The Lord and the King Were Once Refugees

It looks okay, but the golden finger is not used properly. So far, in Chapter 76, only a bear and a falcon have been conquered, and the horses that have been conquered have not been conquered with the golden finger.

I have read Chapter 54, which seems pretty good so far. I have a few suggestions. I hope the author can take it seriously. Thank you. After the protagonist successfully establishes a territory, what is the name of the noble and how do the descendants develop? The most important thing is that the nobles have a badge or a totem. There is also an animal that the protagonist can develop the water system, such as a crocodile or something. The descendants can also try to raise animals like the protagonist, but if there is no gold finger for the protagonist, they may need to be cultivated from an early age. There is no clear stipulation on the protagonist's gold finger, the number of contracts, etc. Then I saw Chapter 54 and did I see a clear division of levels? I only knew about bronze, silver, and gold. What follows is Chaofan's plan. Only knights? Or is there a wizard part? [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking] Overall, I am still looking forward to the subsequent development of the plot.

Very well written, I love reading it! It's not a brainless novel, it's slow to warm up, and the protagonist doesn't feel like Long Aotian or Silly Baitian. I don't feel that the battle is overwhelming in the early stage. I just think that the author writes this way, it is a long-term flow, and he should be able to write a long novel. [Sneaky laugh] Contracted Warcraft are also contracted in stages, not a large group at the beginning, but very step-by-step. After all, in today's Western fantasy novels, the golden finger is opened too much, and the reading is like a running account. I hope the author can write well and not forget his original intention. Come on! ! ! I'm optimistic about you~ The reason for the low early score is because the book has just been published and there is no traffic and no book reviews, so the score is not high. If you write well and have traffic and book reviews, the score will always go up. Come on! ! ! !

It's quite good to watch, but there are too few controlling beasts. Although Upa is very cute, it's still a bit less exciting. The overall plot is still very reasonable and worth recommending. ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧

Not bad, we got things going. Leo met a 30-year-old young woman online. We have been chatting very well for more than half a year. Today she asked to meet. I hesitated. I said you have a family and it didn't feel good, but she said it was okay and we were just ordinary friends. So I agreed and asked her for a photo. She looked pretty and divorced. My city is not far away. We made an appointment to meet at a milk tea shop. We didn't choose to meet somewhere else for fear of meeting an acquaintance. I arrived first that day because she had to drive for several hours. While waiting, I looked at the photos and thought it was another "car rollover scene." Most mobile phones have beauty functions, but when she got out of that Mercedes-Benz, I recognized her at a glance. I'm much prettier than in the photo, and I'm my type. She also recognized me. She didn't know what to say. In order to break the awkwardness, she suggested hugging me. I said yes. She smelled very good. I jumped up and sat in the milk tea shop for a while. We went to eat, but she basically didn't eat much. The whole process was spent peeling shrimps and picking fish bones for me. After dinner, she walked out of the restaurant and held my hand. I didn't break away. She said she would take me home, and I said I would take a taxi back. When I got home, I found that she had put a note in her bag and said: Update ten chapters to unlock the subsequent plot.

It's really good. The writing in the early stage was very smooth and bland. It has the feeling of being very quiet in the white description. It would be better if there were more sisters about the beast. There is a horse or a dog. The bronze-level author may have forgotten, but the rest is actually quite good. I have a brain but not Long Aotian, but I don't know why the White Knights in the last few pictures feel abnormal.

The writing is very good, keep up the good work

It's okay, except that the main character is a little immature. Why do I keep coming back the more I write, I can't bear the immaturity in the past, after all, the protagonist is just starting out. I'll just come up with it later, I don't want to say more, so let's leave it at that.

It's okay. I can't say it's great, but it's not bad. It would be more interesting if the Western Fantasy World incorporated more fantasy elements, such as dragons, elves, and Pegasus. I gave it 5 stars because I'm afraid it will be buried. I hope the author works hard to create.

It looks great. I wonder if Goldfinger could do it more carefully.

It's okay to have so many chapters, it's not too cheating, and it maintains the power system. I hope that the rhythm will be maintained in the subsequent chapters.

Come on, author, when can we see the protagonist's contract with the dragon [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

I still prefer this type, it's pretty good-looking The latest plot is a failure, there is no emotional drama, she is nothing but fish on the chopping board [face covering] All kinds of skills and techniques can be slowly dug out on the protagonist's territory [laughing awkwardly] I thought the author would make the protagonist's marriage more valuable, although it is somewhat valuable, but it did not meet expectations [palming face] The disadvantages are mostly the displeasure of the empire and the hostility of various nobles, but the advantage is that they can be dug out slowly on the protagonist's territory [face covering] The biggest bargaining chip is handed over like this [laughing awkwardly]

It feels good, [Thinking][Thinking] Although the plot setting is not very novel, but the overall look and feel is okay, please work hard, author[Thinking][Thinking]

It's good to read. Keep up the good work, author.

The subject matter is novel and very interesting.

Good looking. Good looking. Come on, author! [Like][Like][Like][Like]

I really like this kind of writing [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Personally I think it's good, it looks better in the later stages.

It's so beautiful, but it only gets such a low rating? In my opinion, at least 8.5 And above are very suitable for me [laughs]

It's a good book but not popular, and it also has pictures. It's a western fantasy plot that made me feel very comfortable.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Not bad. Come on, author.

Good-looking, good-looking, good

Not too poisonous, not too violent.

Good books buried under ratings

It's well written. It would be great if there was a practice method.

A relatively good book about animal training, but the rating is low.

There is no army of alien beasts as imagined, a classic western fantasy

The pace is relatively slow, there are many details but some are too cumbersome, overall it is okay, not many bad points, I think it will give it a score of 7.5 Or above