Luo Xiaohei: in Charge of the City God, You Can Recruit Unlimited Disciples!

Eat a lot! This is so awesome! This was so awesome that I was hit with a left hook that made black powder all over the ground, and a right slap that made me kneel down repeatedly; a left foot goose-stepped and kicked the trash can in front of me. The trash can overturned, and I was scolded, but I didn't cry or make a fuss, because I ate the most fragrant and delicious food in the world. It was an unforgettable meal, and I will eat the fragrant rice that my soul will live forever! ! ! ! Whether it's husband or wife, please give me more! ! My Tianbaozi is at the level of a goddess! Goddess, please update more, we love you! ! !

I finally found a Xiaohei fanfic on Tomato that suits my taste [please update] The setting of this book is very novel, and the author also strictly refers to the setting of the original work [I learned it] The author's writing style is very good, which makes people want to read more after reading one chapter. I am looking forward to the next plot [Sending Hearts]

It's great. I'm already looking forward to the meeting scene between the protagonist and Xiao Hei. The author is very grateful [Like] (PS: The protagonist, you must be so beautiful without CP [I'm about to cry])

Infinitely cute, hehehehehehehehe, Chen Huang~ You are a fragrant, soft, sweet, glutinous, honey, cream, sweet, honey, crispy, smooth, tender, dense and elastic, silky, fluffy, fragrant, sweet, oily, moist, thin and soft little cake~~~~~~~~~~

It's a pretty good book. When I first saw the title, I thought it was a funny style of writing, so I didn't click on it... After reading it, I found that the writing style is generally more comfortable, and I visually judged that the book will cover the later part of the senior sister. I'm looking forward to it (๑• . •๑). I hope the updates won't be discontinued [Sending my heart] There are really very few fans of Luo Xiaohei in Tomato, and even fewer of them can be read (╥_╥)

To be honest, I think this book is super good-looking, with both original and original plots. Unlike some fan novels in the name of fan fiction, the result is that they just incorporate the plot of the original work and squeeze out the roles of the supporting characters, leaving no original plot at all. This book is not boring at all and makes people want to keep reading. The ending is quite sudden. To be honest, it shouldn't be too bad. It's very well written. The author has a great writing style and a sharp mind. The foreshadowing and worldview are also written very well without any sense of abruptness. Great support, author, I look forward to your next book◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞

The simple narrative is very similar to Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles, which gives people a strong sense of immersion and is very peaceful and healing. However, there are too few fanfics about Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles. The writing is quite good. I hope people who like Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles will read it and let the author get some bonuses so that he can have the passion to continue creating good chapters. I feel that the author is a bit overwhelmed in the latter part, um, he writes a bit too hastily. It feels like the merging of two and one is a bit messy. It doesn't have the same feeling as Luo Xiaohei before [face covering] [face covering], and he can kill hundreds of clones of the protagonist. Even if he relies on foreign objects, there are too many foreign objects. It means that the opponent has hundreds of immortals, and there are not so many guild halls.

It's good-looking, the description is not too much nonsense, and the plot is ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ I hope there will still be no cp in the future. Cheers to the author◟(˶> ᎑ <˶)◞❤️

The most appetizing episode (the most miserable episode of Naga) starts from Lanxi Town, and fills up every regret. The characters of everyone are perfectly captured, and there are not too many original parts. Various famous scenes are also retained that should be retained, but the amount is the same as the original work, which is pitiful. I watched it all in one afternoon/ The author should update his words soon. Whether I am sending a blade or a blade server depends on how many chapters you update.

A very good book! Based on the fanfic, there are no popular mistakes such as character OOC or the collapse of the combat power system. Moreover, the author's writing style can not only write about the passionate feeling of fighting but also the faint sense of warmth in daily life. He also avoids many knives without disturbing the main plot. There are not many such high-quality fanfics. Highly recommend www. Ending of the novel - I was once again amazed by the author's great imagination and writing style. He did not choose to cram in words to affect the perception, but chose to officially end the novel at the most appropriate time. This can be said to be the best Luo Xiaohei fanfic I have read on Tomato. I hope I can write more daily side stories in the future www. I still really want to watch Xiaohei go to school [cry] [cry]

I gave it a five-star rating [laughs] Duan commented and liked that I did it [rolls eyes] I saw the advertising gift [I almost cried] Please hurry up and type. I just finished watching the movie and I have a few fanfics on Tomato. The author's is the most to my liking. Please update me quickly. My child will go to school in ten days [please update]

There are not many Xiaohei fan books in the whole network. I personally feel that this one is in line with my taste. The timeline is also further forward. I feel that I can write a lot in the future. I look forward to more exciting content from the author. More, not enough Come on Nothing more to say, five stars for you

The plot is good, but I am gradually facing a dilemma of finishing the plot. What follows is the author's independent innovation. The other thing is the connection of the plot. Still a fly in the ointment. The plot takes a sudden turn. It should be a gradual rhythm. Support it. I hope I can write it to the end.

