Classmate, Does Your Voice Sell?

In fact, I really like novels with this kind of theme. The plot written by the author is also very comfortable and does not make people feel particularly embarrassed. The protagonist is also well portrayed, but I just have a few suggestions. I think the male protagonist can be gentle, but he can't resist at all. It feels a bit dramatic, as if to set off the female protagonist to be so gentle and without threshold. Of course, the plot is still good, but the male protagonist is a bit too waxy [Blow kiss]

It's okay, keep waiting and seeing, is it a harem or stock trading? I'll kill you for stock trading.

Really beautiful. The plot is not procrastinating and is basically harmless. I feel that the author must be familiar with the routines of Internet novels and know how to avoid pitfalls. I just feel that Shura Field has too few teeth, even central air conditioning is not allowed to get through Shura Field so quickly [Learned]

It was a bit slow in the early stage [Thinking] Starting from Pei Mingke's debut, the author seems to have deliberately brought together the female protagonists, and then used the experiences of the female protagonists to enrich the male protagonist? I have seen more than 60 chapters so far and there are no obvious poisonous points, but the overall pace is still slow. It is suitable to add a bookshelf to fatten up before killing [like], the five stars are still worth it. I am also an original fan who has followed me all the way. [Note] I focus on reading one point every day. From the current plot, I should be ready to start a career line. [Thinking] Let's see how the author plans to balance the two. The plot is actually a bit bland. Different people have different opinions. Objectively speaking, there are not many exciting points [I also strongly recommend] but compared to some short stories of the same type I have read, it is really There is no obvious poisonous point, let's see how it develops in the future [Note] I bet that Teacher Itemiya will not eat it so quickly, otherwise how will the dynasty deal with it [smile], the b author is a mature woman and a concubine at first glance [laugh] Can you write more that everyone likes to see [Adoration] Gifts will continue to be given [shy] No money but the main focus is stability [laugh]

It's well written and the foreshadowing is very comfortable. The plot will not be so awkward. The dubbing competition is a climax, but the writing is a bit short. Shura Field has also been written with a feeling. I hope the author will keep up the good work! Deal with the final outcome. No regrets left.

She gently opened the yellowed diary and touched the writing on the page with her fingertips. Memories came flooding back, and those dust-laden past events came to mind again.

It feels okay. Why is the rating so low?

The author writes great! I just hope there can be more scenes of Teacher Gong I can't help it, I love Gong-sensei's settings so much! ! ! The author please make sure to write more about Teacher Gong. Please, Teacher Gong is really a god. It's amazing! ! [Adoration]

The characters are all quite likable. The female protagonists have their own merits. The male protagonist is decisive when she should be decisive and gentle when she should be gentle. Even the supporting characters are very distinctive. The plot is relatively smooth. It can be seen that the author has consciously avoided many subtle points. Overall, this is a good book that can make people smile after reading it. I'll come back and leave a review after it's finished. It's a pretty good book with a very heart-warming story. It ranks in the top five for me. Although the book's traffic is not large, it can be seen that the author has really carefully created every character and plot, and also has a strong awareness of lightning protection. I can only say that I am not very lucky. It is not allowed to be seen by more people. It is a little regretful. Keep up the good work.

It's a very interesting article. The author's writing style is good and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. It's well worth reading. I would like to encourage you with five stars! [Cool]

Are you insisting on Gu? Haji Yu, you guy... From more than 70 chapters to the end now, it took almost a year to be quite emotional. Although the traffic is not very good, this book is indeed a masterpiece, and it is not a loss at all.

Give yourself a book review to complete the task🥰 Why does this task originally require a book review of more than 100 words? [Thinking] Just add some ideas and what the author is going to do here. From the reading rate and completion rate, many readers have reported that the plot of the school girl going to Qingcheng to find Ning Yi is not OK. In fact, the author is not very satisfied with this section, so there will be relatively big changes in the following chapters starting from Chapter 66, but it will not have a great impact on the subsequent plot. The other thing is about the overall rhythm and the attractiveness of the plot. Due to the author's level and experience, the first 10 chapters to the first 100,000 words are too bland. This is also a question I often consider, how to optimize this problem without changing the main line [top post] The overall plan can also be discussed in detail. The initial plan for this book is two volumes of 500,000 words each, and I would like to give you a guarantee ૮ ºﻌºა, I am the person who hates stock trading the most🤮Don't worry about transferring orders too much [Salute] I wish you all a happy life

It's very interesting, but the plot I'm watching so far doesn't say whether the death of the protagonist's parents is man-made, it just says that it's being investigated, but the protagonist's ability is, to put it bluntly, a relatively good college student! If it's artificial, have you thought about how to end it?

After reading it for so long, I realized that I didn't give a book review😋

The writing is good, and it is considered a good book in Tomato.

The author's writing style is very good. I don't think I can even write such a simple book review. I can only give a simple full score [crying]

I haven't read such a beautiful book in a long time.

It's well written and the foreshadowing is very comfortable. The plot will not be so awkward. The dubbing competition is a climax, but the writing is a bit short. The feeling of Shura Field has also been written. I hope the author will keep up the good work! Deal with the final outcome. No regrets'

The plot is very good, each character has his own soul core, and is not cliché. The plot has ups and downs, and the protagonist's inner struggles are also depicted. The most important thing is that it poked my XP! ! !

It's pretty good to watch, but speaking of the author, can he handle so many female protagonists [I also strongly recommend] To be honest, there are too many female protagonists, which leads to low ratings. Some female protagonists feel unnecessary like Su, Pei, Li,

The book is very good and I hope the author will continue to work hard. [Like][Like][Like]

It is a good book. The author is also a very good person. It is a good book that you can read carefully. Some of the plots may be classic, but they are not obtrusive. I would like to read it a lot.

I'll give it 5 stars. Everything else is written very well. The only bad thing is that the male protagonist's sister went to pick up the hero without wearing pants. The bad thing is that the other writing is really good [laughing] I can only say that the author can do it [laughing] It would be better if he could reply @ Suiyu

Why are so few people watching?

Yes, but there is not much progress in the Lao Jie line at the moment, and I will go abroad to study in the future. Is it possible that the male lead will still be able to steam if he has a kid? [Face covering]

Holy shit, holy shit, it's really beautiful.

A very soft and warm plot, full of sugar and no cruelty. There are no classic urban brainless villains. The male and female protagonists are also normal people. Keep up the good work [Adoration]

The overall story is very neat and not draggy

It's pretty good. I'll put all the suggestions aside for now. I hope this can end safely.

Don't poke me [send my heart] There is someone in Konoha Village who is so good at writing novels [laughs] See how long it's been since I read it [please update]