Xingtie: No! Why Does Weng Xing Have Two Saviors?

It's very beautiful and the author is very funny. The author's current writing method is very good, it is friendship-oriented, and the heroine is really unfamiliar! ! ! I can talk about men and women, but please don't include it in the text, otherwise... I can't help it [grievance]

Overall, it can be said to be of high quality. Regarding the issue of Bai E's name: After modifying the way Bai Mo addressed Bai E after the destruction of Aili Secret Pavilion, I feel it is acceptable. In terms of character creation, he has his own understanding and expansion, and does not deviate from the character design. At the same time, there are also many wonderful ideas of the author in the article. The most important thing is that the author maintains an update speed of three or even four updates a day. There are a few minor flaws, but they do not affect the brilliance of the book, and the flaws do not overshadow the excellence. I'm more curious about how reincarnation will be handled. At least it is a masterpiece with a score of 9 or higher. Come on author, take good care of you.

The character creation is very good, and the journey of chasing fire is well described. Xiao Xiaobai's growth path is a rare detail in many second creations. Although, let me ask you, why can birds fly [smile]

Great writing. As long as there is no CP, it is a very good book, so is it no CP?

WC is so beautiful. Author, I will always follow you. Please be sure to finish writing the ending! Otherwise, I will become a ghost and follow you all the time. So far, it is the best one I have seen in the Baietong literature. At the same time, I also feel that this novel is not suitable for multiple female protagonists (self-feeling). I also hope that there will not be a single female protagonist (I think it can also be a pseudo-heroine) (if the protagonist can solve all this in one go, I will not say it). This novel is very suitable for CB. Judging from the current plot, our protagonist has not yet shaken the strength of the entire scepter. Of course, it may be possible in the later stage, but it is unlikely in the early stage, so reincarnation is inevitable. (Probably) It can also be seen that the protagonist loves the world very much, so he will try his best to save the world no matter what. The process of saving the world must be very difficult, so there may not be any love in the process. After all, everyone is thinking about how to save the world, right? (There will be friendship and family in the process) Also, the author suggested changing the word Ou Doudou to younger brother. After all, it always feels awkward and out of character when reading it ▄█▀█●

It's good-looking, the protagonist is decisive when it's time to take action, and the plot can be ignited. Although I was a little confused for a while (but in Ompharos, I wanted to have a perfect ending, so I was a little confused.)

It's good to watch. Now it's a plot where Xiaobai and Xiaobai get to know Ohema and other golden people. It's very warm, but I always feel that there will be a knife and the fate of reincarnation that cannot be avoided. It must be Omfalos making dumplings. However, I feel that the system can reflect the subconscious calculation power of the protagonist, which has something to do with the scepter becoming a spirit. Great support from the author, please update as soon as possible [Love]

This is also a romantic story that is different from the past. The twins of [Salvation], go and bring new life to Ompharos... (The reason why I gave four stars is just for personal reasons. I personally prefer books with unique and beautiful protagonists. I usually don't read books with female protagonists, but this one is really good...)

Just realized I forgot to comment. Let me talk about the conclusion first. This is a rare good book, gold among the countless "history" of Onfalo. I can't see the heroine at the moment, but if there is one, it should be Xi Lian. It's really cool and awesome to hang up, but it's not mindless, at least it's semi-invincible now. There is no OOC in the character creation so far, it is quite consistent, and the plot does not follow the main line. Really, it is really good without having to go through the plot again [face covering] The emotional line is well grasped, there is no mention of succubi, etc., They all go through the stage from stranger to familiarity (referring to friendship) But I don't know how the author plans to wrap up the ending of this book, so I'm looking forward to it (because the hook is actually quite big) And this book has a great advantage, it updates very quickly! ! The only drawback is that occasionally the author will jump out and destroy the sense of immersion, but the atmosphere of the corresponding book will be more interesting.

