HP Hogwarts First Water Master

It's pretty, but it's a bit short, so I'll keep it up! The heroine is the type I have seen for the first time. Although when I first read it, I was a little uncomfortable with this kind of truly self-interested and purposeful character from an emotional point of view, but from a rational point of view, I can completely understand the behavioral logic of the heroine. I like this kind of heroine who truly controls everything. I love reading dog training literature🥰🥰🥰 In a sense, I personally prefer the type of person taught by Sri Lanka, but I still think there is nothing wrong with the heroine being so abusive to him hehe. Very, very sweet and very delicious. This kind of emotion that is difficult to distinguish between love and hate, it is too absolute to say that it is love between the opposite sex, but it is not so pure. I like this tone very much. . . Great love. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ It can be seen that the author's writing power and literary quality are also very high and profound. The writing style is unmatched and refreshing. The investigation of the historical and social background even made me feel like I was reading the original work. It's so detailed and thoughtful. The preface at the beginning of each chapter has a profound meaning. The grasp of character creation and psychological speculation are also perfect. Author, I really want to praise you very much.

The main character is pretty good, but there's nothing Riddler-esque about it, which makes me a little disappointed. And I don't know if the author himself has noticed it, but he is particularly partial to Gryffindor.

It's good-looking, the heroine has a very full image, she is a real heartthrob, she is very strong, she still doesn't let up, she is very smart, she can create her own spells, she is a true duel master. Riddle-like Slytherin in Gryffindor House. Very good at playing with people's hearts. It is not recommended to promote Snape. I feel sorry for Snape because the heroine is using him as a tool. The other characters are also very fleshed out, I really like Barty Crouch Jr., He is a very popular character. Spoilers involved: I already had a kiss with Dog Wolf, and it was quite delicious. Support greatly continue to update A very cute heroine who gets what she wants and fights for herself

Well, it's quite interesting, but I always felt that the relationship in the early and middle stages was a bit fragile. Well... There was a Quidditch James who confessed his love in the early stage. (In fact, I was quite disgusted with confessing in public.) Because of the rejection, I looked at the heroine with a cold and scrutinizing gaze. I always felt that the boat of friendship could capsize at the drop of a hat. There is also the mid-term. Why did Snape get angry at the heroine when he hid the heroine's photo and had a conflict with Sirius? What does it have to do with the heroine? But overall it looks good

Shocking and delicious😋 The writing is very good to the naked eye. It is still a bit green in the first few chapters, but it has matured after more than ten chapters. By the last few chapters of the latest update, I was speechless. The ambition of the heroine is visible to the naked eye. She is confident, sharp, and has strong execution and self-control. A born king and leader. Like a hidden panther or tiger. The dog training plot is a free exercise and plays a mediating role in various plots. The feeling it brings to me is shock. Dumbledore's image is full and vivid, and he is not as kind and gentle in body and mind as other fans I have read. The description completely creates the strongest White Demon King in the modern era. The whole book is like a passionate biography about seizing power (no adjective can be found). The heroine has strong charm and excellent strength and moves towards the future she hopes for step by step. I hope there will be an if line where the heroine returns to her original world! It's best to bring one with you to your harem! ! ! ! Finally - it's so beautiful, shocking and delicious😋

Long review, I just discovered this treasure book yesterday and read it in one sitting. It's a very touching story. The teacher has a good grasp of the character's personality, and each character is vivid. For example, Snape is essentially a person who is obsessed with black magic to the point of fanaticism. He will not give up on his goals without thinking. Just like in the early stage, Deer Dog thought he was friends with Tata, so he took it upon himself to teach Snape a lesson for her. Each character has advantages and disadvantages, and there is no OOC at all. The highlight is definitely Tata's personality charm. Tata is a girl who dares to resist and pursue. She is unwavering in her own goals. She will find ways to remove obstacles and will not become an accessory to friends. She has her own ideas and is a proper heroine. It is very enjoyable to watch. Moreover, Tata's logical thinking is very clear. She clearly knows what she wants, how to realize the plan, and sticks to the goal step by step. However, I sometimes think that the entire writing rhythm is very fast. It is good to stick to the goal, but if she keeps using extreme methods to force herself to grow rapidly, will there ever be a time when King Tata can't bear it? Although she has lived two lifetimes, from the fact that Tata affirms the existence of friendship in her heart, she also needs emotional support. Then there is the character bond. Tata is purposefully close to Snape and Barty Jr. Snape's performance after entering school is indeed unsatisfactory, but if there are changes, it should have a good ending. Barty Jr.'S words were initially due to his father's admiration for Tata, which led him to start exploring Tata, and then he was completely impressed by Tata's strength and charisma, while Sirius was completely accidental. They met, but Sirius was attracted to Tata first, and then deepened the relationship step by step, and maintained the relationship. Just like the author said, Sirius should let go of his arrogance, and Tata should let down his guard. They both have to maintain this relationship well, so their relationship line is the most exciting relationship line I have seen now. I hope Xiaolu can also come to the table soon, because the sunshine straight ball series really attracts me! Having said so much, I actually dreamed of saying that sentence. There may be some prefaces that do not match the words in the back, but it is enough to express one meaning. The teacher writes really well. The teacher has read many books and has a solid foundation. The writing logic and character dialogue are very smooth. This is really a rare HP fan. Come on, teacher, I will always follow you! ! [Send heart][Send heart]

