can only follow the protagonist and think endlessly. In this regard, the plot line is slightly weak. However, for the established history, there are indeed no ups and downs in the plot. The protagonist is destined to wallow in hell before the time comes. (And readers even have to worry about what will happen to the protagonist twenty years later when the time is up [face covering])

A masterpiece that can be compared with the original work

It's so well written, I already feel like I'm reading "All Quiet on the Western Front". It's really rare to see a book on Tomato about ordinary soldiers instead of all kinds of books about reversing time and space. Although it is written by a fan of another book, it feels like it has surpassed that book. Keep up the good work.

Compared with the original work, this book reflects the cruelest and most realistic battle. People die every day. No one knows who will come first tomorrow or the accident. The protagonist cannot protect everyone without plug-ins. When I saw the gryphon part, I understood the difference between her and Charlotte. She has no golden hand. It means that all she has is the experience of surviving war after war. At present, I see that the protagonist in Chapter 171 uses ether energy except for the first volume and rarely uses it later. I hope it can be strengthened [crying] I have to wait until I go to school. I hope the subsequent plot will be better. Come on, author [laughs]

It's really interesting and shocking... Written from the perspective of soldiers from three countries: France, Britain and Germany. War is the same for any small individual, causing a lot of death and destroying each other among human beings. Sometimes it even feels like performing a ridiculous farce, which is painful and numb.

Although there are not many people, the author's writing is really good. I have read a lot of cool articles and it was the first time I read this kind of article. It had a great impact on me. At first, when I saw that the protagonist has magic, I felt that the protagonist must have the ability to influence the situation of the battle, even if he is victorious in every battle. However, after seeing Lucille's death and the protagonist's contact with his lover on vacation, it was very shocking. I've been thinking about it for a long time and don't know what to say. Now I just hope that the protagonist can have a happy ending.

The meticulous description, substantial characters and enough realism make this fan article the best of its kind. When that day inevitably comes, where will the familiar modern life go? Outside the muddy trench, only the irises bloomed silently, remembering.

The original work and this book are a legendary story with a color of personal heroism, which feels like the inspiration of a young officer before setting off; the other is a "true" story with a color of realism, which feels like reading a classic literary work. The feeling of depression, powerlessness, despair, and suffocation can be felt between the lines. For ordinary soldiers, war is not honor and flowers, but a cold and cruel purgatory. What I like most is when she returns from vacation and returns to normal life in a broken state. The "human" part of Irene was shattered by wars, and those fragments remain forever in the wars. Sophie's love is the only healing agent. She will carefully put your fragments together. No matter what you become, my love for you will not change. Every telling, listening, and silence feels like a clumsy and careful kiss from both parties. Very delicious 😋. 😭😭😭Lucille! The eldest daughter couldn't even eat the bread made by Sophie😭😭😭The author has no heart😭😭😭Why did you stab me😭😭😭I still thought about raising my daughter after the war, and I could see Lucille's sweet smile after eating the bread, and the result was😭😭😭. At least I should be able to see my second daughter's smile😢? I cover it! If you can't see it, wow darxi😭 No other comments desuwa😢 I think it's good if the author reads it and writes it down😢, that's it desuwa😢

This is a very real book. It is different from the reality of all kinds of tastes in the world that we often talk about (not that this is bad). This reality is as detailed as the grainy soil, the scent of wheat inhaled when the nose is twitching, and the damping feeling of the bayonet piercing the flesh, which makes people unforgettable for a long time. Especially as a person who originally wanted to listen to books to help me sleep, some parts really made me wake up with goosebumps and made me sleepless all night. However, after the cold, I deeply reflected that people in my era have too little understanding of war, or it has produced iterations. In fact, life now is a subtle war. It does not mean maturity, it can only mean forgetfulness. Maturity often means forgetting some things, forgetting ideals, forgetting to speak, and numbing yourself with day-to-day work. When I'm really depressed, I turn to cigarettes and alcohol. What's the difference between this and war. Although I will not experience this, after reading this book, I developed a fear that my previous friends would be silenced by this war. This is a book that shows both emotional richness and emotional scarcity, from the struggles before the war to the buried feelings during training to the shock of first entering the battlefield, aphasia and freezing, but Lucia, Kana (will she become a daughter in the end) and the stars still left some brilliance of humanity for Irene. The dullness of the sapphire bracelet, the memory that I dare not recall This book describes the war scenes in detail, but it is not too empty. It uses the battlefield where Irene was to reflect the brutality of the war at that time. Finally, I want to make a digression. I skipped to Irene's return to Paris and saw her comrade Kana. Then when I saw the story of Anna in the normal sequence, I thought Anna and Kana were the same person. I also thought about where Anna went to the French army for a long time, and finally made myself laugh. After reading this book, I don't dare to read other books now. I feel the same way as Erin. Seeing beautiful things feels too fake and too detached, but I can't find a meal replacement. Maybe the author wants to help me quit reading online.

