Honghuang: You Say I Can't Fight? One Song Breaks Your Heart

The idea is so wonderful. I think of Nuwa as a fool. What do you think?

The protagonist's character design is not good at 250. He talks about being non-involved and not causing karma, but in fact, you are involved in the Longhan Tribulation, and you are also involved in the Evidence of Immortals and Demons. Although I didn't look at the back, but I calculated that you, Lich Liangjie, canonize the gods, and I guess you will also be involved.

To be honest, the protagonist's early combat power is not very high. It's really poisonous to do this. He inexplicably leads the Feng tribe to travel across the ancient wilderness, and inexplicably shares the opportunity with the Feng tribe. He keeps talking about avoiding calamities, but his participation is very high. The protagonist gives the Feng tribe so many things, and the Feng tribe asks the protagonist to help with one sentence. He doesn't even come here to find a junior, and then goes all the way. This heroine is really troubled, so just take the Feng tribe as her father🤦

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It is inconsistent, and if the first few chapters were not purchased from the beginning, then they are the result of constant revisions. The writing style and plot at the end are completely different from the beginning. If the beginning is 60 points, the rest will only be 10 points.

It's not vernacular enough, it's not ancient enough, and it jumps repeatedly between the two. In addition, the Dinghai Divine Pearl has been given a new name, Qiankun Pearl. Although it is reasonable, it is not suitable. There are also some small details that I can't remember at the moment.

It's a bit baffling to have just one female protagonist appear.

The writing is incomprehensible, this heroine is so good

A good prehistoric work 💕 🍉

The protagonist's character is not likeable