Ten Thousand Insects Shroud the Heavens

The writing is very good, not particularly procrastinating, and the plot is relatively novel. It uses insect cultivation as the main cultivation path, and it is decisive in killing, but the values ​​​​are quite upright, but it is relatively slow. After reading the current chapter, I feel that the protagonist has not grown up and is still in the stage of Qi training. There is almost no treasure hunting in secret realms, which is slightly lacking.

It can be said that it is a rare good book in Tomato. It describes all the character traits of the characters without trying to make up the word count. The best thing is that the description of the fighting scenes is very detailed. Unlike other novels, a spell or a sword can kill as long as it has high skills or good skills and magic weapons. It seems to show how awesome the protagonist is, but in fact it reveals that I can't write exciting fighting scenes. I can only write a few simple sentences to summarize. Originally, whether it is a martial arts or a cultivator, one should write out the dangers, the battle of wits and courage in the fight, and the back and forth between the magic weapons, which is the masterpiece.

The plot is novel and the writing is excellent and polished. It is a rare masterpiece. There are too many descriptions of the battle, too many adjectives, and not many actions, which doesn't create much of a sense of the scene. If you don't believe the author, just think about it for yourself.

I read every piece very carefully. The author writes very well and has a great world view and imagination. Overall, it is really good. I highly recommend this novel about insect repair. I would also like to give some suggestions: We can add some modes for the protagonist to raise gu and refine insects, similar to the scene of devouring each other and raising strange insects, add some more fantasy scale insect species, or a scene such as a competition between the same sects, and whether the protagonist has some awesome natal spiritual insects, which can be upgraded with the protagonist, and can communicate with intelligent ones, such as spiritual snakes, scorpions, and butterflies. Different financial assistance can cultivate the kind of spiritual insects with different abilities and effects. There is also a problem. If the author can see it, I really want to make some suggestions. The descriptions of some supporting characters are too detailed, there are too many supporting characters in the group, and the descriptions focusing on some minor supporting characters are too specific and numerous. Readers may want to see more battles between the protagonist and his opponents (such as Ma Jiaoer's siege, really There is no need to describe all the supporting characters, including everyone in the team and even the soldiers, which is a bit too complicated). It is more about explaining the passionate battle process of killing people and seizing treasures instead of showing the portraits of many supporting characters. This slows down the progress and similar narratives, and some irrelevant people and things. There are rivals and fights, and some minions and supporting characters can be briefly mentioned. There is no need to describe each group in detail. I really hope this can be improved. Support me, thank you, let the author see it

I don't know why this book's score is so low. I've been reading the novel for so long. This book does have its own style and design. Both the psychological description and the plot are top-notch. You can see the struggle and growth of the protagonist. This is also the first novel that I have actively given gifts to since I read this novel. I really hope that this book can get the ratings and reviews it deserves.

The details are well drawn, and the scenes are connected one by one. A vivid world of cultivating immortals with cruelty and tenderness is presented as if it were now. I caught up with the latest chapter in one breath, and my level is still online. Great, come on, author!

It's very interesting. I've seen too many protagonists who are swordsmen or decent monks. This kind of niche is more interesting. The first part of the film raising insects in Luanming Cave is very unique, but then the story becomes a little more conventional, but overall it's pretty good. The writing and storyline are both good.

I'll comment on it first when I see Chapter 15. I don't know what will happen next. If it breaks down, I'll come back and criticize you. I couldn't read the map at the end, messed up the time, and didn't write it carefully at all. I was too hearted and acted like a brainless person. If not, the protagonist would have died long ago. Moreover, the writing method is too messy. Xiaoxiu can come up with such a complicated plan and accomplish so many things when he goes out. He is like killing Tiandao.

Not bad, worth watching. There are many areas that can be optimized. It is not logical to design a few more reasonable plug-ins. It is not logical to push it to a residual skill. The outline is not well written, the plot is not clear, there is no main line, and it is easy to go here and there. The fighting scenes can be optimized, refer to Gu, and be clear and organized without being too flashy. The background story of the supporting characters can be appropriately added, and the characters will be slightly flat. But overall it's pretty good.

As a long-time fan of immortal novels, I strongly and sincerely recommend this novel. In terms of subject matter, character setting, and storyline, it is very comprehensive. I just hope that the author can update more as soon as possible without being unfinished