It's so sweet that it catches people off guard. It's a good WWI lily novel.

The writing is undoubtedly good, and the description is quite detailed. Please support me👍 It's just that the story is a bit unsatisfactory, and some parts are too long, making it uncomfortable to read🙉 (I'd like to praise Steel Snow, it's an excellent short story😋)

The writing is still very good, and the impact of war on individuals, families and society is microscopically summarized between the lines. It's real and doesn't make me feel creepy or psychologically uncomfortable. It also makes me realize the importance of peace. But until now I don't quite understand what kind of story the author wants to give me. Is it a story full of philosophical thinking about soldiers who are swept away by the torrent of war, or is it a story about a protagonist who starts as a low-level soldier and then gradually moves up the ranks until he changes from a chess piece to a chess player, bringing a more beneficial impact to this war to his own side? In addition, it seems that the protagonist's etheric background has never been used?

It felt like a piece of delicious cream cake was in front of me. I couldn't help but stuff it into my mouth. I wanted to swallow it whole, but I also wanted to savor the delicateness of the cream on the tip of my tongue. I couldn't make a choice. Then it got stuck in my throat and I couldn't go up or down. Finally I choked to death [grievance]

A very good book. It feels like an in-depth analysis of the original work. The characters are well described, the emotions are clear and vivid, and the author's writing style is also very good.

It looks good (that's it, I don't know what to say)

I don't have any other ideas for evaluation. I am only willing to say the simplest, unpolished words. I can't find any words that can express my original love: this book is beautiful. I don't know how the author wrote it, but I have completely felt the tangible, real, sticky feeling of terror and despair. Especially the scenes of the Battle of the Ardennes Forest, the Battle of the Marne, the death of Lucille and the death of Sergeant Marol before the Battle of the Pfarls, it seemed as if they were really happening right in front of me. When I read it, I felt my eyes widening involuntarily, difficulty in breathing, trembling and irregular heartbeat. Everything was so real in an instant, and it was so well written that I had to rely on alcohol to numb myself at night to sleep peacefully. @Baiqing who likes dual control

So embarrassing! So spicy!

May the world never have war [cry][cry][cry]

Does anyone understand this feeling of feeling uncomfortable and wanting to watch?

I wrote a lot of comments, but after thinking about it, I deleted them because I felt that the comments were not good enough. All I can say is, it's so well written. At least in this track, the writing is excellent.

The language and writing are amazing. I can learn a lot of writing techniques as well as serious literary works. It's a pity that such a good book has been buried.

Good guy, good looking

Without violating historical facts, this is one of the best books I have ever read that describes the cruelty of war.

It's really well written, but there are too few people. I'm fascinated by it, it's very real. Even the characters who are passersby in deep suffering have many shining points. The British mecha pilot who fights to protect the team, the same batch of sergeants who try their best to blow up the German mecha, there are no immortal God of War characters, some are just mortals who use their lives to carry out their beliefs [crying]

It's beautiful, but why are there so few people? How long have you been looking at it?

Why is Sophie so opposed to the single-person ether device? Couldn't this device end the war faster? The only one injured was Germany.

It was so well written that I was a little uncomfortable with it at first, but later I wrote the story of the trenches and the story of my return to Paris which was really great.

Rare subject matter, well written

Not bad, I hope you can stick with it

The best description of war I've seen so far on Tomato