It's good-looking, really good-looking. I originally thought it was a simple and refreshing article, for relaxation, but the more I read, the more I felt... Weighty. He didn't have the stiff feeling of being in the fourth natural disaster one moment, and then "turns out he's too arrogant" in the next chapter. The growth of the protagonist is step by step, and the golden descendants and even other supporting characters also have their own value (I even think that Lagus of this article is not unacceptable) You can tell from my verbose words in Luo Liba that the author's writing style is very good, and the plot is slow but does not lose the rhythm. The plot does not deviate from the original version of the fan, but it also makes its own explanation. To sum up, this is an article worth reading, but even though it is updated three times a day, it still feels a bit unreadable (seriously)

I can't comment on whether it is better than the original game. After all, different people have different opinions, but compared with other fans, it is definitely the best one. There is no cliche plot direction, nor does it downplay the existence and importance of other characters. It interprets the "first cause of life" that is different from the game. Thirty million reincarnations describe a very strong sense of epicness. It is not like other fan fictions that seem to be very relaxed. It is tragic and magnificent (to reiterate, I definitely did not cry) The description of the characters is a little... Stiff? There is less life, and the Star God as written feels a little less divine. Some thoughts in the plot, the "first cause of life" is not a single "love" like in the game plot, "survival" is the instinct of life, "love and hate" inject soul into life, "I" guides life's thinking, and together they are intertwined into the "first cause of life" (I don't know if I understand it correctly, don't scold me if you think differently than me) All in all, great to see

Do you know? This is a very, very, very beautiful book. I definitely don't have a knife (doubtful), but he must be very good anyway. The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the curse: The Supreme Lord's decree, transcend your lonely soul. You can just recite these eight characters. It would be better if you can add: escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as an adult) [Sneaky smile] [Sneaky smile]

It's really well written, and it's considered a masterpiece among Bengtie fanfics. However, it feels a bit weird to me that the skill is not consumed at all. It must at least consume some physical energy, otherwise the realism is a bit weak, like a game. It suddenly occurred to me that Bai Mo was not a golden descendant. Does that mean that Lai Gushi could easily kill him?

After watching it for so long, I don't know when we will see each other again, so I feel a little reluctant to part with it... I picked up this book when it first came out with dozens of pictures. The title was quite interesting, and my love for Bai E made me read this book. I have to say, the writing is really beautiful. The previous version of this book was more of a comedy style. I read it every time when I came back from school. Sometimes I would hold back my laughter when I saw a difficult part in the middle of the night for fear that my parents would find out. As the plot progresses, the relaxed and funny atmosphere disappears. Bai Mo, who once lay rotting in the rice fields, finally takes up the burden of the savior. Along the way, he transforms from an ordinary person who wants to save his cherished ones but doesn't know how to change their tragic ending to the savior of Onfalos. He is a selfish person who only wants to save the people he loves from beginning to end. He was also selfless because he never gave up on Ompharos. To be honest, I really like Laomo. I'm under a lot of pressure from studying in high school, so I came back to read a few pictures. The relaxed and joyful atmosphere can really relieve my mood. The author is also really awesome, and he is really talented at coming up with this plot. But later on, when I saw Lao Mo carrying all the memories of Omphalos, helping Bai E share the pain of being burned by fire, and preventing Bai E from taking action against his friends, it was really uncomfortable to watch. One of them is an ordinary person who just wants to live an ordinary life quietly and run a restaurant, and the other is a fool who is full of passion and wants to be a hero. In the end, he has to shoulder such a heavy burden. Maybe this is the treatment of the savior of the Mi family (sad). I hope the author can come back in a better state and add the final touches to this story that belongs to Bai Mo. Come on author [like], we will wait for you! (I may not be very good at what I said, but this is what I wanted to say after reading it) Finally... I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars

The writing is good, and the plot has ups and downs. The funny and happy early stage of the story further highlights the misery of Bai Mo's eternal reincarnation in the later period, and the mention in the article that "Bai Mo has been an only son since his first life" further reflects and reveals Bai Mo's loneliness and helplessness as he has no successor and is alone from beginning to end. , There is a plot description in the article where Bai Mo's inner world is piled with a large number of corpses of golden descendants from each life. It cleverly reflects Bai Mo's inner pressure and misery from the side, and the huge and sudden change in painting style brings a huge impact to the readers, making the readers immersed in the scene, and arousing strong resonance in the readers.

