HP Malfoy's Law of Pampering

From the first perspective of the heroine, the writing style is really gentle, but with a kind of sadness and an imperceptible sensitivity. In short, it is still very interesting. The author will give me more updates [please give more updates]

So pretty! Boss! I want to follow you! The writing is very delicate and feels great! "Looking for evidence of her love for me in a dead man's room, like a beggar picking up scraps in the ruins." This sentence makes me heartbroken💔

The writing style is very delicate. In the chapters I have read so far, there is always a touch of sadness lingering, which makes my heart feel a little cold. This is a style of writing that I like very much. This kind of narrative style is rare in HP. Come on, author, I will finish it. Book lovers who like "The Palace Willow" or "The Burial of Florian" may not like this book very much, but they won't hate it either. I look forward to the follow-up. It's a little girl's diary, and it's a bit high-end. If it wasn't fan fiction, I think it would be publishable. Please update soon, author baby

This novel is the one that impressed me the most among all the HP books I have read. The dragons in other novels all need the protection of the heroine and highlight the characteristics of the heroine. In this novel, dragon and Laila are protecting each other. What impressed me most is that the heroine is very timid. When she was not growing up, she faced Ron with a wand because she was afraid that dragon would be injured. They are each other's salvation, no one is better than the other, they achieve each other, they are each other's protagonists, the author writes it well [crying]

A sour and sweet story, pure love and pure sentiment. The introduction is not very well written and does not capture the excitement of the main text. It's great, the heroine has her own thoughts and doesn't just rely on others. Childhood sweethearts. The author's writing is excellent and detailed. Crying is an expression of emotion. Her life is very painful, so tears will wash away the pain for her. The heroine is not strong in the early stage, but she will be better in the later stage. The writing is very sweet, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists will not make people feel uncomfortable or offensive. The heroine lives toward death.

Very delicate writing style. As we all know, as long as the writing style is good, all shortcomings can be covered up, but I still feel sorry for my sister and it's painful. This is why I can accept that in the middle period, there will be a little ambiguity with others and a little bit of plot. Of course, he won't have any role in the later stage, so you can eat it

This book gives me a sour and sweet feeling. Every character written by the author makes me feel very distinct. The writing is delicate, sad and warm, like the drizzle of spring. This book is really good.

The growing pains of the heroine and Draco are really well written. In safe times, we support each other and become better selves. In dangerous moments, we cling to each other and find our own haven and safe house in each other.

It's really super good-looking. I feel that this book is really well written. Her father's indifference, mother's neglect, her loneliness and helplessness form an obvious contrast with her doting brother. It was Draco who gave her confidence again and again in his own little tsundere way, and he will be in her. When he was wronged, he told her that she would always have a room in the Malfoy house. Even if he found out that she was studying the evil Niruwen, he would still choose her... Anyway, it was really beautiful and the depictions were very realistic. It was not just an illusory love, but a real disaster, whether it was a suffocating family. , Or the oppression of The Return of the Dark Lord, are all described very realistically, giving people a sense of immersion and immersion, and the writing is particularly good, so go for it! (ง•̀_•́)ง

The author's writing is really good, what should I say? I've seen HP from many perspectives, but this one really stood out to me. It's like Si Tiao's thoughts are reflected in the heroine. "I know it's a difficult road for me to walk, but as long as I have his approval, it will be fine." They seemed to be walking in the dark to do bright things, "I don't care about other people's opinions, I only care about you, even if they don't understand me." I really cried to death. The young master has his arrogance, but how could a child who grew up in love not be kind? This really fulfills my imagination of Draco

What a great book! This book is a perfect blend of elements I like and dislike, and the author perfectly captured the degree I wanted. I like that the heroine relies on Draco and obeys Draco, but she doesn't want to be a complete subordinate. This heroine obeys but has her own ideas. She is an independent person who sometimes resists, but generally relies on him. She loves him, but she also has her own thoughts, selfishness, and emotional problems. The progress of the relationship between the two people and the way they get along also change step by step as the story progresses. It's simply amazing. I'm a very picky person. There really aren't many works that satisfy me, let alone very few that I can read from beginning to end. I really like this book. In my opinion, this book is one of the best among the fanfics I've read. When I read it, I paired it with that one. Chen Jingqing's "Heart of All Hope" matches the overall style of the book very well. It is pure music without lyrics.

