I Cultivated Immortality in the Mortal World, Only to Get Blocked by Heaven

In this novel, we can see the shadows of those classic martial arts novels from the past. Some people in the comments said that the novel is similar to the story text of Yan Yun. This also reflects that the author is very strong in writing and can compare with the game story editing of a major company. It is worth recommending, please support the author [send heart][send heart][send heart]

I'm not bragging. Everyone who reads this book has a majestic appearance, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, a jade tree facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient, reaching the top, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, and deafening. Hair, the candle illuminates the world, you can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, the beauty is everywhere, the eagle looks at the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps, the majestic figure, the high house builds the benevolence and morality, the romantic position is selfless, looks like Pan An, is more talented than Song Yu, a pear tree weighs the begonia, You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtues, you have a pure heart, you have high mountains and beautiful scenery, you have great feelings, you have great virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a good sense of wisdom, you have a green heart, you have a green heart, and you have Dong Hanlan. , A man of lofty ideals and a benevolent man, the white crane in the clouds is in his prime, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, unrivaled, a man with a crane in Guilin, one of a kind, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a mountain piece of jade that is unparalleled.

It keeps me chasing to the end. The language is coherent and natural, and it's not boring. It's nice to be able to understand the plot when I know it. But sometimes the span is a bit too big. It feels like a plot time travel for me because of the speed of my eyes. I'm looking forward to the next sessions of cultivating immortals and professional experience. The protagonist's strength is divided into recommended standards. I can't fully understand it just by numerical values ​​and rankings. I also wish the author to write better!

It's okay, although the pace may be slow, the author has a lot of words per chapter. Well, the main character may indeed be making things right, but I don't think it's funny, there's nothing funny about it. I hope the organization can improve it, or simply stop it. It seems a bit embarrassing.

I feel that the author is very educated, the plot is quite interesting, and there is humor in his words. The more you read, the more exciting it becomes. The plot development is very interesting. I hope the author will continue to update it!

The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the storyline is also very novel. It really gives people a feeling of "I don't want to be in the world, but the world is my legend." The two chapters a day are not bad. I hope the author can stabilize the three chapters, work hard on the four chapters, move towards the five chapters, rush to the six chapters, break out into the seven chapters, and write eight or ninety chapters. [Angry][angry]

It looks good. I love watching it. Just don't stop. From my personal perspective (only over 3,000 hours of reading out of more than 7,000 books), it is a relatively successful longevity novel, at least with very few bloody plots.

The writing is very good, unexpectedly good, I like it

The content, plot, and language are very interesting. It's a rare good book in Tomato that you can read. Come on, author, keep updating Not bad. . .

Not bad, but a little bit short and not enough to watch.