Super pretty! ! ! ! This is the most beautiful and high-quality HP fanfic I have ever seen on Tomato. I would give it a hundred stars out of five. The most interesting part of this book is not even the love line, but the career line of the heroine. She is a descendant of Slytherin, but she chose Gryffindor. This is the best choice. But at the same time, apart from her ambition, she is a very kind and pure person, and receiving the most sincere blessing from the unicorn is enough to prove it. The heroine is really tough and tenacious, and she is the most handsome wizard I have ever seen. In the emotional line, every relationship between Hall's parents, the friendship with Lily, James Potter Lupine's emotions, and little Barty (I really like him hahaha) are all written very well. I'm really looking forward to Snape's scenes. When will he realize that he was so wrong? My favorite plot now is Taliyah's experience in Albania was really a dangerous environment that made people sweat, feel distressed and admired at the same time.

What a fairy HP fan! The author is so amazing. He has everything from storyline, characters, writing, and ideas to his fingertips. The writing is so good, it's super, super beautiful! I haven't finished this book yet, so I can't help but comment and give it five stars! Thalia is so charming. Her IQ, EQ, ability, and ambition are all top-notch. I think as long as Thalia wants to, no one will dislike her or love her! Thalia wants it, Thalia gets it! Dog training literature yyds! Whether Thalia is fighting with Dumbledore's teachers and students or with the group of male protagonists around her who have a crush on her, she is really beautiful! Moreover, when Talia is moving towards her goal, her parents and friends who love her all choose to support her and follow her. I really love this kind of firm love! The author, please tell me it's better, it's so beautiful! PS: I really love Jamie so much, just enjoy this kind of passionate love from a straight-ball puppy! ! !

First of all, it can be seen that the author's literary quality is quite high, at least the literary knowledge reserve is very good. The story is very interesting, the plot progresses step by step, and it sets up a little suspense from time to time, which is fascinating. In terms of character creation, the heroine is very successful. The heroine gives people a vigorous and positive vitality. She is very powerful, very vivid, and very attractive. This is the charm that many fan fiction protagonists lack. As for the creation of other characters, it may be because the focus of the plot is on the description of the heroine, or the heroine feels too profound, causing the other characters to not seem so vivid. However, this is a fanfic after all, and I actually prefer to watch the protagonist create a different story of his own than to experience some pre-existing things with the original characters. Generally speaking, this book is one of the best among Tomato's many fanfics and deserves a full score. I would like to thank the teacher for creating a powerful protagonist like Thalia who has the vitality to accommodate all things, and writing such a unique and interesting story. I also hope that the teacher can be happy every day, everything goes well, and write more fanfics like this. Yeah 😘

It's quite nice, but it looks intermittent, like a diary. I write whatever comes to mind.

It's very beautiful, but I have a small suggestion. Can the madam change it a bit? It still involves the lyrics of "Zhennu"! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It must be five stars. The heroine is really good and works hard. The male protagonists are also pretty good. Hehe, I like the charming male protagonist. I really like the fact that the heroine immediately starts to deal with bullying after being assigned to Gryffindor and doesn't get used to other people. The heroine is getting stronger and stronger with her continuous efforts. The plot is coherent and not abrupt. I personally don't like the strong male protagonist who just says that he wants to lock up the heroine every day. This book completely feels like it. I don't feel this kind of discomfort (respect everyone's different opinions and don't scold me) the author's writing is really good. Come on [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] I look forward to the heroine doing a good job in rectifying the magic world in the future [admiration] This book is one of the best in my life. It is really well written [shy] [shy]

Come and read this book! ! The chapters are long, the characters are very three-dimensional, there is no suffocation, and it is very novel to not follow the routine. The heroine's family is very warm and nice, and her identity is also powerful, she is sensible and smart. I haven't finished it yet, but it is very attractive to me.

Well, I feel that there are relatively few details and the timeline spans too fast, which makes some plots seem a bit abrupt. But overall it is still a well worth reading. I especially like Tata's sobriety and strength. Keep up the good work.

It looks good. The protagonist is a leader who becomes a leader in different directions according to different encounters and the different attitudes of others. The following part of this article is the story of revolution for equality, and how he uses this to control and expand his power to reach the top.

