HP: Stay Away from My Sister.

Teacher, the teacher is really beautiful, super beautiful, especially the part where Dursley and Petunia said, "Protect your child. If she doesn't protect her, will she die? Those weird guys say that a dangerous guy took her away. I never think so." "Her child took her away. A child who had nothing to do with me came to me and took my sister away. They are all debt collectors and a group of monsters!" This paragraph is really well written. The teacher is like the god of inspiration from heaven [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

It's really good-looking [shy] [admiring]. Finally, I didn't break up with Lily, and my character design doesn't have occ. God knows how many books I searched for before I could find one that didn't slander Lily [crying]. They were all slanderous about Lily licking Snape, or they were both slanderous.

This is the second book where I felt that the relationship between Snape/Lily/Petunia was written smoothly. I like Penny in this book very much. There is no time travel or paranoia, and the friends she makes are also portrayed with their own characteristics. Her strength comes step by step, and her tolerance is a boost to her family and friends. I really like this story. I hope the ending is cp-free, but everything depends on the author's wishes.

It's a subject I like very much. Fan fiction that favors the original work The characters of Lily and Snape are well grasped, and it can be seen that the author has carefully studied the characters of these two people. Especially Snape. In the original work, Snape was a character who highly resonated with Voldemort's thoughts. Because of his native family, he hated Muggles who advocated magic. Although he said to Lily, who was born as a Muggle: everyone is no different. But from the bottom of his heart, he felt that wizards were superior to Muggles, which was why he and Lily later took different paths. Moreover, the aspect of suppressing his inner emotions was also described in the original novel. From beginning to end, he only thought that Lily left him because of the "mudblood" he accidentally blurted out, but he did not expect that Lily would understand that they had already embarked on different paths because of his various behaviors after entering school and his current words of "mudblood." There are not many descriptions of Lily in the article, and I don't have a clear impression of Lily's character, but I very much hope that the author can write about Lily Evans in the movie, putting aside her identity as a wife and a member of the Order of the Phoenix, and just acting as a student at Hogwarts. Looking forward to looking forward to it.

I like the portrayal of this heroine very much. She is very gentle and has a very novel perspective. Just like the food she cultivates, it has vitality, is delicious, and is useful. I haven't seen much of it so far, but there have been two scenes describing the heroine's special characteristics of having morning glories. One was when her senior said she smelled fragrant, and the second was a Christmas gift given to her by Snape. Morning glories also represent It shows diligence and persistence. At the same time, the heroine has also emphasized many times that the original Penny was born in the heroine. Although the two are together, they are different and special entities. They are the most dependent on each other, so that the heroine will not be lonely. When the heroine talks to others, her language will imply it in her body. The soul of the original Penny, although the two of them are not They are one body, but they seem to be one body, and there is another meaning. The former Penny is in the current Penny. The current Penny has the diligence and tenacity of morning glory, and the original Penny in another meaning of morning glory is a short and brilliant life. Moreover, the heroine and Lily get along very well. I like them very much. They are both very alive and can think. The portrayal is very good. Snape is very consistent with the first impression of Petunia in the original plot. Lily is very keen and will defend her sister and will speak out when she feels uncomfortable. And the current heroine Petunia is also aware of this strange relationship. It is a really gentle family. Morning glory also represents loyalty and perseverance, optimism and cheerfulness. The flower written by the author is very consistent with the original Petunia and the current Petunia, their people. Although this flower is often used to describe love, the words of morning glory are also very consistent with the matter of two souls. The eternal dreams, eternal attachment and quiet thinking, as well as the conditions of the two of them. The morning glory vines are intertwined with each other, just like true friends supporting each other, even through wind and rain, this mutually dependent friendship will always be unwavering. I'm halfway through reading it, and the author has his own opinions on each character, which is gentle. Every character, no matter how they are in the original work, has a kind of warmth of family reunion here. Every character who appears, no matter whether they are controversial or not, is written in a gentle way, and is not very bad. The occurrence of the incident is actually very consistent with the innocence of children like them in my eyes. In the original work, the relationship between the parties is tight and the undercurrents are surging, forcing these brainwashed people or various things to have to make... Choices. Moreover, the heroine does not pay much attention to the colleges. She feels that each college has its own characteristics and beauty. I have read Chapter 200 so far. The author wrote about Lily and Snape's breakup, but it was more silent like water, waiting for someone quietly, and found him like this. The sisterly love is so warm, it makes people's eyes light up, and seeing Lily and Petunia now, in this article In the article, Lily has not suffered any grievances or unhappy emotions during the night. Lily has become very brave and will take the initiative to fight back against those malicious people. With strength, those who bully their sisters will be counterattacked the next second. There are also many friends around them who will help them speak and be with them. The heroine is such a vital, tough and gentle person... I hope that your next pain can be exchanged for the smiles of those who continue to protect your family and friends, and you want to pay for it. After three days of pursuit, when there was not much left left, I deliberately slowed down and still had more to say.

