[Harry Potter fanfic + Voldemort x original heroine + yandere paranoia + redemption]
Flora, who has an eternal appearance, brings the orphan Tom back to Venus Manor, which is like a fairyland.
It was she who built a shelter for him with her eternal tenderness - a breakfast filled with sunshine, the whisper of bedtime stories, the joy of the amusement park, the freedom of riding waves on the seaside, the anticipation under birthday candlelight, tolerance when making mistakes, and the peace of mind of being firmly guarded.
Those carefree things that should belong to children, those fragments of play, trust and being loved, were pieced together by her one by one, becoming the only light in Tom's gloomy life.
From resistance to dependence, from vigilance to sinking, he gradually transformed in the "normal childhood" she gave him, and this bond that started as a shelter will eventually grow into a deeper and more paranoid attachment over time.
She is his moonlight and the only salvation and destination in his life.
Reader comments
What surprised me was the author's writing style. It was very delicate and I liked it very much. It was very enjoyable to read. I have read so many online articles and it was really good.
Although it is a bit slow-paced, it allows readers to experience the changes in this complex individual, which is very shocking.
My self-feeling is that the author focuses on using some environmental descriptions to correspond to Riddell's state. At first glance, it looks pretty good, but you must pay attention to the amount. Too many environmental descriptions will make people feel a little uncomfortable, but it's okay. I mean when describing the atmosphere in the manor. Sometimes maybe it can be the other way around... Using happy scenes to complement sadness? (Of course, it's just an analogy, just a personal opinion. The author can just write according to his own ideas and does not force it. The important thing is that the writing method matches the plot)
Riddle's fragility is a bit hard for me to imagine? It should be described like this. Maybe it makes me feel that it is a little different from the original work, but it is very good to use his vulnerability and the vulnerability deep in his heart to show Flora's special position in his heart.
The overall feeling is very good, I hope the author will update it soon😘Look forward to it🌹
Big boost for the author, it's super, super, super, super good-looking [shy]
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I also like a lot of other books [][][]
The author thinks the story line is too long. Tom is not in school yet. I think Tom is too squishy! [Hold face] Tom, hurry up and become independent. The story line is too long. The heroine has become Tom's mother. Although raising children is fun, you have to pay attention to the focus. [Hold face]
Very well written! ! ! Why is no one watching? I have always wanted to find a CP like Riddle! !
What surprised me was the author's writing style. It was very delicate and I liked it very much. It was very enjoyable to read. I have read so many online articles and it was really good. Although it is a bit slow-paced, it allows readers to experience the changes in this complex individual, which is very shocking. My self-feeling is that the author focuses on using some environmental descriptions to correspond to Riddell's state. At first glance, it looks pretty good, but you must pay attention to the amount. Too many environmental descriptions will make people feel a little uncomfortable, but it's okay. I mean when describing the atmosphere in the manor. Sometimes maybe it can be the other way around... Using happy scenes to complement sadness? (Of course, it's just an analogy, just a personal opinion. The author can just write according to his own ideas and does not force it. The important thing is that the writing method matches the plot) Riddle's fragility is a bit hard for me to imagine? It should be described like this. Maybe it makes me feel that it is a little different from the original work, but it is very good to use his vulnerability and the vulnerability deep in his heart to show Flora's special position in his heart. The overall feeling is very good, I hope the author will update it soon😘Look forward to it🌹
Big boost for the author, it's super, super, super, super good-looking [shy] Like like like like like like like like like like I also like a lot of other books [][][] The author thinks the story line is too long. Tom is not in school yet. I think Tom is too squishy! [Hold face] Tom, hurry up and become independent. The story line is too long. The heroine has become Tom's mother. Although raising children is fun, you have to pay attention to the focus. [Hold face]
Very well written! ! ! Why is no one watching? I have always wanted to find a CP like Riddle! !
The writing is superb! Very delicate!
The writing is very good, thank you!