(Female Zunwen) + (Multiple women) + (Slightly yandere) + (Semi-invincible) When Koba felt regretful that Uchiha Madara left the village without a clan member following him, he was directly punched to death by Hashirama Bokuto! When I came to Bentie, I got Uchiha Madara, so I thought that I could defeat all the invincible opponents in the world with my ability and strength, but later I found myself in the world of Bentie where women were superior to men. Not only was I unable to defeat him, but I was severely humiliated and squeezed out by them.
Reader comments
The plot is very strange, and I feel like the connection isn't quite right. I have read Chapter 10 so far, and I feel like the description of the scene is pretty good. But the protagonist's psychological activities are a bit too much. There is no essence of calm thinking, it just feels too out of touch and active. Well, it feels very much like a contemporary college student. It's like the way brothers get along with each other, all kinds of shit, but because it's out there, it's a little more harmonious. It's just that the connection is too abrupt. The pace is also a bit too fast.
Is it too weak to write for the Uchiha class? It's all because of everything in my peak class. Just describe it like this. I feel like the end valley class will be able to strangle the protagonist with one hand when it comes.
The plot is very strange, and I feel like the connection isn't quite right. I have read Chapter 10 so far, and I feel like the description of the scene is pretty good. But the protagonist's psychological activities are a bit too much. There is no essence of calm thinking, it just feels too out of touch and active. Well, it feels very much like a contemporary college student. It's like the way brothers get along with each other, all kinds of shit, but because it's out there, it's a little more harmonious. It's just that the connection is too abrupt. The pace is also a bit too fast.
Is it too weak to write for the Uchiha class? It's all because of everything in my peak class. Just describe it like this. I feel like the end valley class will be able to strangle the protagonist with one hand when it comes.