[1V1, double cleansing, double male protagonists, unlimited flow, fragments (2), sweet text, with horror elements but not many, author Xiaobai Duoduo Bao
Han]
[Super wife-loving attack × Long-haired parents are strong and powerful]
Reincarnation and cause and effect are infinite
His marks are scattered all over the world
we sing praises
We are his most loyal followers
welcome to
"Reincarnation"
Bai Ruan comes to reincarnation, what will be waiting for him...
Li Yi S-level player
Chanyuan copy product
Or
Divine love?
(The text is not updated regularly for the time being, but there will definitely be a fixed update of 2000+ every week. I will update continuously during the short holiday. I just want to write for love. Writing is a hobby)
Reader comments
(Author, I have some suggestions here. If you don't want to read it and you think it's not good, just tell me and I will delete it immediately. If you want to scold me, just scold me lightly [grieved]) The overall story line is still good, but I didn't understand how the protagonist's emotional line came from at the beginning. I understood it as an emotional line. There may be foreshadowing or maybe it's a previous acquaintance. It describes more about the psychological activities of the characters. The whole work feels like it's interesting. It's a bit like posting a draft of a novel, not like a work that was published after thinking about it. When describing things, I feel that the words are a bit too thin. The description is a bit short, and it feels like I accidentally missed a few words when I was writing the novel. The above is all because I am a person with a weak brain. I read novels and I didn't understand any of them. The overall story is relatively good, but the writing seems to be a bit messy. Well, come on!
I think it's pretty good, but the narrative pace is a bit fast, but everything else is pretty good (｡•̀ᴗ-)ok
(Author, I have some suggestions here. If you don't want to read it and you think it's not good, just tell me and I will delete it immediately. If you want to scold me, just scold me lightly [grieved]) The overall story line is still good, but I didn't understand how the protagonist's emotional line came from at the beginning. I understood it as an emotional line. There may be foreshadowing or maybe it's a previous acquaintance. It describes more about the psychological activities of the characters. The whole work feels like it's interesting. It's a bit like posting a draft of a novel, not like a work that was published after thinking about it. When describing things, I feel that the words are a bit too thin. The description is a bit short, and it feels like I accidentally missed a few words when I was writing the novel. The above is all because I am a person with a weak brain. I read novels and I didn't understand any of them. The overall story is relatively good, but the writing seems to be a bit messy. Well, come on!
I think it's pretty good, but the narrative pace is a bit fast, but everything else is pretty good (｡•̀ᴗ-)ok