A profound connotation comparable to Zhongli's fake death? The unknown past between the author and the Happy Star God Aha! Shock! The illegitimate son of Myth and Aha is actually a writer? ! The writing is vivid and powerful, but what really moved me was the author's deep understanding of the nature of the Star God's philosophy in the game plot, as well as some thought-provoking small philosophical thoughts. Titles draw traffic. [Admiration][Thinking][Laughing][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly][Laughing evilly] The prototype of joy is probably the concept in "The Science of Happiness". The core question is: Why laugh? , Conceptually: Laughter is the initial affirmation, outlining existence for everything that is nothing. Laughter relies on the experience of extreme doubt. Laughter is the essential part of truth. The author has the same opinion on this point. I often repeat the same experience, and this time it was under the guidance of an individual named "Bai Mo" that I was often trapped by reason and perfection and fell into the abyss of self-denial. However, after following the journey of the "mortal" savior, I truly understood the original understanding of the person who belongs: self-acceptance and self-salvation. This book may not be called an excellent one, but I like a sentence very much: "The value of a book is to bring you thinking, even for a second or two." The author's rich little philosophical thoughts are worth trying to read, and this book can also be regarded as a supplement to the details of the game.

It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension. It's good-looking, comparable to a novel with the plot of Beng Tieyuan. The representative of the second peak. Made up for a lot of Ompharos' regrets. Personally I feel the plot is better written than Beng Cheewon. But the plot of Beng Tieyuan can be used as the basis, and this is an extension.

I think it's more than 9.3 Points. I've been underlining and taking notes since I saw the latest chapter from the first one. After reading it, I went through the notes again and I can clearly feel the changes in the character of Bai Mo. It's really great. There are also many tear-jerking plots in the plot, which makes people moved. The words are not clear, so you can see for yourself

Come on, author, the novel you wrote is very good and beautiful. Waiting for you to come back. You must see the road ahead clearly. Let the songs that no one sings rise again. Write a new chapter in the dusty story of history. [Laughs][laughs][laughs] Come on, author! This must be a different kind of romantic story. Are you right?

My favorite book about Iron Breaking is The Suffering of the Savior. I didn't pay attention when reading the plot before. After converting it into numbers, there are more than 30 million reincarnations. The average reincarnation is 1500 years, which is 45 billion years. If there are 10 million people in each reincarnation, that is the memories and souls of 300 trillion people. The protagonist did not explode with the scepter, which is why he became so crazy. In addition, the author is so short that I finished reading it in one night.

The author has painted enough details that it feels like he has experienced it personally. For example, the three heroes Akaishi are as if the author has eaten them himself. The description can be said to be immersive [smile][smile]

It's good to read, and it's different from the many high-rated Xingtie fans on Tomato. There are many of them. I always feel like they are meaningless jokes. I don't know why the rating is so high. But this book only has a few jokes in the front, but it is quite deep in the back.

I usually don't give five stars, but... This book allows me to see different potential and intentions than before. Latecomers, please read on patiently. When you reach the end of Chasing the Fire, you will find that this Chasing the Fire is indeed a romantic story. Although the ending overlaps with the original plot, the feelings expressed through language have surpassed the original plot in my opinion. This book fully demonstrates the saying that words are also powerful. Especially those who are latecomers after watching this Chasing the Fire, I believe you will also think that this is a real romantic story. After the appearance of the Journey to Fire fanfic in Ompharos, this is the real and the only fanfic that I praise. The author obviously has a deep understanding of the relevant plot and carefully considered the outline. It is not a random arrangement and rigid formula. I can see the hard work and hard work. Finally, I look forward to this book getting better and better, and I sincerely thank the author for allowing me to watch such a different journey of chasing fire. Finally, I dare not say that this book is the masterpiece of the Collapsed Star Railroad, but what I can confirm at the moment is that in the world of Ompharos, this book is a well-deserved first-tier book.

