From the Start, I Blasted the Daydream Show, and Bai Lu Couldn't Stop Laughing

Emm, what do you say? It can be seen that the author is writing a book for the first time and is still young. However, the writing style is quite good and uses his true feelings. However, it is a bit too deliberate and the writing is too soft, which is a bit contrived. The inner drama of the protagonist is too rich, which may be counterproductive. I hope the author can change it to make it more natural. But there is one thing to say: this book is a good work, and it is different from other books. It does not focus on the protagonist. The characters in the book all have their own characteristics. All in all, it's a good book. I hope the author doesn't stop reading it and can stick to it. Although it's not very popular now, I believe many people are discerning. Come on, author!!!!

Personally, I feel that since I have written a novel, why should I make the protagonist cowardly and cheap? Doesn't it look awkward and makes you feel uncomfortable?

I really can't accept that the main character is this brother and that sister from the beginning. I don't even know the person, why not just call him by his name? Do you need to put yourself in such a humble position? The author feels how shameful he is. Do you feel inferior now? Even if you yourself are humble, is the protagonist you write so humble??? Don't say it's polite, put yourself in an important position, and don't act like a dog licker all day long. Even Pengpeng is called brother. How young does the protagonist have to be? Is he underage?

It was written too hastily, and many parts were incomplete, which made me confused. The advantage is that it doesn't criticize certain people, and it doesn't block the protagonist just because he's unhappy. Conclusion: The content is too complicated and rushed, but you can understand the outline.

This book is too streamlined in terms of some details. But there is nothing wrong with the overall content. Especially since our Brother Kun is finally not the one who was really screwed up and made fun of himself. To be honest, Brother Kun is like this now and doesn't mind so much.

Well, overall it's okay, but the ideas are a bit confusing. Then, some characters are added a bit too suddenly. The game sessions can be described in more detail, and a little more interaction can be added to each game session, otherwise it feels a bit dry.

Is there another one similar to this? I can't find it or it's been taken off the shelves.

Entertain yourself! And the author should be Queen Dandan

Chapter 75 Seriously? The protagonist can't beat Bailu when tearing up famous brands [awkward laughter]

The main character is written so humble. Just a person.