Back in the Past, Falling in Love with Myself

The writing is good. The two protagonists are not the usual dual protagonists. They are relatively novel. The only thing that made me deduct stars is that occasionally the expressions in space or time are incoherent. There is also a question, whether it is the grandfather or the grandfather who appears in the early stage. If it is the grandfather, then why is he called Tang Wucheng? If it is the grandfather, why does it have many connections with the protagonist's father (that is, when the parents divorce and the child is awarded to the father, the child's upbringing must be borne by the father, otherwise why do you need the custody of the child)?

Xiaoluo's childhood was undoubtedly pitiful. However, those warm details and the companionship of adults diluted the bitterness of childhood experiences, and instead made the plot particularly warm. When reading, I won't feel sad about some misfortunes, I will only feel calm and a touch of happiness. It's so well written. The author should update it soon or you won't have to read it anymore!!! Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

The writing is really good, I was so excited when I read it at night, hahaha. The emotional line between Xiaoluo and Xiaolin is also well laid out (they are both very good people), the narrative is not wordy, and I think the writing is very good 👍👍👍, but I don't know if Xiaolin can turn back into a human later, I look forward to the author's update 😘😘😘

I really like the feeling of two-way redemption, and the interaction between the protagonists is also very delicate. But it's a pity that we got together without seeing the confession. Seeing that the only bad part now is the part where Dalin turns into a cat, it's a bit awkward It's been a long time since I read this book, so I just remembered it and finished it to the last bit. When I saw the ending of the dream, I almost gave it two stars (the ending of the dream is unforgivable!) Fortunately, I also finished watching the extras. Overall it's acceptable, but the author still doesn't like foreshadowing. The protagonist wakes up as soon as he says he wakes up. The process of Xiaoluo finding the protagonist is also very general. In fact, the effect will be better if it is completed directly after the Chinese New Year, but the later part is a bit superfluous. I won't change the five-star rating, I'm a bit reluctant to give it four stars.

Ahhhh [Dark Twisted] [Dark Crawling] [Dark Screaming] Why is it only 6.5 Or at least 9 points? It's not fair, it's not fair, it's obviously written so well, I like it, like it [Daily Madness]

Yes, it is a very life-like article, warm but not boring, and very sweet. But the problem is also quite obvious. There is always a touch of primary school student writing, especially the use of metaphors. And almost every chapter has "suddenly understood", "suddenly felt", "suddenly realized", etc., As well as too frequent philosophies, which slightly affects the viewing experience, but it is still a good article if this problem is ignored. Personal suggestion: There is no need to use a composition-style ending. The author's strengths lie in natural emotions and vivid characters. Every cuteness, tear point, relationship progress, and character design are actually reflected in daily interactions. This flow rate coupled with this quality has greatly exceeded my expectations. I don't want this ending! I was just about to say that this is the best narcissus I have ever seen... I really want to know the author's mental journey... Generally speaking, special endings such as be, multiple endings, and dream endings must be marked in advance. And it's so sweet in front of you, why did you hit me so unexpectedly? The author is advised to read more online articles. This ending, including sublimation and conception, is quite in the style of a primary school composition. But in the end they are not very suitable for the online literature market. Teachers will be moved when writing about knives in essays, but they will really be scolded when writing about knives in online articles.

This novel is so real, with shadows of reality everywhere. 💕💕 They get along very warmly and warmly!!! This is the real narcissus, very healing!!! It's just that I couldn't accept the ending, and it made me sad to watch it (that's why it gets 4 stars, and it's full of stars if you don't die) But I think the extra chapter is the real ending, it's great to watch!!!! 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

Even though the theme of Narcissus is special, I still think the dream ending is a taboo, and I don't recommend it to people who come here to eat sweets. Just lose one, the ending of the dream is still too unfavorable

There are so few readers of this book. Most of the authors are pitiful and use their love to generate energy for themselves. Come on, everyone [cover your face] [send your heart]

It looks good, the writing is delicate and smooth, the narrative rhythm is detailed and appropriate, the emotional line is not obtrusive, the plot is fascinating, and the author is quick to update!!!