Zero Zone, I Can Control the Ether

The author is from God, I will unconditionally recommend it to everyone The delicacy of writing is unique among all second-generation works. The character relationships, conflicts, and plot can be said to be top-notch among second-generation works. It gave me the feeling of excitement and joy I felt when I read a fanfic for the first time, and my heart kept moving. Even those famous works rarely touched me like this. You must keep writing it [crying]

I thought he was a local, but I didn't write a label or introduction, but it turned out he was a time traveler. I don't care, but others may have objections. Plus best

(Only my personal opinion) How can I put it... The beginning of the writing is good, but the element of time travel comes too suddenly. At the beginning, it is just a foreshadowing... When the reader is already curious about the character's emotions, he suddenly finds that a time traveler has come to take away the body of the character... What is this? What is the difference between this and killing a living person? After reading the introduction, I thought it was just a regular time travel, but it turned out to be like this... I... I'll take a look below... I suggest the author write about seizing the body in the introduction... This time it shocked me so much... Okay, I'm going to continue to taste and appreciate this seizing flow... (I'm sorry if the author gets angry after seeing this!!! Everyone) (Why am I so serious?) Come on, author, write this story well now that it's written like this.

Subjectively speaking, it's still okay. Objectively speaking, a useless time travel was added, a useless system was added, and in the end the system was abolished. If it is a native character, it can be accepted a little bit, but forget it, you still have to support it.

Although post-travel is not a particularly popular subject, there are not many descriptions of this time traveler, and he later got rid of the system. If you can accept a little bit of poison, this book is highly recommended to read. After all, big poison is not considered poisonous, and small poison is not considered poisonous. The author is also a newcomer, so you can support it [Like]

The descriptions are smooth and delicate, and the plot is well developed. It is the best Zetsu Zero fanfic I have seen so far [Sending my heart]

It's a very interesting book. Thank you to the author for the great meal, ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's a pity. The writing is very delicate, but the author has gone to school. I hope there will be a follow-up

Okay, same text, everyone understands

How proud! (Appreciation)

It's beautiful, with twists and turns

Real, objective, good-looking

The author's writing is very good, but I don't understand why the score is only more than 6 points. I suspect there is something wrong.

Perfect hits my heart, perfect [laughing]

It's a good read, but I recommend putting time travel in the introduction. Of course, I personally think this book is very good [blowing kiss]

It's good to read, I love to read, come on, the author, update five times a day [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

A little bit poisonous but pretty good-looking [sending my heart]

Author, you are my god. The details in the work are very good and the emotional descriptions of the characters are on point. However, I feel that sometimes the plot seems a little off.

This is a once-in-a-lifetime piece of writing. It's the first time I've read such a beautiful book.

The author's writing style is very good [Admiration] and it was very enjoyable to read.

Beautiful, but not many people see it

I also changed the cover