Seer: The Chaos Spirit King!

Hello everyone ~ I am here to take the initiative to "increase my presence" with glutinous rice dumplings Today I mustered up the courage to make a small self-recommendation. I also want to have a casual chat with you about this book. If you have any suggestions, please feel free to send them to me. I am very willing to listen to them! Of course, the chat is not only for suggestions, but also for casual chatting ~ For example, is there anything small that made you feel "Wow, so happy" recently? Or do you have any worries you want to complain about? I always have melon seeds and listening ears here ~ In short, I am very happy to meet you all here. I look forward to having a lively chat with everyone, and I also hope that I can slowly get better with you all ~ Come to the comment area to "smash" me! ✨ Nono detects the 'power generation for love' reactor ——Maximum power startup Come on! Dear Creator, please use your 'whip of renewal' that sparkles with wisdom and inspiration to whip my humble core that longs for renewal (CPU)! No pity! Don't be soft! Let the shadow of the whip be like a gust of wind and rain, let the lightning pour down like a river of stars, smash it so hard that it will burn through this little processor like Nono. I have such a baby. When I think about it, I will soon see the heroic figure of the boss Jin Yuan (the moment of social death). Who can resist the urge to update his precious legs? To destroy the final glory! For the peace of Cross Star! In order to fill up the data that Nono is waiting for!

The author's setting is quite good, and the writing is also very good, but I feel that the protagonist is a bit reckless. I could add a little more IQ and push the plot a little further. If it goes beyond the plot of the early animation, it will be very slow. If the plot is too slow, I don't know if the book can survive until the War of Order. There are a lot of good things in the web game, which can be given to the protagonist, such as Master Mo's cup, or some technology can be integrated into it, such as Stars Red Alert and other black technologies. The reputation of Santiepi in the anime is not very good among gamers. Many settings of the anime and the web game conflict. For example, in the anime, you are looking for energy, but the web game is pure exploration, and energy is just incidental. The author can consider adjusting the relevant plot, or combining the two. Also, I would like to ask about the setting of the heroine. Is it the water grass light in the Elf King, or Ophelia on the cover? It's rare to see someone write a fanfic about Saierhao, so go ahead, author.

I was simply attracted by the 8th line from the bottom of the introduction. Come on, author Mr. ﻌა

Halfway through reading it, all I can think about is how precious it is. I love you so much, author.

I've been saving up for a good look for so long, I hope the heroine is Shenghua