Lingka*************

@ Fresh graduate, buddy, you wrote 45 chapters where others had ten or even five chapters. Either you update 10 chapters every day from now on, or you speed up the process. No, what if you make money by writing like this? I'll give you a 2. I'll change it back when you get 10 cards a day or when you speed up the process.

Apart from being a little verbose, there is no big problem. The protagonist can build a demi-human body with infinite resurrection after awakening. Then it can be easily constructed as a spiritual substitute. It's not too much to put a yellow town on yourself [sneaky laugh]

Feels like a manual rather than a network hour

Let me start with the conclusion: This book is a good book with an extreme audience. Let's talk about the advantages: the characters in the book all have brains, unlike other novels in Tomatoes, which are all human-machine templates. The setting is also very attractive, and the card types of the combat power system are also very rigorous. The protagonist does not start with a traditional waste or awaken a powerful talent, which is considered a waste talent. I tell you from the beginning and the bosses in the book all know that the protagonist is a genius, and the protagonist will not deliberately hide anything. Then there are the shortcomings: the pace of this book is really slow, and there are a lot of daily routines and a lot of introductions that are of little use.

Personally, I feel it's quite good. Although the pace is a bit slow, there is no such mindless plot, such as being suddenly attacked when awakening, and being beaten half to death before someone comes. The protagonist follows a genius style, and there is no plot that is mindlessly ridiculed. Overall, it feels okay, but it is just too little.

The sea! You are all water!

Yes, yes, others of the same kind have already created cards and started groups, but here we are still teaching everyone knowledge [face covering]

I feel like I read a paper and wanted to show the world in the book, but it was too fancy and the narration took up most of it. I can still read it.

Very well written, cheers

A bit watery but well written_(•̀ω•́ ∠)_

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking

Come on come on come on come on

The progress is a bit slow. I update it every day. I am really afraid that one day I will be fed to death. It would be nice if it could be updated sooner