Maybe I Really Can Be a Hero?

After reading forty chapters, I read it relatively quickly, and I can see that the author still wants to write seriously. There is nothing particularly bad in the description. There are a few small problems. I have been reading the novel for a long time. Let me give you my thoughts. The author can think about it. The first sense is confusing. There are the following aspects: the copy changes too quickly, the scenes are changed inexplicably, and the front and back are obviously separated; In terms of character, the character suddenly becomes decisive and leader-like, and then changes to a dungeon and starts to be cowardly and cowardly, etc.; There are too many elements, there are too many styles in these dozens of chapters, and most readers cannot accept too much complicated content at the beginning. When they feel that reading is very cumbersome, it is difficult to persist. You can keep it simple in the early stage, and then slowly expand more settings. Second, the writing must have its own style, and do not include "famous quotes" from popular works, unless it is used in some specific atmosphere to boost popularity, but when it appears serious, I feel disgusted personally, such as "... Will be very handsome" and "... Can't tell the difference". . . That's all I'll say. Give it four stars and support it. I hope we can keep up the good work.

It looks great. Although the setting is not explained clearly, the sense of first-person perspective is really great! The author's writing style is also very good. It is a new book with great potential, and it doesn't matter that you can't become a hero from the beginning. The characters need to grow, and the protagonist cannot be a hero from the beginning. I hope the author will stick to it! 💕💕💕💕💕

Now I think it's okay. It's my first time writing. I want to encourage you.

It's okay. I can't say that the writing is particularly good, but it's still very good. The storyline is quite interesting, but there is a section in the middle where the author probably missed some chapters or changed a few chapters. The overall evaluation is okay.

Well, it looks a bit messy from the front, but it feels much better from the back. But I prefer heroic characters. Well, after entering the Spider-Man universe, let's see what kind of colors the protagonist can play. Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)ง(✌️^ω^)

Why does it feel like the protagonist's reaction is different from that of ordinary people 😏 Maybe it's different for everyone, but it feels like the protagonist is always panicking. It feels a little familiar inexplicably [laughing] The author must have watched the anime Ghoul. I wonder why it is so familiar, but the author weakened Ghoul. No, no, I commented earlier 😏 😏 😏 👍 👍 👍 Go read Chapter 25, and then the protagonist kills hundreds of people, and you will know how this novel is going to be.

I hope the setting can be explained a little more clearly later. I'm afraid you'll be proud if I lose 1 point.

It's very well written, five stars to support it.

Overall it's good, but there is a chapter in the middle that may have been deleted by Shen He.

A good book with great potential. I can't say anything good about it, I can only say it's very good to read. Not many people read it now, and the plot has just started, so I haven't rated it yet. When more people wait, this book will be at least 8.6 Or above. @111 Don't not update it! It's hard to find a book that suits your taste, but not many people read it, so don't give up. @111 Come back soon, you stopped updating, I can't even recommend it.