The Holy Empire Begins with Going to the Church in a Small Town

The background setting is good, but the style is a bit conflicting. Goldfinger is the background of God, and the protagonist is a bit of a fun person. Then it is written that Gabriel is also a fun person. It conflicts too much with the stereotype in the Bible. The left and right brains are fighting each other while watching. It looks awkward. It would be fine if the background itself is a fun person (like the background is Guanyin under the Buddha, and he is a fun person...), It is too forced. Before the protagonist was exiled, he was the second-ranked person in the academy. Apart from the background, he was almost at the level of the chief (Gemini). After the exile, the series of operations did not show anything eye-catching. They were all routine operations. Compared with ordinary priests, except for a little change brought about by the golden finger, there was basically no difference. Even based on age, many of them were against each other. The words are quite childish, and the tone of the protagonist at the beginning is not good (the part about selling a bunch of blessed sacred items and conquering people before the invasion). The protagonist is pushed away from the beginning, from the death of the teacher to the exile, without leaving any means (maybe I am short-sighted), which makes me feel quite uncomfortable and weak. Of course, the author's writing is not good enough, and I haven't read much. I just made some comments and read dozens of chapters. I personally feel that this book is quite suitable for female videos. Subjects such as female videos should be quite popular. I should [Think]

It's good to watch. I personally don't think it's poisonous. The problems mentioned in the reviews are very clear in the book, and the reasons are also written down. There are no inexplicable poisonous points. The only problem is that it is more entertaining and funny. There are no magicians to fool people or fanatical believers in religion. It's very relaxing and I think it's good. The pacing of the follow-up is slow and lackluster, with no clear main line. It is more like a transition into daily life without the trivial and interesting things in daily life. The overall feeling is quite empty.

The characters are vivid and the story is interesting. The language is also humorous when it should be humorous, and the humor is well controlled. There is no problem of forcing humor to make up for the plot. Instead, the choices are moderate, and the story will be focused on the progress of the story to avoid falling into various gags. 5 Points recommended. The author should not be a newcomer, and his writing style, structure, and rhythm are all good.

Until Chapter 44, there are no poisonous points, and the logic is reasonable. As long as you keep it up, I will give it to you if you want 5 stars. You don't need to worry too much about combat power. Use your imagination and write what you need. Don't overwhelm, but crush. It's a good plot if you use your skills to your advantage. The later stage is not as good as the early stage, and I can't tell what the problem is. Anyway, there is nothing interesting to see in the later development of the parish. It starts to get boring. I don't even want to continue chasing. Maybe it's because of the lack of interaction with the three gods. The development period is too long. It feels like it has become a boring ancient Machiavellian novel with no passion.

This is a very new type of book that I have seen in Lords. Overall, it is a bit like Field's book. The early development is slow, but the plot is very detailed. Personal opinion: There are shortcomings, but I insist on updating starting from 9.0 Disadvantage 1: There is less foreshadowing and suspense, a common problem in new books. You can look at Sanjiu's books or other high-scoring lord stories for inspiration (such as Princess, don't be afraid of the knight coming, etc.) Disadvantage 2: The characters are not very three-dimensional, most of them are flat characters (single personality, emotions, no complex psychology). For example, the protagonist's teacher can actually reuse his identity. Because he was born in a poor family and was not taken seriously, he is depressed and unhappy. Occasionally, after drinking, he will see the protagonist making mistakes and being beaten and scolded (but in fact, it is for the protagonist's good, just because he is stupid and not good at expressing). In the last moment, he apologizes to the protagonist (if you don't like it, please don't complain). Advantages: The writing method is very new, the emotions are relatively delicate, the subject matter is innovative, and it gets rid of the inherent views of some lord novels. It is a book worth looking forward to [Like]

I'm very happy. The author is not as complicated as I have read before. He basically skips everything he can and understands many details very well.

