The Ultimate High School Girl in the Ultra World

It's rare that I can still read a book without ratings. Taking advantage of the lack of reviews, I'll give some reference to the following readers and express my thoughts. In my opinion, this is undoubtedly a good book. Compared with other humanities, this book is more of a tokusatsu drama, where daily life is interspersed with events, and relaxation and heaviness are intertwined. From the perspective of a tokusatsu drama, the protagonist is more similar to the Deputy Ultraman, mainly Ultraman Omega, but the narrative perspective is on the protagonist's side. From the setting point of view, the protagonist is more similar to Deus Ex Machina. As of Chapter 194, the improvement of strength is more reflected in mastering more skills and techniques, rather than simply improving numerical values. The improvement of main Ao's strength is the same as that of X, by unlocking different armors. In terms of plot, more attention is paid to details, including the psychological changes of the characters, scene details and monster details (I don't know if the monsters that appear are original, but at least they are not in Ultra). At the same time, the author's writing style is very good, and he can well create an atmosphere or atmosphere (I can't express it, or is it a feeling?) For example, my favorite part of Florante, from the beginning to the end to the final behind-the-scenes chapter, the writing is smooth, and it well integrates the actions of the three parties of Ultraman, humans and monsters. At the same time, the narrative perspectives are also diverse. For example, Florante is written from a human perspective. Finally, there is a bit of personal information mixed in, that is, I hope that subsequent readers can learn the "author's perspective" instead of looking at it from the reader's perspective. For example, some people think that the scene about Duo Duo is a poisonous point. They think that the protagonist is so strong, why does he only appear after Duo Duo is about to die? From the author's perspective, this is an inevitable fact. Because the author just wants the protagonist to be a witness to the process of Duoduo gradually changing from a living thing to a machine, so as to show or elicit some plots. So, it's not that the protagonist can only appear after the fact every time; So if you want to argue with the author about the plot, first think about the issue from the author's perspective, so that you and the author can discuss it in the same situation and achieve results. Rather than the author thinking, "Are you worthy of teaching me how to write a book?", The reader thinks, "What are you writing about..." ([Laughter]) Of course, the author's outline must be respected, after all, this is her book. In my opinion, the essence of giving opinions is the rational expression of details without changing the plot. Finally, I have a few small comments. The protagonist met Duoduo for the second time and marked her after the treatment. This was easily misleading. It makes people subconsciously think that the next time she encounters danger, the protagonist will definitely arrive (this plot is quite depressing and the reader will subconsciously expect something good), but in fact it is not the case. From a later perspective, this foreshadowing was intended to allow the protagonist to recognize Duoduo, who is completely mechanized. Therefore, I think it could be changed to the fact that the protagonist is recognized through the energy left after treatment. (Just an opinion)

This is the first time I watched a female Ultraman on Tomato, and it was a Chinese high school student who transformed into Ultraman. Fjöll is really strong and gives people a sense of security every time she appears. The plot is very smoothly linked to the plot of Ultraman Omega, and many of the original plots are better than the original plots [Blow Kiss]

First of all, I haven't written a review for so long. I just forgot. Then I want to praise the author. The writing feels like watching a tokusatsu drama. Moreover, the heroine is an Ultraman who lives in a flower garden. She only flies away to live a small life because of fighting monsters and getting to know Omega and others. However, even if an underage girl becomes Ultraman, she cannot fall in love [laughing] For the time being, there is still no cp direction. The content is more logical. It is not evil about humans, but the female protagonist is more powerful than Omega when she fights monsters.

Very nice Ultra fanfic! ! ! The action description is very enjoyable, and I feel again that Fjöll is too supermodel hahaha The main plot is also described in a very graphic way, and the tokusatsu flavor is quite strong. Come on, madam! ! ! If nothing else happens, I will chase you until the end [blowing kiss]

It's tied, I like it🥰, the writing and drama are both good, it's great to watch👍

Good looking, female Ultraman

It's good to watch, and the plot is interesting.

It's a pretty good novel about Ultraman.

It's very interesting. Will the protagonist join other Ultraman series?

Nice! ! ! Leave a name before the fire

The story is very interesting and beautiful

Fellow Omega, very unique [blowing kiss]

Baozi, I'm waiting for your next book [shy]

Not bad, the characters are well described 👍

The number of times is good, but Omega is really that good

It looks good, the writing is also good, and I actually brought the latest Omega with me, it's ok!

Nice! It feels much better than the original!

Very good. I found a nice Ultraman book after a long time [Love]

I like the fanfic very much, the data and mechanics are very good.

It's very beautiful. I hope the author can continue to work hard. Come on!