OOC warning for male protagonists
After traveling through thousands of worlds, the master has exhausted his points just to stay in the world of "Love and Deep Space". This was once the "ideal land" carefully selected by the controller, with the perfect lovers that the controller yearned for - the calm and protective Li Shen, the elegant and mysterious Shen Xinghui, the romantic and uninhibited Qi Yu, the sunny and responsible Xia Yizhou, and the unfathomable Qin Che.
Familiar Deep Sky City, unfamiliar cold eyes. They are alive in front of me, with real flesh and blood, clear edges and corners, carrying pain and secrets beyond the game settings, and even... Full of doubts about me, an "extraterrestrial visitor".
"Is what I love a preset paper phantom, or is this real individual in front of me who is angry, makes mistakes, and has an independent soul?"
The soul torture has not yet subsided, and greater crises are coming one after another!
Forced to coexist with five "familiar strangers":
Witnessing the pain of Li Shen's frozen soul, can I be the glimmer of light that thaws him?
Watching Qi Yu burn all the colors of his life to save me, how can I make up for his exhausted canvas?
Under Xia Yizhou's solid protection, can the heartbeats across space have the same frequency?
Is Shen Xinghui's graceful approach a helping hand, or a deeper control?
And what is gradually distorting behind Qin Che's cold lenses, is it scientific fantasy or... Possessiveness?
When the cold judgment of the will of deep space comes, and when the truth of the parallel world tears apart the disguise, I use my soul as the anchor and my emotions as my pen to draw the way home in the cracks of the dimensions - this time, I will no longer attack the setting. I want to capture their hearts in the real collision of flesh and soul! In the collapsing deep space world, pursue the ultimate answer to love!
Reader comments
The content structure is quite good, but the changes to the character itself are too big, a bit OOC
The content structure is quite good, but the changes to the character itself are too big, a bit OOC
It's novel, but it feels a bit ooc