Go Back in Time and Fall in Love with Yourself

The writing is good. The two protagonists are not the usual dual protagonists. They are relatively novel. The only thing that made me deduct stars is that occasionally the expressions in space or time are incoherent. There is also a question, whether it is the grandfather or the grandfather who appears in the early stage. If it is the grandfather, then why is he called Tang Wucheng? If it is the grandfather, why does it have many connections with the protagonist's father (that is, when the parents divorce and the child is awarded to the father, the child's upbringing must be borne by the father, otherwise why do you need the custody of the child)?

The writing is really good, I was so excited when I read it at night, hahaha. The emotional line between Xiaoluo and Xiaolin is also well laid out (they are both very good people), the narrative is not wordy, and I think the writing is very good [like][like][like], but I don't know if Xiaolin can turn back into a human later, I look forward to the author's update [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Xiaoluo's childhood was undoubtedly pitiful. However, those warm details and the companionship of adults diluted the bitterness of childhood experiences, and instead made the plot particularly warm. When reading, I won't feel sad about some misfortunes, I will only feel calm and a touch of happiness. It's so well written. The author should update it soon or you won't have to read it anymore! ! ! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

I really like the feeling of two-way redemption, and the interaction between the protagonists is also very delicate. But it's a pity that we got together without seeing the confession. Seeing that the only bad part now is the part where Dalin turns into a cat, it's a bit awkward It's been a long time since I read this book, so I just remembered it and finished it to the last bit. When I saw the ending of the dream, I almost gave it two stars (the ending of the dream is unforgivable!) Fortunately, I also finished watching the extras. Overall it's acceptable, but the author still doesn't like foreshadowing. The protagonist wakes up as soon as he says he wakes up. The process of Xiaoluo finding the protagonist is also very general. In fact, the effect will be better if it is completed directly after the Chinese New Year, but the later part is a bit superfluous. I won't change the five-star rating, I'm a bit reluctant to give it four stars.

Ahhhh [Dark Twisted] [Dark Crawling] [Dark Screaming] Why is it only 6.5 Or at least 9 points? It's not fair, it's not fair, it's obviously written so well, I like it, like it [Daily Madness]

Yes, it is a very life-like article, warm but not boring, and very sweet. But the problem is also quite obvious. There is always a touch of primary school student writing, especially the use of metaphors. And almost every chapter has "suddenly understood", "suddenly felt", "suddenly realized", etc., As well as too frequent philosophies, which slightly affects the viewing experience, but it is still a good article if this problem is ignored. Personal suggestion: There is no need to use a composition-style ending. The author's strengths lie in natural emotions and vivid characters. Every cuteness, tear point, relationship progress, and character design are actually reflected in daily interactions. This flow rate coupled with this quality has greatly exceeded my expectations. I don't want this ending! I was just about to say that this is the best narcissus I have ever seen... I really want to know the author's mental journey... Generally speaking, special endings such as be, multiple endings, and dream endings must be marked in advance. And it's so sweet in front of you, why did you hit me so unexpectedly? The author is advised to read more online articles. This ending, including sublimation and conception, is quite in the style of a primary school composition. But in the end they are not very suitable for the online literature market. Teachers will be moved when writing about knives in essays, but they will really be scolded when writing about knives in online articles.

Even though the theme of Narcissus is special, I still think the dream ending is a taboo, and I don't recommend it to people who come here to eat sweets. Just lose one, the ending of the dream is still too unfavorable

It looks good, the writing is delicate and smooth, the narrative rhythm is detailed and appropriate, the emotional line is not obtrusive, the plot is fascinating, and the author is quick to update! ! !

This novel is so real, with shadows of reality everywhere. [Send heart][Send heart] They get along very warmly and warmly! ! ! This is the real narcissus, very healing! ! ! It's just that I couldn't accept the ending, and it made me sad to watch it (that's why it gets 4 stars, and it's full of stars if you don't die) But I think the extra chapter is the real ending, it's great to watch! ! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

There are so few readers of this book. Most of the authors are pitiful and use their love to generate energy for themselves. Come on, everyone [cover your face] [send your heart]

Come on, baby, write hard!

A very nice and interesting novel

Overall, the writing is quite good, the story is complete, and the relationship between the two and their mutual redemption warmed my heart. However, personally, I can't accept the dream ending. I focus more on the formal relationship between the two, so I accepted the other ending provided by the extra chapter. Unfortunately, the extra chapter is a bit rushed. It would be better if two chapters of sweet daily life could be attached.

Looks great, looks great^ω^

It's over! Very healing, ૮₍˶ᵔᵕᵔ˶₎ა

I cried. I cried so much that it made me tear up. Xiaoluo Xiaoluo, why are you so good?

It's very nice [sending my heart] This is my first time wearing something like this. The author wrote it so well.

Five stars! Haokang, I feel the warmth of the body [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

Look! ! Show them all to me! ! !

Ahhhhhhhhhhh How can you look so good? \(//∇//)\ Come on and write

I saw the protagonist watching "Anne of Green Gables", five stars immediately [blowing kiss]

The writing is delicate and can be regarded as a piece of pure land in tomatoes.

The writing is very gentle, the writing style is very delicate, and it makes people have endless aftertaste.

Really beautiful, very warm feeling

Ahhhh! So pretty! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration] The back part is really sweet. But I also brought a knife in front [crying]

Perfect narcissus, fairy product

Very beautiful! Very delicate

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

2025/10/03 You must love yourself, Lin Qianluo-Xiaoluo

Why is this a dream ending? [Aggrieved]