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Oh my God, it's so well written. Porter is so charming. Damn it, it's so beautiful and powerful. It totally hit my XP. My wife is so good at writing. Her psychological descriptions are really cute and gentle. Porter is really like a piece of glass, broken and sharp, but also very transparent and simple. It's not pure in the complete sense. In short, Potter, or Yashiro, is a very cute child. He and Akai Shuichi are quite fun together hahaha The plots with Zhu Fu Jingguang are more heartbreaking. This clip really reflects what kind of person Porter is. Even though he knew Jingguang was a policeman, Porter still wanted to protect him. While silently being nice to him, he also despised himself and felt that he was a member of the organization and shouldn't be, which was a shame. But I prefer the part between Porter and Shuichi Akai. Shuichi Akai was the first person to directly say that he wanted to destroy the organization and pull Porter out. The tension between him and Potter was particularly strong, who knows, and he gave Potter a clear path. Finally, I hope that Porter will become more and more brave, his inner scars will be repaired soon, he will get better and better, and he will have a beautiful ending, okay? [Shy][shy] (This is a hint to the author, hey, this is a wish from a reader who loves sweet articles)

It's very interesting, the writing is very good, and the character of Potter is very three-dimensional. It's one of the best-looking Mingke fics I've ever seen [Sending my heart to you] I feel a bit sadistic (? [Thinking] Anyway, I felt a little distressed when I watched it [almost cried] I hope the author will continue to persevere [Blow a kiss] It's very beautiful [Blow a kiss]

Yashiro Ouming, the protagonist's name only appears at the end, which is really suffocating. . Very desperate, this is how I felt after I tied the knot. Just like a swamp, Yashiro has already fallen deep into it. Additional struggles to save himself will only sink deeper and sink faster. He is heading for destruction soberly. He has no choice but to do anything about the current situation. He has lost the will of "Yashiro" under repeated polishing, leaving behind an empty and meaningless sea of ​​"Potter", just like a piece of dry land. No matter how much water is poured, it is useless. It's really uncomfortable, I can't describe the feeling. The whole story has a tone of calmness to death. I hope Yashiro can have a happy ending. Our Yashiro is just a very beautiful awkward kitten. Don't treat him like that. It's hateful, hateful, hateful. He's such a arrogant person who refuses to admit that his facial expressions are moved even though it's clearly a warm and thoughtful meal. [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry]

I just want to know is Porter really doing what he loves? Why was it forced? I feel so bad for Potter when I see him [almost crying]

It's not a pure swordsman or a pure heartthrob, but a reasonable and exciting plot progression that fits the character's personality. Personally, I like it very much. I hope the protagonist can have a happy ending in the end. I feel so sad.

Through the author's narration, I seemed to really see Porter as a person, and I became very interested in his world. I wanted to explore, understand, and enter his world. Clicking on this book is the key to Porter's world. Reading this book is a journey into Porter's world, and I was deeply attracted by him on this road. (I originally thought about the plot and character analysis of this book, and wanted to publish it to let more people know this book. However, when I was about to write it, I realized that I couldn't seem to express what I saw about Porter. The world is only what I see, and different people may have different feelings when they see Potter's world. What I said is too general. I can't describe Potter's world, and I can't see through Potter's future, but I know that I am deeply attracted to him at this time.) Regarding the question of Potter's world and whether Potter is good, let those of you who have read it answer me and the author, okay? ——The author's own book review in Guiding Book Review

As usual, give yourself a score before pushing ~ There is no outline for this article, yes, no, I don't know where Porter will be written by me, what the ending will be, and who he will end up with. None. His world seems to have no future, and it also seems to have more possibilities. I have nothing to say, I just want to ask, is Potter good-looking? I hope you can answer me after reading this article.

Dear author, if possible, I hope that Yashiro Ouming is saved by Morofushi Kageko. Although I know that the scene between Gin and Ouming is very touching, I still really hope that Porter can use his real name, Yashiro Ouming, and stand upright in the sun, bathing in the sun. (I hope Yashiro Ouming is just Yashiro Ouming, he is not Lillian or Potter, he is just himself) Yadai Ouming's experience is too sad. I don't want him to fall into darkness forever. He should be bathing in the sunshine and living a free life like ordinary people. Kagemitsu is really good. He is always by Yashiro Ouming's side and always takes good care of Yashiro Ouming. When he is sick, he will not take advantage of others. Instead, he guides Yashiro Ouming to breathe slowly and relax his body slowly. Kagemitsu is a guiding lover. Only such a person can truly pull Yashiro Ouming out of the darkness and let Yashiro Ouming bathe in the sunshine.

