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It's super good-looking, but it's really sad. Whether it's Malfoy's unrequited love or his brother's forbearing love, it's very sad. Especially the part where Rachel vomits blood is really unbearable, but overall it's quite good-looking. The heroine has a tough character, but she has a bit of a girl's temper. She can already be said to be at the White Moonlight level. Other than that, the character of the male protagonist Tom is not broken at all. I just don't know why Tom's stories are usually sad. I hope the female protagonist can live a good life and stop being a dodder who needs to rely on others. It is best to torture Tom. Finally, I hope Malfoy and his brother can also live well [crying] [crying] [crying]

This is the only fic with Riddle that I have finished reading. The author's description is really good. He has a thorough grasp of the character of Tom. Their love is very touching. These characters are flesh and blood. Highly recommended! She is the only person who can see through him, and she is also the soul he wants to capture most. They met in the gap of time and space, and even Tom, a product of love potion, still had a heart - a heart that trembled for love. The Mirror of Erised saw through his ambitions and desires, but he could not see through his sincerity. He hoped that Rachel could stand by his side and that she would be as attached to him as a dodder flower, but he could not be honest and respectful. He did not understand love, and it seemed that he had never understood Rachel. The repeated injuries and perfunctory wear away her love and trust. He hated her for loving those people, and hated her for betraying him for them. He thought she hated him, and that was indeed the case. But at the last moment of death, the joy of victory enveloped everyone except her, who silently shed tears for his death. His soul heard her say "I hate you for killing my beloved Tom" The arrogant and handsome genius boy who could call her "little girl" was finally lost in the maze of ambition, but he was lucky enough to understand true love before he died. He finally understood love. "I'm sorry, I love you little girl, my dear Rachel" Fortunately, they met in another time and space, and this time "he" chose a different path. Joe, Abu, they loved her with their actions, and ultimately protected Rachel's secret with their lives. "After disappearing for eleven years, the love that was destined to be unable to be expressed was buried in the soil forever. The heartbreaking pain finally made me feel relieved, because I can finally see you." "The shackles of the family, the mission, the relationship like an iron triangle, the restrained love, I hate my restraint, but your happiness is enough, be buried in the cemetery of Malfoy Manor, just like sleeping with me as the wife of Abrasax Malfoy."

Oh my god, I don't cry when I read sadistic stories these days. I cried when I read an HP fanfic [crying][crying][crying] The characters are really well drawn, and there is no OOC. The characters have delicate emotions, there is no simple love and hate, and the emotions of love and hate are vividly expressed, especially when Tom died in the battle, Rachel said, you killed the person I love, and my My lover, Tom, burst into tears, which shows that we still love each other, but there are too many blood feuds in between [crying] [crying] [crying] Oh my god, this is the first time I have seen a HP fanfic written so well. Although there are only more than 40 chapters, each chapter is written with sufficient weight, without cutting corners, with a lot of words, and the plot rhythm is not too fast or too slow. The author is really great

Full marks, this is the best emotional depiction of "Voldemort" I've ever seen in HP, and it's not OOC at all. [Sending Hearts] Tom Riddle doesn't understand love but he falls in love with the heroine, but he is not so firm. In the early stage, he is controlling, but before the relationship flows, the daily relationship is very good. But when the heroine disappeared later, she went completely crazy. No one should give up what they think is a great "career" for the heroine. Qiao is a good brother and cried to death [almost crying] even in the end without revealing the resting place of the heroine. Dumbledore resurrected the heroine and destroyed Lao Fu's Horcrux without hesitation. The heroine firmly believes in love and justice. Believe that love and justice are right [blowing kiss]. I have been helping the three little ones. Describing the Malfoy family, where family comes first👨‍👩‍👧‍👦Abu, who likes the heroine, also let go. Xiaolong writes about contradictions. It's like a Harry Potter quote from Narcissus. The ending is the same as in 📖. I cried to death in the ending "You Killed Tom Riddle" [almost cried] Full marks for details. If the plot is 100 points, I would give it 99 points. One point less would make the author too arrogant. Enter directly. Demining: 1. Tom is a bit arrogant and when making the Horcrux, he concealed the fact that the heroine despises life and longs for power and strength. I don't think it is OOC. 2. Abu's words broke through the traditional image. He really liked Quidditch and liked the heroine in their daily interactions, but in the end he did not say it out loud and guarded her silently. In the end, they married and gave birth to Lucius, who died young. 3. After the heroine was cursed, his brother Joe did not tell the heroine's resting place and was tortured by Bella, digging her bones and chewing on the melons. 4. The early part is so good to watch, but then the ending of the main text is very tearful (I almost cried) with two endings. The main ending is that Voldemort is gone, and then the heroine and a Muggle author give birth to Tom Joe Waite. The extra ending is that he married the heroine and gave birth to two children, and Qiao and Abu did not have a happy ending. I also hope the author will make a side story about Qiao and Abu and the heroine

