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Since you have chosen this path, you must follow it to the end, even if it is full of thorns, and even if you die on this path, you will have no regrets. This is the male protagonist's philosophy, right? Maybe my understanding is wrong. The male protagonist looks at the world with reason, go Understand and analyze the path that everyone takes. Some people are forced to take the road, and some people take the initiative to take the road, but they all make choices. In my opinion, they do not go on this road because there is a road, but they have this road because they have taken this road. Very good work. I am always emotional but lack rationality. The language in it made me firm on my path.

Sorry, I read novels... I read a little too fast... As I read, I just... Couldn't understand... Where was it... The book is a good book, with a very novel setting and very distinct characters. The only problem is that the logic may be too rigorous. Most people who read the novel will not know what is going on after reading a paragraph. The beginning of the whole book may not be very attractive to readers, and of course I didn't read it for long. But from the perspective of an old bookworm like me, I personally think that what I need to do at the beginning is not to pile up a lot of world view and character settings, but to find a way to immerse the readers in the situation. These settings can be briefly introduced in one or two chapters. As for other settings and the like, I will add them later. Leave some for the bottom and give yourself a good word count, otherwise it will be difficult to write if you run out of inspiration. Talking about the setting, don't make the characters and world view too rigid, but leave room for the readers' imagination... Uh... I'm talking too much. After all, the trouble with people is that they are good teachers. I deeply believe that I rarely leave long comments on the changing marriage articles. I don't know why, but the writing techniques of the current changing marriage articles on the market are too immature. But I found a lot of bright spots in your book. To be honest, with this novel setting alone, your book can definitely become a god in the field of marriage change. But the opening chapter of the groove really ruins this magical book for you. It can be seen that the author is a novice writer, but he has many good ideas of his own. Write more, think more, learn more, think more, communicate more, and don't work behind closed doors. Looking forward to your next book

The plot design and conflict settings are very exciting, but the long paragraphs of setting descriptions and scene descriptions look a bit tired, and the dialogue in the second half makes people feel a bit divorced from reality. If I were in high school, I might have loved this book to death, but now I prefer to read some "intuitive" texts.

Author, you wrote very well. [Like] I feel a bit indescribable when I watch it. From the rewriting of people named Long, to the manipulation of the adjuster, to the enslavement of Wu De, the characters are very vividly portrayed, as if I have seen with my own eyes what they did, and the despair of the people under their control. Yes, I still sympathize with the victims, but I do feel angry when I see them using their abilities like that and it seems reasonable (after the change of circumstances). Maybe it's because the disrespect for individuals is so straightforwardly described. Can the plot be sped up a bit or add something else to temper it? It's always full of depression and too monotonous. The main reason is that Wu De (Jiang Jingyao)'s road is so difficult that people who watch it are a little sad. If the author sees it, can you tell me whether this book has been depressing or whether it will make you laugh later [smile] I hope the real Wu De and that Long will be solved by Wu De (Jiang Jingyao) soon

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The heroine's mental state is very beautiful. Although the protagonist's mental state is vicious but not extreme enough, she looks a bit clown compared to the heroine. However, I don't believe that the heroine's mental state would allow her to have a harem, and being haremed might not be a different persona of the hero. But the male protagonist doesn't suffer. The female protagonist is the sun, and the darkness will be illuminated.