Draco in it is not OOC at all. He is the sharp-tongued young master in the original book. Although he looks fierce on the surface, he actually loves the baby girl to death. His ears turn red when he flirts with her. The heroine is also a little bitter melon T∧T. Although she is from the Selwyn family, she has not been loved by her parents since she was a child. She is only used as a bargaining chip by her father. It is Draco who silently protects the baby girl every time. He relies on being a Malfoy to support the baby girl. The baby girl is not weak and very motivated. I've always wanted to become stronger and prove myself. This novel is quite good. It's sad where it should be sad and sweet where it should be sweet. I recommend everyone to read it.

It's very interesting... The author's emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the first-person sense of substitution is stronger, making people feel like they are Selwyn in it. Both he and be are touching. The ending of he is very sweet. Two little bitter gourds who are in love and have experienced various hardships are finally together. The ending of be is also very well written, not Regardless of whether it is Selwyn or Draco, they all have their own responsibilities to shoulder. In the ending of be, Selwyn traveled to various places, but the one he couldn't let go of the most was Draco. Draco also had to shoulder the heavy responsibility of being the future head of the Malfoy family, but he also cared about Selwyn in his heart, but there was already a gap between the two that could not be crossed. It may be a little confusing, but these are some of my thoughts after reading this book~... In short, it is very interesting! !

It's super, super good-looking, and the heroine's growth path is very heartbreaking. Her parents' neglect of her led to her low self-esteem and sensitive character. The heroine doesn't know everything, she doesn't have a perfect character, and her spells are also bad. She is growing up slowly. She is too conceited and uses bad spells. She still cannot break through the psychological barrier (maybe). Therefore, he gave up the magic spell and focused on the more talented runes. Her mood in learning runes also began to change, from being interested in it at the beginning to wanting to gain power in order to protect the things she cherished. The heroine is really good. She didn't forcefully change Draco's pure-blood philosophy, but she was completely biased toward him. She likes Draco, so she hopes to be loved by his family, and strives to become stronger to change Lucius's view of her. I hope that the heroine will get her wish, someone will warm her and let her open her heart, and let happiness come to Laila.

This one is really beautiful. The pull between the male and female protagonists really touched my heart. The writing is very novel and very consistent with Slytherin. The hidden concern and the unspeakable love are so beautiful.

It's very interesting. First of all, I'm shocked when I read the latest chapter. Lyla's inner tug and forced choice. I believe her heart is tormented and painful. After all, she was such a timid girl, but she can choose to be strong for love. Just like Dumbledore said that love is the greatest magic, Lyla is really good. The author portrays Laila's sensitivity, low self-esteem and timidity in the early stage very well. This is why I was shocked when I saw Laila later. The author's writing style is very good. Recommended [Blow Kiss]

Nice! ! ! The author's writing style is particularly delicate, as if it were written by the heroine herself. All the characters are written without any derogatory or stereotyped influence. The good and bad points of all the characters are written very well. T T

Good-looking, Lyla ending, married to Draco, the heroine has a younger brother and a biological father C. C

Very nice to look at. The chase was completed non-stop at two o'clock in the morning. I felt so good after reading it in one sitting [laughing] [shy] This novel is really good. I think the author's writing style is just right. It's just in a state where I can empathize with it without being too literary. [I almost cried] The part where the heroine goes to find her real father to question her really made me feel a little uncomfortable. . The body was hard in the middle of the night. [Almost crying] There is also the heroine's attitude towards her younger brother. The only one who has not been harmed in this war should be her younger brother. . Great. Finally it's he. [Crying] I actually think this be or he is very normal and I completely understand it. Author, I approve of you! ! [Almost crying][crying]