Very beautiful and worth seeing. In it, the author describes the love and hatred between Rachel Weir and Tom very vividly. The final ending is really sad, and the author stabbed me in the heart. Looking forward to a sweet love story.

It's really beautiful and the characters are portrayed very delicately. It's obvious that the author cares deeply about it. In fact, with Tom's character, the ending is be. This is really sad. Tom really loves Rachel and is absolutely possessive of Rachel. Unfortunately, he is not willing to admit that he loves Rachel until the moment of his death. It's really sad. Rachel is a very good character. She has advantages and disadvantages. She is not a perfect person, but it is her imperfections that make people remember her😭 It is at the level of White Moonlight. Not to mention Tom, I am also attracted to Rachel. The characters are very full and three-dimensional. The author's writing style is really good (˃ ⌑ ˂ഃ ) There is also Joe who never expressed his love for Rachel until his death, and died to protect Rachel. He was really trying to be a good brother, but when he found out that his love for Rachel exceeded the love between brother and sister, he just restrained himself and protected Rachel, my Joe! 😭😭 It's really great😭😭 Abu's love for Rachel is also very obscure. When he found out that his relationship would not have any result, and could not have any result at all, he hid it all in a kiss, then let go and went his own way, but did he really let go and was he really relieved😭😭 The whole book is really sweet in the early stage, and really sad in the later stage. I cried a lot. I cried over and over again after reading this book. I have read it for the third time now. I highly recommend it. The author's writing style is really getting better and better₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑ In fact, there are still many things I have not written. For example, what makes me most uncomfortable is the portrait of 17-year-old Tom that Dumbledore left for Rachel (probably). At that time, Tom loved Rachel very much and was very gentle, but Tom was also very good at pretending. Just like Rachel said, "Mom didn't know if he was a bad person at that time." But these are all in the past tense. Maybe it's just like Rachel said that she just misses that time... In the quiet afternoon, Rachel sat alone on the recliner, quietly recalling the past and missing Tom during that time. Little Tom's name carries too many memories and too many emotions for Rachel. I hope that one day, Rachel can truly be relieved (I can't be relieved anyway) Really, after typing this article, I couldn't calm down for a long time. Maybe it's because the appeal of this article is really strong😭😭What I wrote may be a little illogical, I just want to express my feelings after reading it😭😭I hope the author's second article can bring us a new feeling. The writing is superb! ❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆC)

In fact, this is one of the best Thomson's books I've ever seen. In line with the original work, Voldemort is Voldemort's style, and the love story I want to see, you are the most special [shy][shy][shy][shy] Although the ending has not changed, there is a parallel story. Who understands whether you can read a sadistic story and burst into tears after reading it, and then see the sense of redemption in the parallel story?

I like this book very much. It does not fall into clichés, the logic is smooth, and the ending follows the development of the story without being forced. I kept crying in the last few chapters. It created a very real image of Tom Riddle or Voldemort. He was very charming, hypocritical, cruel, and indifferent. His only "love" was given to Rachel, and he just wanted to possess her. Rachel is my favorite heroine. Although she likes to be "stupid" sometimes, her justice, tenacity, and love form a strong contrast with Tom Riddle. She loved Tom Riddle deeply and hated Voldemort because he killed her Tom. Abraxas has been playing the role of the second male protagonist in fan fiction for generations. His love is quite restrained and forbearing. All he can do is protect Rachel. In the end, he dies from dragon pox, which is embarrassing (I really want to see Abraxas' extra story!)