I have read the other two books by the author HP. The protagonists in those two books are very "light", even too light. They are depressing and "light", and their emotions will only be revealed for a moment when they experience certain important events. I think the most interesting thing is that the protagonist is often an extension of the author's will. You can see the author of different periods in the protagonists of different books. The character of Penny in this book is completely opposite to that in the previous two books. She has a strong sense of strength, does not suppress her emotions, and is unwilling to surrender. The atmosphere in the book is also very "live". It can also be seen from this book that the author has probably changed a lot in the real world. I am looking forward to the next book.

It's very warm and the heroine has a very charming personality. A very novel theme, one body with two souls. Penny and Penny really feel good getting along. We are so close that even our hearts resonate at the same frequency. We are the closest people to each other and we will never be alone. "We are born as two people, and we will be two people from birth to death in this life. We will come into this world and leave this world at the same time. No one is closer than us. We will never be alone, and we will never leave each other." Of course the writing is good, "I really like you. Magic is a very mysterious existence in this world. For a wizard, it is the first time to feel the magic flowing in the body, like being watched by a god and being favored. This is a gift and a miracle." Some people think that the heroine is like a little sun, but I think the heroine, Penny, is more like the moon with a faint moonlight, gentle yet firm and brave, optimistic yet delicate.

Looking at it now, Penny is a heartthrob. It's not the kind of person who becomes a millionaire for the sake of being a millionaire, but one who creates his strong personality charm, which is Little Moon. Pei has friends from various colleges. It's a really good friendship.

It's very interesting, a very heart-warming story line, not OOC at all. Although Petunia is ordinary in Snape's eyes, in my opinion, it is not ordinary at all. If Lily is like the fiery red sun, Petunia is like the vines in the woods, inconspicuous but full of vitality. She is not ordinary at all, she has every learning ability. Good friends in the hospital, friends of different races, living their normal lives every day. The only thing I felt a little uncomfortable watching was because the author wrote that Penny looks very ordinary, but of course this is not the author's problem. After all, Penny is also ordinary in the original book, not OOC, it is entirely my problem hahaha

A very heart-warming non-CP fanfic. The setting of this book with two souls in one body is very interesting. Penny who died in the original world and Penny in the new world healed each other. My most solid support is my other self. Magic has not given up on you. Lily is a sister-controller, and Petunia is a sister-controller. Discrimination in the academy has also been avoided very well, such as the controversial bullying incident (it may also be that Petunia's slap is very painful, but under the slap, all living beings are equal [laughs]). The most important thing is that Petunia is not used as a holster, CP Snape, and then secretly blackmails Lily.

A very nice book. It is really a rare book in the 🍅hp era where heartthrobs are popular. The author's writing is very cute and fascinating. The family relationship between Petunia and Lily is really very happy. It is in line with my image of the original work. There are a few minor settings but it is innocuous. Although there is not much content now, I am very much looking forward to it in the future. It will not be a loss to invest in it.

Third person, warm and interesting daily style, beautiful writing, with the innocence of a child (mainly interesting rhetoric) Petunia's main soul is an innocent and cheerful little girl, and her secondary soul is the original elderly Petunia Dursley. I am looking forward to the process of Petunia healing Dursley. There is no subjective house discrimination in this book. Petunia has good friends in four houses. Hufflepuff and Ravenclaw have more words than the other two houses. The plot currently stays on campus life and family life, and the disputes between colleges have not been shown much. I'm looking forward to the next plot development!