2026.2.6 1:24 Finished with flowers~ A very exciting plot! There are transcendent battles, silent protection, and the catharsis of emotions. Of course, there is also the persecution of Lao Yang that is shared by the fandom [laughing evilly] [crying with laughter] The main content is that it is written by Onfalos. Most of the original plot is there, but due to the addition of the protagonist, some parts will be different, and there are a lot of original plots! It is very exciting to see it! It is a very new story! The personal score is 9.6 Points upwards. The main theme is very clear and the description is very good! All parts are very harmonious, there are also a small number of foreshadowings, and a large proportion of original plots, battle scenes, and psychological journeys. [Cool] The biggest flaw is that it ends abruptly. The author thinks he is unable to control the next plot. Ompharos will be gone after he kills Lord Annihilator and Nanook. There is no way to see Ompharos' daily life after his promotion [crying] and looking forward to completing the plot later! Summary: This is a different and magnificent poem belonging to Omphalos! It is highly recommended to watch it! (Complaint: The character limit in this comment area is really troublesome) Finally, I look forward to seeing you again next time~ [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

A very excellent book. Whether it's the plot, character creation, fun, or emotional expression, it's all very profound. Various rhetorical techniques, story narration, and character reactions are all vivid and authentic. Various behaviors are not OOC. What I want to praise most is the philosophical narrative and emotional expression. Emotions are indeed conveyed. Through the keyboard, you can deeply feel the sadness, love, and hate of this character. The only small regret is that the ending has not been written yet. In fact, my understanding that the ending has not been written is that the author has exhausted all his efforts. I hope that the author can continue to work hard after he has cultivated himself. It is an excellent work of Bengtie fanfic or emotional expression.

The writing style of the previous plot is relatively immature, and some parts make people frown. However, the author's writing style has been improving. After starting the eternal cycle of catastrophe, the discomfort gradually disappeared. You can even regard the previous plot as one of the protagonist's few innocent and happy times? Overall, it is a good novel. The one about Ompharos can be placed in the first category. I feel good about the other novels. I would also recommend them here. One is to make the mobile game Beng Tie. I fictionalized Ompharos and there are people in Beng Tie. Ordinary scholars are good at elbowing the universe. It is also a good Ompharo novel.

It's good-looking. It's one of the few good things in the Star Iron novel. The settings of the original novel are almost controllable, and the added secondary settings are also logically self-consistent. It's better than the original Iron Collapsing plot. That thing is Days of Our Lives 2.0.

It is definitely the top work of Bengtie. It is the most beautiful one I have ever seen. Whether it is the creation of characters or the plot of the story, it can be finished. The protagonist is not just a tool man, the image is very full. It is highly recommended to take a look. Also, the author, please update quickly! ! !

It looks good, the front part is more interesting, and it's not the kind of game that accompanies the protagonist through the plot. The author has his own ideas and his own story. The protagonist is not the kind of character that is created from the beginning, nor is he the shadow of any character, but really continues to grow in the story. Nice! The main character is really growing up! ! !

Compared with the original plot, this adaptation is perfect. The protagonist is perfectly integrated into the original plot. The experience of thirty million lives, the change of the protagonist's thoughts during the period, and the golden descendants' emotions for each other are vividly portrayed. The nearly 50 chapters of the battle in the end are also very enjoyable to read. There are shortcomings... Some of the settings were a little difficult to understand, but the descriptions were too gorgeous and rich, making it even more difficult to understand. The final battle was too grand, and the ending was too abrupt. These were a little bit off in my mind. Although there are flaws, they are still fine works of Ompharos fan fiction.