I Traveled Through Time and Accumulated Merit in the World of Immortality

It has a worldview where women and men are equal, and there are many female characters. Unlike other stories, the heroine of this story is positioned as a passer-by. She practices alone in the early stage, and then ventures into the secret realm with a group of friends in the later stage. The overall rhythm is relatively flat, and there is nothing thrilling and big.

Come on, the author, his writing style is immature but it can be seen that the author really wanted to write this article for women, come on, come on

In the middle, I looked at the heroine as if she was a saint, so I'm not sure what I'm looking at. Well, the heroine seems to be growing up, you can continue watching

Very good, more suitable for me to watch

I quite like the story, female-centered✔️ However, the writing style may still need polishing, there is a lack of punctuation marks, and the wording is a bit clumsy. If these can be changed, I believe it will be very beautiful!