This book is a very logical book. So far, we have not discredited any character, nor whitewashed any character. The protagonist Penny has a strange plant magic bonus species. The sunflowers that come out will hit people, the lettuce will fly into the sky, and they can have conversations based on the movements of the plants. Many truths are also novel and eye-catching. Lily is sunny and cheerful, Snape is awkward, Ava is sweetheart, and Jiwen has a poisonous tongue.

It's my blessing to see such a perfect hp fan! ! Author, I will always follow you! ! ! I personally feel that there is no OOC, everyone's growth is very consistent with their character! ! Like everyone! ! (Except Voldemort and a few Death Eaters) [There may be some spoilers. The front is really warm, cute and interesting! ! Everyone is so cute... I really rarely see HP articles written in the true sense of "children"... Everyone was really a child when they were young, and they are so cute that I am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow in HP articles! ! Grandma Dursley is super gentle... Even though she is still angry about her life, she is really super gentle towards Petunia and the Lily of this world... She has always been guiding Petunia. The two are forever inseparable! ! ! ! (Take a sip of narcissus (quietly)) Lily is cute! Penny is cute! Three sisters are the best! ! ! [Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy][Crazy] I really like Penny who wrote this article so much! Penny is really a genius with self-discipline and hard work. She really knows what she wants and works hard for it. Who can not like her! But really... I know that the teacher's writing cannot be purely heartwarming. Now that I see Petunia growing up, in addition to shouting "so handsome" crazily, I feel sorry for Petunia all the time... [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] [I'm about to cry] When Penny grows up, she is really hot and sad. It makes my heart go up and down. She is really good at writing... Whether it is strategies or battles, she writes super well! ! ! I praise it like crazy! ! ! Invincible greatness! ! ! Ah, damn Voldemort, you have really done all kinds of bad things! ! ! This is really the first time I have read a story about such a fierce struggle with Voldemort... I was shocked and felt real and sad at the same time. After all, the life of my parents was really miserable.

A great book. I personally think the heroine is a very pure little badger, super cute. Although they are all trivial things, the cute little badger really makes people feel healed, and Mrs. Dursley is really healed and redeemed by her. Keep up the good work, author [laughing] I hope to update it soon. If Nu Ning can let you update it soon, I will stare at you more carefully [laughing] [get it]

The author writes well and the characters are well created. Penny built on the background of the original work. Because magic is less jealous, she is a very likeable little witch. I think the description between Lily and Snape in the book is very good. In the original work, Snape is a person who thinks about Voldemort. A very good match. Snape's ability to become Voldemort's right-hand man is proof of this. He is very arrogant and hates Muggles because of his father. He and Lily have very different ideals and are destined to be separated. The conflict between them before they were completely cut off by saying the words "Mudblood" It is already difficult to resolve. This sentence only let Lily know that there is no possibility between them. Moreover, Snape overheard the prophecy and told it to Voldemort. He did not care about the person or those who died because of the prophecy, just because the prophecy involved Lily's family and Voldemort. The need to hunt down Lily made him choose to betray Voldemort and go to Dumbledore for help. Later, because of his guilt for Lily and his self-righteous love, he chose to protect Harry. Therefore, I think Snape is portrayed very well in the article, neither ignoring his talents nor whitewashing Snape.

💙Excellent character setting 1. The protagonist is Lily's sister Petunia, who comes from Hufflepuff and has two souls in one body. It not only reasonably explains the fact that Petunia has magic but also makes up for the regrets of the original work. It is a very interesting setting. The characters are rich in character. 2. The characters of the characters in the hp original work follow the original work and add some of the author's ideas. They are reasonable and real, and the characters are vivid. Personally, I think there is no OOC at all. 💙Excellent plot 1. Different from some plots where once Penny has magic, she (with Si) will join in the cp. This article advocates no cp. The whole text is not connected by emotional lines, but focuses on the confrontation between a group of people represented by Penny and the Dark Lord and the changes in the British wizarding world. 2. Closely related to HP's original work, with rigorous logic. 3. Reasonably resolved the previous relationship between Lily and Snape. Excellent representation of some of the events during the rise of the Dark Lord. 4. The plot of Petunia being elected Minister of Magic is also very reasonable.

