The cold and stubborn academic hero Shen Xubai has a strong interest in the "superior heroine Lin Yanzhou" who is elegant on the surface but hides her secrets (not the bud of love, but more the desire of the strong to explore the strong). The contact with each other makes the two people no longer calm in their hearts.
Reader comments
There are too many descriptions of appearance and environment at the beginning, often in long paragraphs, which do not take precedence over the plot and lack reader interest. It is recommended that there be no suspense at the end or in the middle, so that someone or something can be appropriately left blank to give a sense of mystery, arouse readers' speculation, and attract their interest. Or the plot can be introduced directly at the beginning, and the portrait can be appropriate. The environment can be written when the character's emotions are strong to set off. Of course, if you want to write that the environment affects the character's emotions, let's talk about it separately.
I only read the first few chapters, but are the later chapters relevant to the topic? At least let readers have a clear plot development route (you can ignore this sentence)
There are too many descriptions of appearance and environment at the beginning, often in long paragraphs, which do not take precedence over the plot and lack reader interest. It is recommended that there be no suspense at the end or in the middle, so that someone or something can be appropriately left blank to give a sense of mystery, arouse readers' speculation, and attract their interest. Or the plot can be introduced directly at the beginning, and the portrait can be appropriate. The environment can be written when the character's emotions are strong to set off. Of course, if you want to write that the environment affects the character's emotions, let's talk about it separately. I only read the first few chapters, but are the later chapters relevant to the topic? At least let readers have a clear plot development route (you can ignore this sentence)
Very interesting, the plot is very novel