This is the most beautiful Riddle fanfic I have ever read. Each character in the story is well-developed, with not only love but also friendship and family ties. Riddle is a person who does not understand love. It is the first time I have seen someone who has not changed Riddle's magic. When I read this book, my mood will really rise and fall with the plot of the book. This is also the first time I have seen Lucius's father written not only as a noble family heir. Cheng Ren is also a person who can be funny and has his own furry side. He will not bully the weak at will. Everyone has flesh and blood. Rachel can see that the heroine is really the author who has put a lot of effort into writing. She is brave, smart and decisive in doing things. She is not a flower vase. I was really heartbroken when I saw Qiao's death. The emotions in each branch line are not too much or too little, which makes the story neither boring nor cumbersome. I like this novel very much! Big cheers for the author!

Give it four stars, because of the early stage and some innocuous handling of details, and the most important thing is the fear of being blocked. After reading this novel, I was really filled with emotions for a while. There was so much I wanted to say, but when it came time to start writing, I couldn't stop talking. After much thought, I decided to improvise. Putting aside those imperfections, the author is really attentive in portraying the emotional line between Tom Riddle and Rachel. After all, if there is no in-depth thinking and speculation, how can the lifelike Tom in the novel be created. The further I look back, the more I feel that he is the real "Tom Riddle" in the original work. He is no longer the usual cold-blooded, ruthless, arrogant, controlling and possessive "him" in the past, but a real person. His human nature is complex and contradictory. He longs for power and power but also longs for love and exclusiveness. His unfortunate childhood and natural indifference also promote his "emotional avoidance" of his beloved Rachel. In the end, he inevitably buries his only true love with his own hands and heads towards the abyss of self-destruction. During this process, he had thoughts, entanglements, pain, and struggles, as well as stubbornness, and his share of arrogance, to the point where he would not even put himself in Rachel's shoes, which made him more real. Perhaps it is precisely because of this that they are so upset. Secondly, it's about the supporting characters, brother Joe and friend Abu. They all silently supported Rachel behind the scenes, caring for and caring for her, even at the cost of their lives. This feeling is undoubtedly heavy and difficult to let go of. Even though they knew there was no result between them and Rachel, they still chose to stand behind her without hesitation and try their best to protect her. Although I really hope to be with Rachel, unfortunately, this normal life has also allowed their two important supporting characters to transcend mediocrity and sublimate greatness. The only drawback is that the timeline arrangement is confusing, there are a lot of details, and there are some minor embarrassments in the early articles. People who read it almost felt bored and gave up, but fortunately they persisted. I feel that the writing style in the front is very green. It should have been written a long time ago when I was young. I had some ideas (of course, this speculation was confirmed later when I was about to finish "Spreading Flowers"). In the following articles, I should have consulted relevant information on the characterization and added a lot of character details. The most important thing was written later. , The thinking is more mature, but it is not without its shortcomings, that is, the timeline of the original characters' activities mentioned earlier, the grasp of details in the book is not enough, everything else is very good, mainly I really like the details and psychological descriptions of the male and female protagonists at the end, it is really vivid and immersive, a big encouragement! ! ! [Sending Hearts] If I brush N later, I will add more feelings.

The article focuses on describing the heroine from the perspective of the heroine. Rachel, the heroine, is the kind of person who dares to love and hate. Tom, the hero, finally became the villain, but the later part is really "sweet" (can you believe it? My love.) I cried to death. Overall, the description is OK (but the article has some pitfalls that have not been filled in yet).