I hope Yashiro Ouming is just Yashiro Ouming. No matter what the ending is, as long as it is the best for him, I will accept it. I read this book two or three months ago, and I happened to get to chapter 99. When I wasn't reading, I would occasionally check the bookshelf to make sure the book was still updated. I suddenly remembered it early yesterday morning and decided to post a book review. I apologize if I misunderstood anything. Most of the black civil servant pairings I read before were Gin, so when I read this book, I felt that Gin would be the one who would stand with Ou Ming in the end. But halfway through reading it, I realized that the black plot in this book is different from the previous black plots. The organization is realistic and cruel, and the atmosphere inside is depressing and suffocating. There are no funny or relaxing elements. Ginjiu's attitude towards Ou Ming is strong, and he refuses to bow down unless necessary. This brings me back to Ginjiu's original character. He has never been a gentle person. He and Ou Ming were familiar with each other in the organization, and he was very possessive of Ou Ming. He was anxious when Ou Ming got sick. I saw how concerned he was, so I thought he would at least be gentle, but no. He seemed to be telling Ou Ming with this feeling that they were the same kind of people. They were born in the organization and grew up in the organization. They were all a knife of the organization and were born to be in the dark, so don't have other thoughts. Maybe Ginjiu didn't know how to express love. He saw Ou Ming looking normal now and was angry with him, but he was afraid of losing him, so he could only punish him in this way. When Jingguang faked his death, Ginjiu discovered the clues, but he still wiped out Ou Ming and covered up the truth for him. He loved Ou Ming, but he didn't understand love, so as long as Ou Ming was alive, no matter what he did, he couldn't lose him. When I saw the disease, I felt powerless. Why couldn't I give him some dignity? Why was he forced to suffer so much? But I couldn't change, I could only continue to watch. I saw the self-disgust he showed when he was with Jingguang, and I understood that he was living in pain. So later when Akai expressed to Ou Ming that he wanted to destroy the organization, I was happy that he had another choice. Even if the road was full of dangers, it would not be worse than keeping the organization. At least it gave Ou Ming a motivation to live and see another possible hope. Akai had shakes and struggles in his heart. He wanted to pull Ou Ming out of the darkness, but with the FBI behind him, he couldn't just do whatever he wanted, so he was full of worries and could only do his best to give Ou Ming a little help. Jingguang is undoubtedly a gentle and compassionate person. During the days when he lived with Ou Ming, he saw his pain, so Jing Guang would unconsciously look at him with sympathy and intolerance at first, but Ou Ming didn't like it, and he never looked at him with such eyes again. He respected him. During the days when Jing Guang lived with Ou Ming, he was unconsciously attracted to Ou Ming and felt his self-disgust and fragmented body and mind. Jing Guang was anxious in his heart. He told himself that he shouldn't be like this. Maybe it was a trap, but he still wanted to do his best to be nice to Ou Ming. In this house that couldn't be called home, even if they were opposites, even if this was something an undercover agent shouldn't do. Ou Ming has never met someone like Jing Guang, who would take into account his taste, his mood, and his preferences, and would watch movies with him. The days with him were warm, so warm that they were like a dream. As he gradually immersed himself in this dream, reality destroyed him again. He and Jing Guang are opposites. His idea of ​​saving himself is ridiculous. No one can save him. He pushes away everyone who wants to save himself. But on the day Jing Guang's identity was revealed, he still chose to help him and planned a fake death for him. He asked Akai to help him prepare everything, abandon this identity and start over, just as repaying his favor these days. But he didn't expect that this person would choose to come back to him in the end. Jing Guang couldn't let go of Ou Ming. This person saved him. He couldn't just leave like this. He had to do something for Ou Ming. He couldn't let go, so he came back. He couldn't let go of zero. They were young tameran. Zero knew that he would collapse when he heard about his death. He couldn't let go, so he came back. Why did I stop when I read Chapter 99? Maybe it was because the ending was undecided or because I felt Ou Ming's self-disgust. I was also full of powerlessness and didn't continue reading. At that time, I thought maybe I would come back when I see hope. I suddenly remembered this book yesterday. At around three o'clock in the morning on December 22, I read the latest chapters before writing the first version of this book review. Someone in the comment area of ​​Chapter 200 said, "Everyone who loves him will stand behind him." Later, when Jingguang decided to stand with Ou Ming, his feelings could not be concealed. Jingguang once again compromised with his inner emotions, and Ou Ming had a real kiss. In the latest chapters, Jing Guang's gentleness when Ou Ming was ill, his anxiety when facing the upcoming use of drugs, and the respect that Ou Ming felt for the first time after waking up. I think Jingguang really made Ou Ming feel loved. I hope he is the one who stands with Ou Ming in the end. Of course, the author has said that it may have an open ending. It would be great if the extra chapter could be written. I hope that Yadai Ouming can finally get rid of the organization, live the life he wants, and cure his disease, and finally his heart can be filled with love. Good night, Ou Ming.