It looks good, I love reading it, it cleverly balances faith and manpower, and there is no overly outrageous setting. I also like the Crusaders very much, and I look forward to the author leading the Crusaders' journey of conquest [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

I have read a hundred chapters. It is a very good Western fantasy novel, and it is a rare cleric protagonist. I feel that the rating is a bit low. The protagonist is suspected to have a deep relationship with Lucifer. There is also a Crusade at the back of the table of contents. I am looking forward to it.

A rare good book with obvious advantages and disadvantages. Let's talk about the advantages first. The subject matter is novel, the plug-ins are straightforward, and it is very good to improve the character. The world view is complete, the description of the characters in the early stage is fascinating, the writing is good, the early content is substantial, and it is exciting and exciting to move forward together around a main line and a crisis. Now let's talk about the shortcomings. The protagonist is a bit too smooth. All plans are absolutely successful. Whatever is needed comes. If you want to be exciting all the time, there must be danger and resistance. It seems that the protagonist has foreshadowing for every opportunity he encounters, but this is too smooth in itself. There is also no knife. Just like in A Song of Ice and Fire, no matter how legendary the person is, they will still die. (I only saw my clumsy opinion in Chapter 63)

It's great to read, but one problem is that it's better to call each faction in the church by the power of God, such as the God of the Sky faction and the God of Nature faction, because many people find foreign names difficult to remember and easy to get confused. This is the case with phenomenal divine books like Lord of Mysteries. I recommend it to friends who like reading novels and they say they often get confused.

So far, the beginning is okay, but the imagination is not rich enough and the skills are not fully utilized.

The writing is good, at least there are no big logical problems, and the human heart is written in detail, and the use of extraordinary abilities is also reasonable. The rating of the whole book should be above 8.5, But now the rating is low

This book is good and fast-paced. If there are no major bad points or small bad points, I will list them to see if you accept it. 1. He killed his ex-girlfriend Verandi who gave birth to his child. 2. The protagonist in the early stage was a bit stereotyped. That's all I personally feel, but it can be ignored. Overall, the novel is good.

Okay, the Western Fantasy leader founded a country stream? It should become a papal kingdom or something in the future. Anyway, the main plot now is revenge, but there were a lot of foreshadowings that were not written about liquidation before. If you like it, you will probably like it very much.

It is true that I have rarely read books on this subject in recent years. Objectively speaking, the author's writing is not very good, but the plot and subject matter are better. Of course, the fact is that once the novelty wears off, it becomes difficult to read it. The current score of seven is a bit low, but the upper limit is visible to the naked eye.

It's a good Western fantasy novel, but the main character doesn't start out as a stereotypical knight. It's pretty good, but there are too few updates.

I would like to give some suggestions to the author, change the icon that is the book. You can spend money to find a good one on Pinduoduo, it's not expensive and only costs a few yuan. There will be a lot more readers because some people read icons.

A good book, but the rating is too low and the number of words is too small. It is rare to find a good book with an online IQ.

It's really beautiful, and I'm really struggling to rate it. It felt okay until Chapter 200. But when I saw Chapter 234, I really don't like that kind of harem novel, but this book felt really good, so I canceled it. Is there any similar meal replacement? No cp? 245, I wrote it wrong before

A very nice book, very down-to-earth

It's very interesting. As a 6-year-old bookworm, I haven't seen a Western fantasy book that appeals to my appetite for a long time. I hope the author can write more books. It's not enough [Chigua]

Very delicately written. The skills inside are also different from ordinary Western fantasy. Very special. The score should be higher. Come on, author

There is something, but the quantity is small Do it faster, do it faster

I feel that the author has been cheated. When I clicked the three dots in the upper right corner to rate and star, there was no network error. I tried other novels and they were fine, but this one is like this [smile]

I don't know why, but it looks good anyway

Hurry up and write, kid, this is my last five stars.

Why is it only a few minutes past seven? Come on, brush it on, it looks great!

This book is considered a fine product on Tomato, with its writing style, details, foreshadowing, and characterization. It's not in the same dimension as those running accounts. Incredibly low rating

Give five stars first, and there will be no problem at the start The middle doesn't look good

I think it is one of the better Western novels in Tomato.