This book is really great. It's not the kind where a lot of people like the heroine because of her beauty, but because she shows her true strength and likes this feeling of having an online IQ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. Big boost for the author and support you [shy][shy]

Immortal product! As the female protagonist, I really like Tata's pursuing and acting character, and I really enjoy it* \ 0 / * (I'm just too skinny to bear to watch it ( ≧ Д ≦ )

It's good to watch, the content description is interesting, the plot is also novel, the heroine's whimsical ideas are quite powerful, especially when she instigated Sirius to steal her family's treasury and black magic books hahahahahahaha

Although I've only read half of it, I can't wait to give this book a perfect score. The heroine has a very distinct personality, and her character is really well established. She has her own ideas, and she is not a heroine who is modeled on cameras and facial makeup. God knows how rare this is in HP fan fiction. Moreover, the heroine will not completely revolve around the original characters. Even though she is unhappy with them, she still washes her underwear with a cold face and insists on surrounding them like a dog. The heroine of this book doesn't know that at all!

Ambitious girls who like this kind of hard work with practical actions, many heroine stories will put a lot of emphasis on the male protagonist. Tata is the only heroine with a stronger woman. The most shining point in the story is for the younger sister. The male protagonists will only become beautiful decorations around the queen. This is so cool [I learned it]

This book is truly a masterpiece! ! The heroine's character totally stands up, and with Merlin's beard, there's a natural-born Minister of Magic here. When the heroine preached about fighting Voldemort in the Room of Requirement, I felt like I wanted to follow her! And the emotional line between Jamie and Sirius is also very sweet hehe [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart]

It's very interesting to watch. The protagonist focuses on career and is very ambitious. The emotional line is more delicate. From the perspective of the other person, you will feel that falling in love with her is as easy as breathing. Originally, when I read the introduction, I thought it was just putting the characters in a frame to highlight the greatness of the protagonist. But on the contrary, the author has written the psychology and characters very thoroughly. The protagonist has a very charming personality. He does not know the plot of the original work, so there is no natural filter for the character. It is more because of the regrets of his previous life that he wants to make a career and make changes to the mistakes of the authorities, which also affects people in the process.

Oh my god! It's so beautiful, the description is very delicate [shy], our Thalia is simply a very cute baby, I love the author so much, the author will update! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss] This HP article is highly recommended. I guarantee you won't regret it [makes a face], my dears, hurry up! ! ! [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Come on, author, I support you, update quickly [Love][Love] Not only is the writing detailed now, but it also has an overall perspective, the structure is also very good, and the writing style is simply outstanding [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

Wow, I found a new article. It's rare to see articles with female protagonists and female warriors in HP fan fiction. I've been reviewing it in one day. I still have so much to say.

It's one of the few good stories from the past. It's a miracle. The author really loves you. It would be better if it could be completed in one day. ^0＾~ I really like Tata's character. He's like a king. He hooked up and captivated a lot of people.

Really pretty! ! ! I wasn't interested in the introduction at first, but it was really interesting to read the book. The writing is very good and the description of the character's behavior is also very good. Everyone is very three-dimensional and not one-sided. The author will answer almost all the questions raised in the paragraphs, and the occasional sub-generational extras are also very interesting (if you don't like to read it, skip it by yourself. The marked ones are clear and will not affect the viewing experience) I think Thalia's character is great and fits the introduction, especially the inner denunciation of Snape in Chapter 76 which is very real (Why did you include it in this book review? I didn't understand this at first, and I felt Snape was a bit pitiful, but after thinking about it, this is the perception we often have from God's perspective, but from Thalia's perspective, I feel that this attitude is very real, a very vivid person. So I am deeply impressed) Thalia is very charming and the author's writing is good, especially Thalia's leadership and strength. I enjoyed reading it. . . Another point is that the number of chapters updated by the author every day is touching [send heartfelt]

Super pretty! The protagonist is particularly charming. The author's writing style is also very good, and his research on human nature and some analysis from a political perspective are all refreshing to me. The sentence at the beginning of each chapter is always very interesting, meaningful and charming.

It's really, really, really good-looking. I like the heroine's character very much. She is decisive and resolute. She knows what she wants to do and strives for that goal. The interaction between the heroine and her male guests is also very natural and very cute [Adoration]

It's nice to watch. The plot is very reasonable and the writing is very good. The heroine has her own firm ideals and directions. She is very powerful. Oh, she also naturally enjoys men's sex without giving her a title and plays with handsome guys in her hands. Sister, I want to be stunned by you.

The writing is quite good, and the plot and wording are much better than some bad fan fiction. The only problem is that there is a bit too much description of the heroine's appearance. However, I skipped the rating after reading more than ten chapters. Maybe there will be no more after that. After all, it has just started.