It's a particularly well-written article. It's very comfortable to read. I feel that except for Flint, who is hopeless, it is very friendly to the Marauders, Lily, and Snape. The emotions and plot development are very natural, very similar to the original work. It's also very rigorous. I've read some articles where the first year James and four of them call themselves Marauders and call each other Animagus. It's very awkward haha... With Petunia and Dursley here, the academic style of Hogwarts is much better in the previous generation, and there may not be Marauders. After Petunia graduates, there are still vines and sunflowers w In addition, the non-CP itself is very good, but it is not a heartthrob, nor is it a story about strong women. It is a bit philosophical about focusing on oneself, loving oneself, and accepting oneself.

The subject matter is novel, and the whole article should be quite funny. I believe in Da Da's ability and writing style [Sending my heart]

It's very interesting. The interaction between Penny and her friends is very warm. Well, I feel like there is not a fixed CP here. It just feels like I can chat casually. Yes, I don't know if the author's wife will write a fixed male protagonist in the future. It must keep the warmth! !

I would like to apologize in advance, because I have read articles about the setting of One Body and Two Souls before but the writing was very bad, so when I saw the description of One Body and Two Souls in the introduction, I quit immediately. Another account even blocked this book because it was frequently recommended. When I was eating this morning, I wanted to read something to kill time, and then I saw a recommendation, so I clicked in and read the first chapter, which directly broke the shadow left by the previous article. It's really beautiful, the author's imagination is also very magical, and the writing is very interesting. Because it was written from a young child, it doesn't feel OOC. And it has no cp, so you can watch it with confidence. I will continue to watch it. If there are no follow-up comments, it means there are no surprises and the rest of it will be good to watch.

It's okay, it's not OOC, it's very consistent with the original work, there's no sudden personality changes, and the heroine is also very pragmatic. In addition, the point that I didn't watch was that there were repeated school bullying. It was strange that the heroine often passively fought back and was punished. Although fighting is not encouraged, the fact is that self-defense counterattacks are justified in order to protect oneself, especially those that have occurred many times and should be given a harsher sentence. To be honest, the Ministry of Magic is more likely to be the home base of half-blood and Muggle wizards, so it's strange for pure-blood families to talk to each other. By analogy, it is difficult to understand that every time only the female protagonist resists this and the entire school is afraid of pure bloods.

The book is very interesting and the character of the main character is very good. There are always people in the commentary who want to take CP, and even want to turn a certain man into the male protagonist. Is there a possibility that this is a non-CP book? If you really want to read it, can you read the romance novel? Penny is the best kid

It's really lively and interesting. Penny is like a little moon, very warm and energetic. People with low energy like us are always very envious. The setting is also very novel. There are few fanfics I have seen where the heroine is from the Badger Yard. She cultivates lettuce that can spin and take off in a spiral. It's really cool.

It was a very good book, so good that I tried to read it again even though I knew there was a plot that I hated very much at the end... Although I gave up in the end. That plot made me really wow. Oh my God, I was so angry. I almost stopped watching the foursome. I almost stopped watching it. But after a holiday, they reconciled. Oh my God. I felt so uncomfortable at that time. By the way, there's also Snape. It's obvious that the protagonist's friends can protect him, but for some unknown reason, he runs away to someone else. It feels like the protagonist Lily lived a very comfortable life before she entered school. She had friends in every college and could play with her. After Lily entered school, I actually don't remember what those five men wanted to do. I only remember that I was about to explode.

This book can be one of my favorite HP fanfics. It's really good to read and has a very positive outlook. And there is no internal friction. From the current point of view, everyone except Voldemort should have a good ending. I hope I can find Big Petunia soon and make Petunia happy. Moreover, the author's writing style is really good, and he deserves to be a writer. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] It's really good-looking. The three views are so upright that I'm to die for.