Hmm~ The characters are basically not too OOC at all, especially Gin, which unexpectedly fits my impression, um... Um, I enjoyed watching it last night [smile]

The writing is really great. It is rare to see such high-quality writing from Mingke. The writing is beautiful and the psychological changes of the characters are very delicately written. The character of the protagonist is also very good. She is a crazy beauty and has a very charming personality. ( I finished it in less than two days, much faster, okay?), Although the linkage with the cabinet violated the bottom line of the country and history, and I gave up, but I think if I have already started this article, I think I will finish it, so that there is a beginning and an end. But it has been written so well, why is the traffic of this article so low? [What] Foreign Persimmon, what are you doing?

I feel so sorry for Potter [crying] [crying] [crying] My heart keeps chattering I really feel sorry for Potter. Is there any direct attack? I feel that the undecided characters Gin, Akai Shuichi and Morofuku Kagemitsu, Gin is the darkness together, Akai is the love of the bet, and Hiro is the redemption of the light [cry] [cry] [cry]

This book has a completely different feeling from the previous ones I have read. It really feels like you are panning for gold in the sand. The complex character of the protagonist is also very heart-wrenching. It is super good-looking. Big boost for the author. I will always follow you [Blow Kiss][Flow Kiss][Flow Kiss]

It's really nice and of high quality. I feel like there are very few high-quality fan books like Tomato. [Sending my heart to you] I came across this by chance and waited for the update every day. I like it so much [I'm about to cry] because the anchor has so few reads and the score is a bit low. In fact, it's really high-quality and the characters are very delicate. I love Baby Ou Ming the most.

What I ate might be a bit complicated, and it reminded me of the Korean comic "The Man Who Wants to Get Married." It might not look like it, but I couldn't help but think about it, and it made my heart even more congested. The author's description is great, five stars~ I hope there will be a good ending [almost crying]

It has already tied the book. I think this book has high readability. The rhythm and processing in the early stage were not very good, and there were some abandoned articles at one time. However, in the middle and later stages, it can be said to be beyond expectations. The changes in emotional changes and character relationships are handled just right, and the character creation is relatively full. The OOC is within the acceptable range in my opinion, and will not affect normal reading. The character creation of Black is very full, and those who like real wine and Black can enjoy it. It is considered top-notch among Black's type of novels.

I really feel sorry for Potter, my heart feels a little numb when I see it [I'm about to cry]

Help, this is the best Mingke fanfic I have ever seen. It completely touched my xp. I couldn't listen to it at first sight. Every pair of cp is super touching, and Porter's character is also super exciting to me. Teacher, please cheer up [Sending Hearts]

I've read it before on another account, but I haven't seen it for a long time. I didn't expect that DaDa suddenly updated so many chapters. It's really super interesting. I just hope that Potter will have a good ending. I really want to know if it is he in the end?

I was about to fall asleep when I suddenly opened this book. It is a treasure. It is so beautiful. The description of the protagonist is really real and heart-wrenching. The inner activities of many characters are also very well written.

So pretty, Potter fascinates me [admiration]

It's very well written, but I can't stand it anymore. I feel sorry for him [crying]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh beautiful! ! ! Please be sure to continue updating! ! ! The protagonist is so charming [crying][crying] So well written! ! ! It's the best medicine for me in my hard days. Wuwuwu [crying] [crying]

It's very beautiful, full of good writing, and the characters are very three-dimensional. The beautiful and handsome boy Porter is super charming and I like him! Dancing man on xp! The emotional lines are also very good, please keep writing!

It looks good. Her position is not one-sided on the red side or the black side. Lilian only stands on her own interests. In fact, the most satisfying thing is that the party that seems to be fighting for the upper hand can actually give everyone an equal slap in the face. Don't cheat the author.

The author has created a very attractive protagonist who is suitable for both men and women. He is very open about his sexuality (some people may be offended, but the author's portrayal is good, which makes people feel distressed). He has super personal abilities and is not weak. Real wine does not whitewash it. Other original characters are also relatively restored, especially Gin, which is rare and not OOC.

It looks good and smells good. A protagonist who longs for light but is stuck in the quagmire, especially good

Please, give my Potter a he, this is the request of my life.

It looked so beautiful when I went there that it matched my xp! ! Also, the author would like to ask who is going to be Belmod or Potter?

Wo Qu, a super nice article, [adoration][adoration][blowing kiss] No OOC, very rich psychological description I really like this article🥰The author blows a kiss, come on!