Note that everyone must read my comments! ! I finished chasing it. I got it. I finished it in a whole day. First of all, without exception, this work is super good, beautiful and invincible. The author also has a deep research on the original work. It has no OOC setting. I also like it very much. I highly recommend it. Here are my thoughts. You must read it! I don't understand. I'm just an ordinary person. Why should I encounter such people who use sweet articles to pretend to be abusive during the Spring Festival? I don't understand. I thought that tomatoes are all brainless. I just wanted to read something brainless. How come I met the brainy and very abusive Xizhuan. When I saw the front, I was so sweet that I didn't want it. I fell in love with the author instantly [laughing awkwardly]. Well, I almost stopped breathing when I saw the back. I also felt deeply betrayed like Tom Riddle. Well, I want to pursue eternal life. I want the author to live forever until the author makes this article sweet for me [crying] The only dessert in the whole text is probably when Voldemort was still a kind little soup. The only beauty is that our Malfoys are still so good and were whitewashed by Rachel [crying] I feel sorry for Rachel, I feel sorry for Abu, I feel sorry for Joe, I feel sorry for the Malfoys, I miss the soup before the blackening [crying] [crying] [crying]

Wow, wow, it's super good-looking, and the image of Tom, whose ambition and desire cannot be compared to anything else, is portrayed super well. Tom deceived and coaxed the heroine again and again, and even erased the heroine's memory. It was really real. It's a bit cruel, but if it doesn't work, you can skip a few chapters, and the later chapters will be sweeter.

It's really good to watch, the description of Voldemort is great, the characters and plot are very interesting. Rachel never wavered in her belief in the future. Rachel is really great. I admire this kind of character very much. Although they are weak, they will work hard for the people and beliefs in their hearts. To be honest, when I saw the sentence after Rachel, "You killed... Tom Riddle." I thought that maybe Rachel had never regarded Riddle and Voldemort as the same person. I really cried when I saw the extra, especially the ending. Author, I love you! Thank you for letting me see the love and hatred between Rachel and Riddle, and for letting me see such a distinct and wonderful character. In summary, very good

How should I put it? This book is neither long nor short. When I first read it, it was very awkward and felt a bit OOC? Feelings too fast? Is the writing a little childish? But after reading the entire book, I realized that these are indeed true. But I cried all the time when Rachel died, until the end and the extra chapter, [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] The extra is very satisfying This book is overall very good, with lots of conflicts and emotional lines, and it's really detailed and well-written.

Nice! Tom's character is not OOC at all, but he can feel his love for the heroine. He is deformed but in line with the character. The heroine dares to love and hate, and is determined. She does not favor Tom because of personal emotions. At the same time, the heroine's grief after Voldemort's death is also written, which is sweet and sad.

To be honest, it is super beautiful and non-stop. The author's writing is very good, especially the description of the scenes. Some scenes are mixed with such delicate emotions, which can interpret Tom and Rachel very well. From the resurrection of Rachel, my eyes have been watering. It feels like I am a bystander who has witnessed the whole process, and all the love and hate have gone through. It was so good that I couldn't stop what Voldemort said when he died. I burst into tears all of a sudden. Anyway, I thought it was very interesting, and the ending was actually quite good. The extra chapter is also another way, giving an ending that is all a dream.

The author's writing is very good. I don't know why the score is so low. This story was not that long, but it left a very deep impression on me. Unlike other fanfics I have seen, Tom will have a very smooth relationship with the heroine. Given his character, sometimes I think those Toms are a bit OOC. However, in the author of this book, although Tom Riddle's love is shallow, it is the best he can give. His love is like a vine growing from the rotten underground and has been entangled with Rachel, painful but unable to get rid of it. Although Rachel was somewhat attached to Tom in the early stage, the struggle between love and hate in the later stage made her characters more three-dimensional, including other characters written by the author like Joe and Abu, who are all flesh and blood. All in all, I really like this work, and I hope the author can stick with it✊

The author's writing style is really great [Sending my heart] The character of Tom Riddle is very consistent with the original work, not OOC at all. I like Rachel very much, but the ending is really sad [crying]