The author's writing is very good. In this circle where people inexplicably consume CP randomly, dismantle official positions at will, and ignore all three views, it is a breath of fresh air. This book made me think more comprehensively about the original book and the movie. It contains the author's views on the Golden Bell. Snape created this spell and taught it to Slytherin guys who like to play tricks on others. What if the other person is a girl wearing a skirt? This reminds me of the woman who was hung upside down by the Death Eaters at the Quidditch World Cup, completely exposed. Regardless of whether it is the original book or the movie, the characters I feel most distressed about are Lily and Harry (of course, most of the positive characters are distressing). This book probably makes up for my regret. I watched the Harry Potter movies when I was very young. I felt sorry for Snape and Draco and didn't think much about them. Later, I became interested and read the original work, and I discovered that it was different from what I thought. Each of the villains had their own dislikes (I won't go into details. I'll read the original work myself if I'm interested). The author of this book did not whitewash a certain character with strong personal likes and dislikes. The protagonist of this book also did not whitewash the original Penny. The four robbers are a bit different from Rowling's description. I mean the development of the story line in this book, not the original one. This book also contains the description of the original four (school bullying, pure British teenagers). However, it is quite reasonable for the role to affect the plot. The following are my personal emotions towards certain groups. Be careful to avoid pitfalls. You will be unlucky if you step on a pain point. Some people bring Lily into themselves, with disgusting super-sexual brains, they like to add charm to male characters, hoping that Snape likes them. But according to the book, everyone here is a Muggle, and in his eyes, we are all Petunia. He is discriminatory against Muggles, and the Half-Blood Prince is proof of his strong identification with his own bloodline. Someone actually wrote a CP article about Petunia and Snape. This is ridiculous. Wow, the three views are as fragile as tissue paper. I have to say that the movie was changed very well, and they tried their best to charm the male villain characters and weaken their characteristics as villains (I know Rowling participated in the production of the movie, so there is no need to take this into account) Generally speaking, the writing style is OK, the plot line is OK, and the logic is OK. I like it🥰. It also makes up for my biggest regret in reading the original work. Harry has both mother and father, and he lives in love.

While watching the story, I completely viewed the story as if it really happened. Both Penny in the new world and Penny in the original world are very attractive under the shaping of the teacher. There is no OOC feeling at all. The emotional descriptions and changes are very delicate. When dealing with the relationship between Lily and Snape, the transformation is not abrupt at all. Each character is particularly three-dimensional, not purely good or purely bad, and has its own outlook on life. I really like the teacher's writing. In fact, when I first read it, I just felt that the writing style was very familiar. Then I found out that it was written by the same teacher as Deura. I felt like I had been digging for treasures.

I saw the part where Petunia beat up Slytherin because Lily was bullied by using the Fuchsia Curse. Overall, it was very good. It was a very special hp fanfic with Petunia as the main visual. It was really well written, very tender, and refreshing. It was also very romantic to a certain extent. The only thing I didn't like was that Petunia took away Sev and Malfoy's potion business. Petunia is fine, Dursley is fine, Lily is fine, everyone is fine. There is only Severus Snape. I cry every time I see his clips. I have felt sorry for him since I came into contact with HP. Because I have not read the original work, and the movie version of Snape is really performed very well and the adaptation is so successful. His life experience, his childhood, his student days, his professorship, his becoming a Death Eater, his potions, his regrets, his remorse, everything about him makes me feel distressed. So when I watch many situations in HP, I only choose the good ones about Snape. The beginning of this article is so attractive to me that I keep watching this paragraph. I'm at the end of my endurance. Let Petunia and Dursley accompany me here. Severus Snape started wearing pigtails. You are really a genius! ! ! ! ! !

It feels warm. Very reassuring. So warm. I like it very much. Well done to everyone. ——Every time I watch this, I always feel that the corpse has come to life for a short time. As soon as I see these warm and daily-oriented HPs, a lot of troubles and worries are basically thrown away for a while. I just see the fun and cute scenes and subconsciously become cute. I scream, get excited, sigh, and laugh like fools happily. Everyone is a cute and good kid. Whether it is the old or the young, everyone in the academy or everyone in the comment area (unfortunately, I am afraid that I have finished reading it in one go, and I am afraid that it will suddenly stop updating one day) I'm also afraid of the day it ends. But no matter what, it's fine. I believe in the author)