[Two male protagonists + Nianxia + Qiangqiang + Loyal dog + Nurture system]
Xun Xiang, every immortal sect longs for an outstanding senior brother who can be imported wholesale.
The smooth life took a turn for the worse after I picked up that little bitch junior brother Chu Guanlan.
Xunxiang once wanted to hug Chu Guanlan and jump off a cliff together.
Later, I drank Chinese medicine and recovered. I accepted my fate and took care of myself.
Finally, after all the hard work, the puppy was raised.
Xunxiang felt a little depressed when she saw her junior brother, whose close and clingy brotherhood had obviously deteriorated.
Xunxiang before: Isn't this bad? We are like brothers and fathers, so it is inappropriate...
Xunxiang: How about we talk quietly? What's wrong with the tree I planted and I can enjoy the shade by myself?
Xunxiang then: What? Is the little junior brother I picked up and raised for so long and still have a relationship with is the Demon Lord? ? ?
This time Xunxiang's mentality completely collapsed.
No one told me that this was not a dog but a wolf!
Chu Guanlan: I miss my senior brother. He likes me very much and takes me with him wherever he goes, but he is stupid and forgets me on the roadside. (Cross out) You XX! Throw me away! ! !
Later, Xunxiang finally learned that dogs cannot pick up randomly, let alone throw it away! Abandonment is a serious crime! Neither can wolves!
Reader comments
So far, I feel like the writing is pretty good.
In terms of the plot, it is quite smooth and the rhythm is well controlled without being draggy. It was just the rabbit ball scene that I found a little hard to accept (the whole city was messing around), but other than that, it was fine.
The characters of the protagonists are also very distinct and more three-dimensional.
Very novel character design, which makes the niche's homework turn around [KISS]
It's a mixture of sweetness and abuse, but fortunately the ending is he. The language is not filled with too many flowery words, but the most straightforward and refreshing language to describe the protagonists' experiences. The plot and story are not only inconsistent, but the rhythm is just right, not procrastinating, and equally fascinating, which is my favorite thing. In addition, the protagonists in the story have different personalities, some are gentle and tolerant, and some are as cold as ice... They all have the same characteristics of young people - they are passionate about pursuing cultivation, breaking through confusion to reveal the truth, and working together to save the world...
It's good-looking, the characters are well drawn, and the story is quite compact. Worth a look
I have read two of the author's three books (why does an author with such a good writing style have no traffic?)
This book is quite nice
It's so interesting. Author, you have to persevere [sending my heart] [sending my heart]
Written by Haji, it's so fun to write. It would be great if there were two more chapters [shy][shy][shy]
The plot is not sloppy, the writing is good, and the characters are also very good
It's super good-looking. I hope the author can become popular as soon as possible [Love]
The characters are pretty good, and the main thing is that everyone has a long mouth and rushes in both directions, and the length is just right.
It's good to watch, the plot is good, there's no abuse, I like it
The writing is fluent, the characters are well created, and the classic cp of Happy Enemies is also good. It deserves a five-star rating in Western Persimmon.
Very enjoyable to write. The subject matter is also very novel. The emotions between the two people are also very real and delicate, and the writing is also very good. Check it out.
So far, I feel like the writing is pretty good. In terms of the plot, it is quite smooth and the rhythm is well controlled without being draggy. It was just the rabbit ball scene that I found a little hard to accept (the whole city was messing around), but other than that, it was fine. The characters of the protagonists are also very distinct and more three-dimensional.
Very novel character design, which makes the niche's homework turn around [KISS]
It's a mixture of sweetness and abuse, but fortunately the ending is he. The language is not filled with too many flowery words, but the most straightforward and refreshing language to describe the protagonists' experiences. The plot and story are not only inconsistent, but the rhythm is just right, not procrastinating, and equally fascinating, which is my favorite thing. In addition, the protagonists in the story have different personalities, some are gentle and tolerant, and some are as cold as ice... They all have the same characteristics of young people - they are passionate about pursuing cultivation, breaking through confusion to reveal the truth, and working together to save the world...
It's good-looking, the characters are well drawn, and the story is quite compact. Worth a look
I have read two of the author's three books (why does an author with such a good writing style have no traffic?)
This book is quite nice
It's so interesting. Author, you have to persevere [sending my heart] [sending my heart] Written by Haji, it's so fun to write. It would be great if there were two more chapters [shy][shy][shy]
The plot is not sloppy, the writing is good, and the characters are also very good
It's super good-looking. I hope the author can become popular as soon as possible [Love]
The characters are pretty good, and the main thing is that everyone has a long mouth and rushes in both directions, and the length is just right.
It's good to watch, the plot is good, there's no abuse, I like it
The writing is fluent, the characters are well created, and the classic cp of Happy Enemies is also good. It deserves a five-star rating in Western Persimmon.
Very enjoyable to write. The subject matter is also very novel. The emotions between the two people are also very real and delicate, and the writing is also very good. Check it out.