I stayed up late and spent four hours reading this book. It is in the top 3 Voldemort fanfics I have read. The author's writing is very touching, and it can be seen that the author is very careful in the characterization of the characters, and the supporting characters also have distinct personalities. Abu, who could only bury his childhood crush in his heart for the sake of his family, and Joe, who had been protecting Rachel after her death. The image of the heroine Rachel is also very plump, a little girl who dares to love and hate. She hates Voldemort for killing everyone she loves, but she can't forget the time she spent with Tom Riddle. When I saw the ending line where Voldemort said love, I felt like I couldn't control my tears. They had loved but never loved each other, so that's probably it. Voldemort initially regarded Rachel as his own and wanted to take her away from all the people close to him and only rely on him to live. I wonder if he regretted it after Rachel died? He didn't fall in love until after his death. It turned out that I fell in love with her, Rachel, my love. The extra story is sweet. They live happily together in the parallel world. They both had a dream for seventy years, but it was just a dream. The weather in London is sunny, but is it still drizzling in your world?

This is the one I read in my HP about Riddle without OOC. I also like the character of the female protagonist very much. Tom is totally a dank male ghost. The last sentence "You killed Tom Riddle" really made me cry. Overall, it's a good review. I'm going to review your other two books🫰🏻 (*≧▽≦)

I really... Can't forget this book. I added this book to my bookshelf a long time ago. I remember it was still being serialized at the time. I looked for Tom's books everywhere on Tomato, but without exception, none of them suited my taste (maybe because I was too picky). I was also watching Rachel kissing Tom on top of the astronomy tower. It was really Yes, every time I look at this cover, I can't think of the plot (I have this problem. I originally wanted to watch it again, but when I watched it again, I forgot all the previous plots), but as soon as I saw the word "Rachel", I can immediately think of the previous plot. The way our little Rachel clings to Tom in the front is really cute! ! ! ! ! Anyway, I had a very deep impression of this book. It was really good. When I first read it, I thought, "Rachel is so love-minded, I can't stand it." But as the plot progressed, Tom put the Gaunt ring on her and cast a forgetting spell. The moment Rachel said "I hate you," I really realized that she was just a deluded girl. She originally had a warm life, but because of Tom, she stopped and stayed with his warmth, a hug, and a "promise." As for Tom, he always seemed to "enjoy" Rachel's love. He didn't believe in love and thought love was his weakness. He didn't allow himself to have weaknesses. All of this was him proving, "Look! I will never have a weakness, not even you, Rachel." But in the midst of Rachel's "betrayals" and "lies" again and again, looking at the face and those blue eyes so close to her, she couldn't say the curse. It is said that the last thing that disappears after death is hearing, so until the end, Rachel said to him next to his body, "You always ask me... Why I hate you so much." When she said, "You killed my lover, Tom Riddle." What were you thinking about, Tom? Yes, he killed everything she loved, including him, Tom Riddle. The Tom who would hug Rachel on the astronomy tower, who would comfort Rachel gently, who would pull Rachel back when she was in trouble, you killed him, killed the him she "loved". "My love." Tom finally admitted that he "loved" her until his death. This story is still circulating in Europe. Thoughts drift back to those days "If you leave the one you love because of your own mistakes, it will rain all the time in his world." "Tom, if we were separated, wouldn't your world be filled with heavy rain every day?" "What nonsense are you talking about, silly girl. We will not separate, and you will not leave me." At that time, he "loved" her, yes. In the boring school days, in the depressing orphanage, Rachel was his light, his "lover", and his "only love". Just like that sentence: Love will never disappear, it will always be here with us (referring to the heart). "Why do you look... A little unhappy?" "Little girl, why do you look so sad?" Two paintings, two people, the same memories, similar words, carry their "love" for each other. (I really like these two sentences!!! (⌇ຶД⌇ຶ)) —— Really, it made me burst into tears. Author, please return my tears (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)! ! ! ! ! Tom, just admit it, you have been attracted to little Rachel for a long time! Our little girl! ! ! (These are my thoughts for now, I will comment more later! I hope the author will take a look at me!!!) It is recommended to listen to the stars in the sun and watch, "You smile and don't answer, little girl, don't be stupid", isn't it Tom and Rachel? Neither party has given up, and "the future has no end." But they have no future. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry]

This book is a bit sadistic, but it fits my imagination of Riddle (Love and Hate Eternal) "The elegant and charming bastard", an impeccable top student in the eyes of his classmates and teachers. He is elegant, charming, selfish and good at disguise. He longs for immortality and power, and it is his destiny to go astray. I don't think this is bad, it's due to his character and the environment in which he grew up. I don't like the ending where he wakes up because of love, gives up his ambition and is redeemed. His darkness and destruction are due to his core, and failure is the end of the dark road. Of course, it's okay if it's a side story. After all, readers always want something sweet.

