Myriad Worlds: I Begin My Path of Martial Arts in Demi-Gods and Semi-Devils, Starting Out Invincible

Looks good! I just like the protagonist! People who seek immortality! Isn't it nonsense to not seek immortality after traveling through time? What is important for a woman to become an immortal? I hope there is no heroine! It's better if the protagonist just cultivates immortality and is ordinary!

Very good, seek enlightenment and immortality. The author will update quickly. There is no need for a female protagonist in this article. Someone who can create the immortal path can be called the master of a path. Who can match her?

The subject matter is very novel and I like it very much. In fact, the protagonist's explanations about Taoism and even the I Ching, Feng Shui, etc. Are also quite good, but can some of the content be condensed a little? For example, the details of the specific process of refining the Bagua array and armor can be simplified, and there is no need to go into too much detail. The author spent three or four chapters on how to practice it stroke by stroke, and just practicing these two things. I am also interested in reading the knowledge about Taoism and the I Ching. To be honest, even if it is a well-researched and well-documented book like Mao Surnamed Langya, the plot moves forward quite quickly, even if it is a bit slower. So it can be seen that the "book strap" can coexist with the plot. I'm afraid it would be better if the author puts some effort in this aspect. The first thing is to shrink the things he does alone a little bit.

It's quite good to read, and most of the articles quote the top Taoist principles. People who don't understand can learn some knowledge by reading it. It's quite good. It's worth recommending, but it's quite short. Just when I saw the highlights, it suddenly disappeared.

Good. I hope there won't be any recruitment of apprentices in the future. It's okay to give them some opportunities. If they accept apprentices as nannies, forget it.

Although there are some flaws in the plot, the author has really covered a wide range of topics. He has talked about all kinds of Taoist classics. The more he writes in the future, the better he will be. I hope he will continue to do so [Like]

I read a dozen chapters. Got it! The author is trying to teach me how to become an immortal? However, my qualifications are dull. Never get started

It looks good, but the pace is not very good at the beginning, it may be a bit long-winded, and the protagonist may be a little pretentious, but starting from chapter 70, the pace becomes much better, and it looks very comfortable, which is very enjoyable later on. Come on come on

I finished it in two days and it was quite good. The Tianlong in front of the name is just the core world. The protagonist will not be like some cultivators who have a harem, nor will they be too biased towards the protagonist and the villain. It does not develop according to the plot of the original novel. It is unique. It does not discredit the villain in the original novel. Everyone has embarked on a different path. After reading Chapter 270 At that time, I thought there would be other time-travelers, so I could continue to read the later part. There is an explanation, and it is not time-travelling. However, I hope that more plots in other worlds can be written in the back. It feels a bit short. I hope to see the development of the original protagonist of the novel in other worlds. I personally like the plot in the world of Qingyunzhi, and hope there will be no female protagonist.

Don't pick too many, everyone [laughing evilly] There are very few books on immortality and enlightenment that you can read, but this one is pretty good.