Regent*********

Give some encouragement to new authors ~ In fact, the storyline is quite good, but the expression could be a little better. The first dozen or so chapters gave me the feeling that they were character dialogues, which promoted the development of the story. There was not much action description, environment description, demeanor description, but not much psychological description, which was incoherent. It's like watching a drama, connecting the content of the article through language. Now that I have read Chapter 22, I feel that it has improved, and I am looking forward to the following content [Sending my heart] I still have some complaints in my heart, Ling Xi is so good, why is it like this, why is it like this! [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] His martial arts skills are completely useless, and he can only rely on decoctions for the rest of his life. He can no longer ride a horse or whip a whip to his heart's content, or dance a sword to his heart's content [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] Couldn't his achievements be exchanged for his health? [Crying][Crying][Crying] He can save everyone in the world, why can no one save him? The days and nights from now on will be spent in pain [crying] [crying] [crying] Why? Why! Even if it's just to regain health, just to return to normal human health, is that even a luxury? [Crying][Crying][Crying] I'm so sad [crying] [crying] [crying] Ling Xi, you are in too much pain [crying] [crying] [crying] You have suffered too many injuries, and in the end you had to break all your bones and reshape them [crying] [crying] [crying] Why is it like this! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry] I thought about it, but I still can't let it go. Yun Lingxi's altruism is so strong that she almost sacrifices herself [crying] [crying] [crying] Ling Xi, why is this happening [crying] [crying] [crying] Ling Xi, I have selfish motives. I still love you more than all the sentient beings in the book [crying][crying][crying]

After reading it, I personally feel that the writing is very good, but I feel that the traffic is relatively poor. Not many people have written book reviews, but as long as the author is great, he will reply! I feel it is particularly suitable for Kang Yikang, highly recommended! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

In the author's writing, each character slowly unfolds like a vivid picture scroll, and their emotions and personalities are vividly depicted. In the future, apricot blossoms will rain every year, and they will be there every year. I wish you peace every year, and peace in this prosperous age.

I like this book very much. It's really well written. It's great (//∇//). It makes you feel like you can see the pictures in the book when you close your eyes. It's amazing. I hope everyone can read this book. I really don't love it too much.

The author's writing style is very good and the content is very interesting. The author must not stop updating. .

The writing is very good. From the text, we can see the pride and elegance of ancient scholars, the heroism and disregard for death of military generals, and of course the innocence of a group of people.

It feels like a good-looking two-strong show. I like this kind of dual-power type. The writing style feels like writing a novel, which is very strange. I was a little tired after watching it, but the plot is okay.