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Although this book is a love story, there is very little about the sweetness of love in it so far. Instead, it is filled with the blood and turmoil of the business battlefield. The emotions of the two protagonists who are in conflict from beginning to end, and Aoki, Xia Wei and Winter who give in to the emotions of the two protagonists, are really frustrating. Five years of companionship, five years of time eroding, still can't compare to the excitement of the two protagonists who first met and got along for half a year. In my opinion, the author portrayed the emotions of the two protagonists too ideally and noble, but portrayed the emotions of the supporting characters too small and pathetic. Aoki became a tool for marriage and exchange for Su Baisheng, Xia Wei almost became a victim of Zhao Hu's emotions, and Winter became the background of Su Bai's protection plan. The emotions of these little people moved me, and I really hope they can have a good ending.

It's a very good work, and the writing is very good. Before I finished reading it, I kept scolding the author in my heart. Obviously, the reconciliation could be sweeter when I'm with Winter or when I see Zhao Hu, but after reading it, I understand the use of these knives. Maybe this is the shyness and guilt of young people growing up. I mean. What I didn't expect was the np ending. I felt sorry for Aoki and a little more for Winter. Although Aoki wanted to replace Zhao Hu in the part, it was also for Su Bai's good. I didn't think it mattered in the bg part, but I still couldn't accept the girl next to Zhao Hu who looked like Su Bai. Maybe she was forced to have no choice. Maybe it's because of my mother, but I think Zhao Hu is the person who should least start a bg romance. Winter is the only latecomer in the whole story, but he is the cleanest and most concerned about Su Bai. If there was no plot about Zhao Hu being raped, Zhao Hu would have been alone from beginning to end. Then Zhao Hu's character would The portrayal is more perfect instead of using another girl to disintegrate Zhao Hu's character. The ending cannot be said to be good or bad, but just right. Aoki's exit is correct. If possible, I hope Su Bai meets Winter at the beginning, or there is no conspiracy of the Gu family from the beginning.

I haven't read many novels, but I think this is the best one I've read so far! I really like [Flying Kiss]. The content is very rich and very interesting. Hahahaha. I like it so much. It fits my ideal content so well. I hope the author will keep up the good work! Looking forward to new books, always support! [Adoration]

The writing is very serious and attentive, but the plot is a bit draggy and a bit realistic. I originally wanted to see Xiao Tianwen recover and regain her mood, but I didn't expect that the title of this novel was written with pure knives. There's a lot of foreshadowing, but I guess I forgot to recycle it if I didn't fill it in at the end. (I still like to read some beautiful novels. After all, there is no such ideal beauty in life, so I can only rely on novels to satisfy the barren spiritual world.) After all, the writing style of the orc-themed novels is generally low. Except for the plot of this one, the writing style is still online (a bit like the author wants to write about knives😫)

Is the dessert okay? Please Q~Q

Very good, very nice little sweet article [laughs] Hu Zi: The water is uncertain, the flowers are exhausted, and we will meet again...

I love you so much author [blowing kiss]

It's a blast to lose your mind. The main character is a succubus. There's no big problem with the writing and plot. On the contrary, I think the first 8 chapters of the prequel are quite good. The official version is more like a homologue. Yeah, I highly recommend it.