After Failing at Life as a Laid-Back Starfleet Member, I Became a Genius Admiral's Disciple

Hello everyone, I am an author. Because this is my first time writing a novel on Tomato, the content may not be liked by everyone. If you have any opinions, you can put them forward in the comment area. Thank you.

It's still very good, but it feels a bit messy. I didn't grasp the degree of the world of immortality and interstellar, so it looks a bit messy, but overall it's still very good. I like it😊[Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]

It's not bad. I guess I'm a new author with only 80,000 words. Come on, come on, can you update more every day? I want to know the plot behind it, but I like less emotional drama and more plot.

It looks good. ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶зMeng Bao is so handsome. ٩(๑ᵒ̴̶̷Ո᷄ᗨᵒ̴̶̷͈᷅)و. This setting looks good. The sword fairy who loves drinking is good-looking ( *ˊᵕˋ)✩︎‧₊And the attack is also very strong. This interstellar article is very good-looking. I haven't seen this kind of article in a long time. Most of them are about cultivating immortals and having supernatural powers. This is good-looking ( ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤ ) The author writes quickly₍₍ ง(*Ӧ)ว ⁾⁾It's not enough at all, don't let this book go.

It's really, really beautiful. I like Jiuyi very much. Geniuses have their own arrogance and iron bones. Buried deep in the history of the old wine that first appeared in the world, the producer carefully captured the unique charm in an instant, and only those who can understand it will know its taste. I like Jiujianxian very much, and so does Qin Chao The emotional drama between the two of them is very exciting. Don't worry about chasing. Don't worry about chasing. If you can't chase, you will suffer. If you can't chase, you will be fooled.

It's good-looking, and you can feel the author's intention in each character😘. It would be even better if the author could release 100 chapters😏 Foreign persimmon, if you cut this book, I will cut you off😄

Very very beautiful! I hope everyone can read this book. The writing of Tomato is very good, the logic is clear, and the foreshadowing is also hidden between the lines. I am really impressed with this book. Come on, author, it is very, very, very, very beautiful. You must stick to it! It's really, really good-looking. If you read it patiently, you'll find that it's not enough.

So far, the setting looks good, I like it very much, but I think there are some loopholes in the logic. For example, when the protagonist is changing clothes, the attacker did not notice him, but still followed the protagonist. (Maybe I looked too fast and overlooked something. Anyone who knows can help me answer it.) Then I think the protagonist is a bit too nervous, which makes it easier to be discovered. But overall it is very good, but I personally feel that there are still some small problems. It is a good article, please give it a thumbs up to the author [Blow kiss]

It's pretty good so far, so please give it a thumbs up, author!! Well... Did Xiaojiu still look like a cultivator when he picked up the sword? [What][what]

It's good to watch. I haven't seen much of this interstellar theme, but I have a question. Qin Chao is also nineteen years old, so does he need to go to school?