Immortal Cultivator: I Think the Fairy Has a Bad Omen!

It's a bit interesting. Let me talk about the advantages first. The main character in the plot that I like has been through a lot and finally gained some wisdom. The author writes it this way, which is actually not bad. Then there is the emotional drama, which has its own goals, which is good. The thinking is clear and the writing is also good. It has all the necessary points. I recommend the author to write it down and I am looking forward to it. The disadvantage is that the plot progress is a bit slow. It takes more than 300 chapters to build the foundation. Then there are some points that maybe I didn't pay attention to, but they felt abrupt and made me feel a bit too strong. It seems that the background is not very grand, so the plot should be very fast, but I didn't see it. Maybe it's still foreshadowing.

The small town chapter at the beginning of the story is very high-quality, and the atmosphere and plot development are very brilliant; unfortunately, the subsequent plot is not strong enough, and it becomes harder and harder to attract people's interest as it goes on, which is a pity that it has started but ended. But I still give it five stars, because I will only give five stars.

Update soon. By the way, if the protagonist is darker and the plot becomes more dark, it's okay to be invincible and a little sadistic. Thank you to the author.

The part about Luo Jiali's betrayal directly sublimates this book, but I do feel a little regretful that this woman is now waiting for the pig's feet to be pulled out to bury the Qianjian Sect. It's not enough to read. I hope there will be more updates every day [Love]

The details of the novel are well written, and there are generally no poisonous points. The character of the protagonist is well written, and the character descriptions are also good, but it feels like it lacks the excitement of the climax fight or strategizing.

So far, there are no big problems. There are few poisonous points, the writing is acceptable, and the plot is compact. You can eat it with confidence [eating melon]

I think it is worth watching. After all, I watched it and waited for the update. It is described as if a female character is the best. And as long as it is a female character, no matter how strong she is, the male protagonist dares to think about xx. The female has no temper, and most of the male characters are the opposite of the protagonist. I hope there will not be so many female characters and more male characters will be more passionate. Now it is like H-text.

Not bad. Not bad. Not bad.

There are too many bad women who keep pulling and pulling. Can you take them all in and punish them severely?

It's okay, it can kill some time, but I feel like you're always recuperating. It's a pity. I saw that it was almost the same in the end. The protagonist is still Xiao Chunan.

It's very interesting. It's not the little maid who licks the dog as others said. The male protagonist has a clear distinction between love and hate. Those who say it's the dog licking probably haven't read the rest.

After reading it, the author's writing is very good, and the protagonist's character is of a growth nature. It would be nice if it could be darker. When can we fast forward to the respecting the teacher part [laughs].

The writing style and refreshing points are both good. It is above average in Tomato. If you like many female fairies, you can watch it.

It looks good, the writing is online, and the characters are well described.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

A bit of a sword to set the feel (

Don't sleep, get up and work [pucker][poke]

Well written and logically clear

This book is very good

Not bad, good looking

A very beautiful legend of cultivating immortals!

Not bad, not bad, okay

After reading it, I felt that having the maid killed twice was not handled well, but everything else was fine.

Entry physical examination difficult for Barry Stoudemire

The book is okay, but it ends suddenly

I think it's pretty Many people can't watch the protagonist suffer a little setback It's better to see a perfect world

Okay, okay, the emotional scenes are very good

The author's writing style is definitely good, the plot and character settings are also very logical, and the overall story is indeed dark. I still prefer Gou Daoliu. In short, it is a rare work by Tomato with great care.

It's so well written, it's to my liking

I think it's okay to see it. It's quite novel. I've never seen this kind of subject before.