You are funny and I like you! I like the ending of BE very much. I think it is a better ending. Unfortunately, the connection with the battle is not very good. It's like I was looking for someone just now, and suddenly everyone arrived on the main battlefield. It's weird. But the heroine really travels around the world. Even though they have many similarities, they are still two people. In the main text, when the heroine said that she wanted to travel around the world in the future, it was destined that she would not be a qualified Mrs. Malfoy, even if they fell in love. There is an insurmountable gap between status, status and ideal character. After a deep love, you still have the courage to choose the life you want. This is the ending I like. Maybe they won't stand in each other's future, but they once stood firmly in each other's lives.

To be honest, I am a fan of HP. I personally think the character of Xiaolong in this book fits the movie very well. He is an arrogant yet gentle little boy. The heroine's sincerity and deep attachment will always stand firmly in front of Xiaolong. Moreover, it is from the perspective of "I" as the heroine, and the whole text is more like a diary, which is the best memory in the heroine's memory.

It's really good to read. This book is not like other books where the heroine is very powerful and everything is good and perfect. Instead, it has shortcomings and is very real. The heroine is the abandoned daughter of the family owner and is not loved. It was Draco who pulled her up from the rainstorm. Two-way redemption, a very sour little sweet article, the author's writing style is really good!

This book is really, really good. Lyla slowly grows up to protect Draco, and Draco firmly chooses Lyla. Laila's character is not that of a virgin, but she is not unreasonable either. She has her own judgment, but she still stands firmly on Draco's side. Draco was arrogant and awkward, but later on Laila became bolder and would deliberately tease Draco. All in all it's quite healing. Not bloody. It's really good to go both ways. [Shy][shy]

The teacher really interprets the character of the heroine very vividly. Even I, who hate weakness, fell in love with her [Admiration], and the plot progressed normally without giving people a sense of escape that was inconsistent. Not a word was redundant, and every word served the work [Blowing Kiss] I really love you so much, author! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

I have read so many hp fanfics, and this article is really written in detail. It is not a traditional heroine or an article about traveling through time and knowing all the endings for the sake of redemption. It writes about the growth of two little bitter gourds, but the be line is too short. Super, super, super, watch for a longer bet.

It must be full marks. Full marks for the short story. Talk about the sadness. People who read it can feel like the most melancholy god. A feeling of regret. It looks perfect. Everything is ordinary. But only I know that the pain is always there. I have never forgotten it, but I must move forward. The feeling of being pushed by time and loved ones. I always feel that the heroine has not been completely healed. I hope that in the line of he, the life behind can be slowly healed by my brother and lover. The stamina is like boiling a baby in warm water. There is a sadness lingering around me. I don't know how to relieve it. There is no way. The little girl is so empathetic and can be so empathetic. After reading it, I feel an inexplicable obsession. I am almost suffocated by it. I don't know if you have watched Fruits Basket. I feel the same as the ending of this series. But it may be related to the fact that the little girl did not agree with this official match and was on the wrong CP. Hahaha, I won't tell you. Anyway, this book is very beautiful and very beautiful. The level of depression is comparable to a person having sex in a shopping mall and then finding out that there is no paper to wipe his skin. Yes, hahaha

A very nice fanfic, the author's writing style is also very good. I cried several times. I was moved by the tragic childhood of the heroine, and I felt sorry for their love [crying][crying][crying]

I just finished reading the latest chapter, and I can't wait to give it a 5-star review. If nothing else happens, this novel will become the first HP fanfic I've read (and probably the first one I've read). The writing is really beautiful. [Like][Like][Like][Send heart]

This is the first time I have read a novel. I stopped a few times in the middle, but I was always attracted to come back and finish it. It is so good, I still haven't finished it, and I don't want it to end at all. It's so painful for the two little ones. I hope the happy ending at the end will continue.

The teacher's writing style is super good. It brings out the character's personality suddenly. The pulling feeling inside is simply amazing. It's super beautiful. Come on, the writing style is super delicate and exquisite. [Adored]