[Unhinged male lead + yandere + forced love + imprisonment + scheming heroine + male rivals]
“Shen Nianwei, you’re mine. You can only be mine.” Gu Yan pins her against the floor-to-ceiling window, with an abyss stretching out behind her.
Five years ago, she left him without looking back. Five years later, he has carefully spun a web around her. Debt, threats, imprisonment: he uses the most extreme means to keep her by his side.
Everyone says Gu Yan has gone mad, but no one sees the calculations in Shen Nianwei’s eyes. When the hunter seeking revenge becomes the prey, this war fought in love’s name will come down to who breaks first.
“Gu Yan,” she says, brushing a finger over his bloodstained lips with a bewitching smile. “Are you sure you’re the one who’s crazy, and not me?”
One woman, two men. Unhinged CEO + yandere; intensely controlling and possessive. The heroine is a scheming black lotus, and all the male leads are chaste.
Actually, I only have one question for the author. Who is the hero of this book? I can accept np, but the premise is that it is for use and not sincere. But actually based on my current three views, I can't accept it. While saying to this person, my first time is yours, so I like you, and at the same time saying to another person that I actually like you, and then saying that I actually want both, it looks very messy overall. This book is about emotional description, because whether you describe it in detail or purely, what you describe makes people feel that you are towards this person. Sincerely, this aspect is really well described, but you happen to conflict with your setting, making it a bit difficult to distinguish the main body of the emotional line. How can you tell who the heroine is attracted to? If it is an introduction, then you must write it clearly. If you don't tell the truth, you should reflect it in the details. The description of your emotional line is okay, but it is not particularly good when used in 1v2. I hope this can be changed, because I think this book has potential to be a good book. One of the books that is not so popular is this one. Of course, it may be that I didn't read it very carefully, but at least if the male protagonist is really introduced, then it is best to have a little difference between the two love lines of the one named Lu, otherwise you will actually feel that the female protagonist is really different after reading this book. . In the early stage, it was because revenge required the use of understanding. And I think it's not just your emotional lines that need to be modified to distinguish them. I think that no matter what you say, your feelings for the two male protagonists are in the later stages, because you have passed the stage of using revenge, then you should say that you are sincere to one person, and the rest are either superficial politeness, or just cut it off. If this book really continues to have this kind of need for both people, then Sometimes I offer an olive branch to one, sometimes to another, sometimes I am disappointed with this, and sometimes I am disappointed with that. Then I think this book must be very, very messy. Since the introduction has already written about the person surnamed Gu, there is no need to have too much entanglement with the person surnamed Lu, because the emotional line of this book has at least developed to the middle and late stages. For a book to be popular, the context must be clear, and in fact, many of the people in this era are already smart and thoughtful when reading books. After all, they have at least read the book. Writing like this is a bit unethical (of course, some people may like to read this kind of book). But if it is written like this, the probability of it becoming popular is actually not very high. (Of course, I have a small idea, that is, I hope to change the male protagonist's surname to Lu. Of course, if you, the author, didn't have such an intention at the beginning, you don't have to worry about it.)
Super beautiful hahahahaha I recommend it 😳