So far, the writing style is good. Rare in Luo Xiaohei. I feel that the pace is a bit fast in the early stage. I hope there will be no female protagonist. The author must update it to chapter 500 and don't stop updating it. It's tied again. When will the author update Chapter 10 and scare me? [Laughing], when will we meet Nezha? I want to see Nezha appear. It will be fun for two child gods to get together [laughing] [thinking]

The beginning is relatively old-fashioned. The protagonist travels through time and is given a novice gift pack, and then recruits apprentices to complete tasks to achieve status and strength upgrades. This may be a little annoying for some people, but the author's plot promotes smooth flow, and the writing style is relatively solid. The main focus is to promote the plot. There are not so many protagonist upgrades, and the characters are flesh and blood. Overall, it is a good quality fanfic. I will give it a try. I look forward to the author's follow-up updates. There is also hope that there will be no cp in the later stage. It's so cute to have a kitten as an apprentice. I like to see the protagonist who turns into a kitten next to his apprentice.

It's quite interesting, but the word count is too few! Although I don't know what the author wrote in the end, I still have to express my feelings. I personally insist on no cp! Don't engage in cliché lovemaking! It's good for career or daily life~

Looks good, looks good, looks good! ! ! Like it very much! I hope there is no heroine! ! !

A peerless book, very sweet and safe to eat without a knife, but too little [love] [please update] [love] "Xuanzong of Heaven and Earth, the root of Wan Qi!" "Cultivation for thousands of eons, prove my magical power!" Author update soon The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. Your Majesty's decree transcends your lonely soul. Escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as an adult

This book is really popular [palms face] I still remember that before, the number of updates was only a few hundred, but now it costs six to seven thousand, and before it almost exceeded ten thousand (more than nine thousand, which is not inferior to the popular ones on the list at all) Why are there fewer and fewer updates? [Fear] [Sadness] There were only two updates before.

Good-looking and good-looking. I do like multiple female leads, it's very interesting.

The early and middle stages are very interesting, with the original synopsis and characters written quite solidly, and Luo Xiaohei's tranquil flavor is also quite strong. However, in addition to Infinite, the apprentices I accepted also included three self-created female apprentices (I don't know if Qi Ziyan is included in the original work, but the Vatican's artificial mass-produced resurrection saint Balsam pear and the little life's Kamishiro Ei, a dragon clan that bounces around and pinches, are a bit lifeless) The original work didn't go into detail in the middle and later stages, and I wrote some self-made plots to express a wave of patriotic feelings. I stopped watching it when I saw "Galaoba" in my childhood, and it didn't have enough stamina. Moreover, this book also has a situation where the combat power collapses. There don't seem to be many immortals in the original book, at least not to the level of being a bad person. Later in the novel, any one randomly selected will be at the immortal level, and then give the protagonist a chance to show off. The evaluation is based on looking at the original outline of the original work. It is enough to fulfill his dream.

Those who can chase it to the end are rare. The setting is very good and the City God is very nice. Except for the second apprentice who doesn't seem to have much of a role, and it didn't reflect anything after being taken away, the others are fine. The main thing is that the update is very slow and I can't afford it.

The subject matter is good and the writing style is good. Most of it is consistent with the original work. There is no forced text for the sake of writing. Anyone who knows Luo Xiaohei's original work will understand why it is so short. It is already good enough after writing so much.

The content is very good, and it feels like it has completed Luo Xiaohei's timeline, just like a sweet dream that people who read Luo Xiaohei's War Chronicles have: If I were allowed to go back in time and become a god, it feels like this, but it is just a fantasy expressed in words.

It's really good. The storyline, battle scenes and imaginative ideas are all top-notch. It can also be seen that the author is a very loyal fan of Luo Xiaohei (Bao Lanxi Town). I hope the author can speed up the update speed. In addition, can you give me a little extra daily routine? Hey (ºº ) ♪ Come on, come on! ♪ ミ ゛ミ ∧＿∧ ミ゛ミ ミ ミ ( ∀ )ミ゛ミ ゛゛＼／゛゛ I⌒ヽ｜ (＿) ノ ∪

It's very good. It's well written. It's the first time I've seen this kind of thing. But after reading the latest chapter, I have a question I want to ask, that is, are Laojun and Qingning a CP? The age difference plus the master-disciple always feels a little awkward and I can't eat. Please let me know so that I can be prepared @stay in good health all night

It's so good. I hope the protagonist has no censorship. The author's writing is so good (^0^). Don't stop updating after the movie is over. 😭 I feel so empty after reading it😭. If Luo Xiaohei updates it one day, will the author come back and continue creating🥹

Beautiful! I like this type of book very much. The author writes well. I hope it can be updated soon and I can see Xiaohei sooner. I also hope the author writes better and better. This book becomes more and more popular [Note]

Come on, author (ง•̀_•́)งYou must stick to such a beautiful fanfic of Luo Xiaohei, you are my spiritual food now! ! !

Awesome, those whose timeline is not directly in the movie seem to have only seen this book, but the update is a little slow, 47 chapters in twenty days, but I can understand the author's first book (except for the movie and anime, I have not seen it, and I watched the movie and anime a long time ago. I was a little confused but it was okay)