Honkai: Star Rail in a Matriarchal World: I Gained Uchiha Madara's Peak Strength

The plot is very strange, and I feel like the connection isn't quite right. I have read Chapter 10 so far, and I feel like the description of the scene is pretty good. But the protagonist's psychological activities are a bit too much. There is no essence of calm thinking, it just feels too out of touch and active. Well, it feels very much like a contemporary college student. It's like the way brothers get along with each other, all kinds of shit, but because it's out there, it's a little more harmonious. It's just that the connection is too abrupt. The pace is also a bit too fast.

Is it too weak to write for the Uchiha class? It's all because of everything in my peak class. Just describe it like this. I feel like the end valley class will be able to strangle the protagonist with one hand when it comes.