Okay, according to the content of the first chapter of "The Tattered God of War", this is a typical fantasy beginning of a loser's counterattack + adventure and becoming stronger. The following core elements can be distilled into writing an introduction:
**Core selling point:**
* **Good-for-nothing start:** Niu Batian, the laughing stock of the family, has stagnated strength.
* **Mysterious Adventure:** Accidentally obtained a rusty mysterious iron box (containing a heaven-defying inheritance jade slip and half a jade pendant).
* **Heaven-defying inheritance: ** The ragged God of War system that "all things can be refined" (almighty in alchemy, formations, weapon refining, beast control, etc.).
* **Surge in strength:** The energy of the jade pendant instantly helped him break through the bottleneck and upgrade to two levels in a row.
* **Conflict and hatred:** Bullying within the family (Niu Ben), external threats (Bai family), and the mystery of his father's disappearance.
* **The beginning of the rise:** After gaining strength, he took the initiative to face the crisis for the first time.
* **Theme hint: ** "Broken and then established", rising from the "rags" to the "god of war".
**About the work:**
**Version 1 (focusing on conflict and counterattack):**
> **Cold looks, ridicule, family abandonment... Niu Batian struggled in the mud for three years. **
> When the cousin's humiliation and the threat of resource cutoff came again, fate buried a turning point in the garbage pile he cleaned up - a mysterious iron box covered with rust.
> A drop of blood opens a dusty secret! The vast sea-like inheritance of the God of War poured into his mind: "**Everything can be refined, and the one who breaks it and then stands up is called the God of War!**" Half a coin
Reader comments
It doesn't look good. In the second chapter, the Jade Slip Technique can be used directly without practicing. In the third chapter, Fei Dan practices again. After seeing the title, I have no desire to read further. It is better to learn it step by step and get better and better.
The book lives up to its name (one word [laughing and crying])
It doesn't look good. In the second chapter, the Jade Slip Technique can be used directly without practicing. In the third chapter, Fei Dan practices again. After seeing the title, I have no desire to read further. It is better to learn it step by step and get better and better.
The book lives up to its name (one word [laughing and crying])
When will you learn the sword-fighting technique?