After two nights of chasing it, I can't say enough about my wife's portrayal and control of the character! Whether it's Tom or all the original characters, just through the clever arrangement of some events and the description of the character's behavior and psychology, very vivid images appear on the page (for example, the image of Rachel as an adolescent girl, although she is not my favorite type of heroine, but such a portrayal is very real and lovable) and the image of Joe's very gentle brother, Abu, etc., Each character is particularly vivid! I feel like my wife is really good at this [top post] I just think the ending is a little sloppy. It's not that I don't like torture (many of my favorite works are BE but they are very impressive), but I feel that this book is a bit forced to be BE in order to fit in with the original work👉👈 I'm not criticizing you, the author! I really think that with your ability, you can break away from the limitations of the original work and write a better and more complete ending (it doesn't have to be HE but the logic can be smoother) For example, was Rachel's death due to the incompatibility between the soul and the world caused by time travel? That is not a problem that Tom can solve in the first place, and if it is a time traveler, then it would be a bit strange for Joe to view Rachel this way out of love for his biological sister. Moreover, he was resurrected and seamlessly participated in the story fifty years later, which made it a little uncomfortable to read. However, this is an individual problem. I just feel that the later plot was handled a bit hastily, but the flaws cannot be concealed~ All in all, I still like this book very much! I have read all three of my wife's books. They are among the top HP fan books I have read. They are very worth reading! Thank you to my wife for producing such a good work [Send heartfelt message]

The character design is really solid, each character has its own unique charm, and even the small details are very impressive, and it feels like a real thing~ The plot is amazing, the rhythm is relaxed and relaxed, and the foreshadowing is clever and clever. Every time I watch it, I can't help but feel heart-broken and moved, and I am completely drawn into it! The author must keep working hard, don't be tired or idle, one day it will become a big hit!

Immortal product, definitely an immortal product, hates the sea and loves heaven, does not have an OOC feeling. Voldemort is written very vividly, pursuing immortality, paranoid and twisted, the heroine is perseverant and brave. Voldemort and the heroine are be, but Tom Riddle and the heroine are he

God! I really don't know what words to use to describe it. I feel so deeply that I can't even describe it in a thousand words. The Tao is indescribable, there is warmth, there is desolation, there is suddenness, there is confusion, there is happiness, there is melancholy, there is perfection, there is separation, there is love, there is hatred, there is loss, it is true or it is illusion. It can only be said that the extras are not the main story after all, and the destined regret is never a failure... And the completion is the greatest invention of the century. In addition, because my own life is unsatisfactory and a mess, I like to see other people's happy and healthy lives to comfort myself. So I often choose to read cool, sweet, and rarely cruel ones. But it is often the abuse articles that pull me back from my ideal utopia, give me a loud slap in the face, and face reality. "Novel is often fictional but has the shadow of life." When I was swinging between the three options of sobriety, sinking, and depravity, there was a bell that alerted people's hearts, stirring for a long time, rationally balancing the emotional scale, not forgetting the original intention, and living up to my youth.

The author's writing is really delicate, and Tom is not OOC at all. Tom can't let go of his rights, and he can't let go of Rachel. It's really beautiful! Recommended! And it's sweet, sweet, very sweet!

It's so good to read. I just finished one chapter and still want to read the next one. This book is different from other fanfiction books I've read. The characters fit very well and it's not OOC at all. My mood was ups and downs. The ending is be. Fortunately, the extra chapter makes up for the regret [Sending Hearts]

The writing is very good and the pace is tight. Especially every chapter after Rachel's resurrection made me cry silently. I can really feel the pain in Rachel's heart. Tom hated him so much after he turned into Voldemort, but when he said my love when he died, I felt that everything was relieved...😭