The End of Theseus

I have to say that the author's book is very good. It's rare that I can read it in one sitting like Tomato. I personally think it has the potential to become a hit. The writing style is a bit exaggerated. The author can adjust it appropriately, reduce the pile of rhetoric, and describe the key moments in detail. In addition, the values ​​​​of this book are still very upright, but I think it is a bit too idealistic and naive, with a slight feeling of "utopian socialism" and "utopia". In this regard, the author must be prepared to deal with different opinions and even sharp criticisms from readers. Finally, I am optimistic about this book. Come on, author [like]

Overall, it's pretty good, especially the "Four Kingdoms Killing" sequence is very exciting. Tomato rarely sees such long novels. I think some readers commented that you are too idealistic. In fact, the protagonist is a college student and has not experienced any beatings from society, so it is naturally like this. I remember there was a similar novel where the protagonist was named Yi Mubei. He also built an ark called Central Star. He seems to be a refined egotist and a revanchist. The book is also good but a bit focused on fighting with others. Doomsday novels should focus on the psychological activities of the protagonist and other characters, showing what their psychology is like, expressing the despair of the end of the world, the huge psychological pressure, how the protagonist survives, and more hard-core survival knowledge is the correct solution. In fact, I prefer to watch the kind of lone wolf where the protagonist is good or not, but that kind of lone wolf is the bunker route. In addition, you can describe the details in more detail. Nowadays, people like doomsday articles with detailed details and full of useful information. As long as your writing is really detailed, an army of people will like it, and then it will become popular, and an army of people will come to read it. Others say that water is caused by fast food that is used to entertain people to death. Don't pay attention to it. Just stick to your own ideas. A lot of people next door Gu Chengyuan's book said that his water is also popular. Try to defeat those garbage Internet articles about building shelters in high-rise buildings. As for the ending, it would be best if the disaster would continue for many years and the protagonist would eventually die of old age, having lived for more than a hundred years. The shelter in the mountain next door is designed like this. Do not give hope at the end of the world, but despair. If there is hope, it is not called apocalypse. It can let the protagonist always have the idea to hypnotize himself that the disaster will end. The actual disaster will not end, and human beings may disappear in the long river of history. A book friend said that he did not like this depressing and hopeless ending, and said that the protagonist must become king and dominate. He must have read too many hegemony novels cloaked in doomsday. The end is the end. How can you put the cart before the horse and go off topic? I hope it can be written a little darker, and the protagonist will gradually turn into a callous, ruthless and refined egoist. Only in this way can it be an excellent doomsday novel.

The plot is very good. There are too many inner dramas among the characters. It's very depressing to read. It feels like I'm deliberately exaggerating my emotions. I can't watch much of it on Tomato, so I'll give it a try. To be honest, there are too many emotions, sometimes happy and sometimes sad, it's so uncomfortable to read.

This book is so good, it makes me feel very close to my heart. There are always people clamoring about not wanting the heroine in the book. I just feel baffled.

It felt very real when I read it. I was uncontrollably drawn into it at the beginning, as if I was experiencing an immersive apocalyptic survival experience. The step-by-step process from survival to development is quite satisfying. In terms of writing, it can be said to be very skillful. The descriptions, descriptions, and metaphors are all quite appropriate. Maybe this aspect is too prominent, so it gives people a feeling of gorgeous and stacked words. I personally don't dislike it. By the way, the author's most commonly used descriptions are: inhuman strength, a heart-wrenching voice [please taste it carefully]. By the way, there are also the values ​​​​mentioned many times in other reviews of this book. It is obvious that there is nothing wrong with the author's values. There are many places in the article where you can see the author's thinking about human nature. In summary, this is a high-quality post-apocalyptic survival article, very worth reading.

Not bad, not bad, so good to read, it combines a lot of content, a post-apocalyptic story, the reconstruction of civilization after the end of the world, especially on an island in the sea, which is very rare, and it not only writes about the protagonist's reconstruction of civilization, but also about the game and struggle between the remaining big countries, and politics. The characters in it are simply vivid, and the main characters are very well written. I highly recommend reading it. There are very few poisonous points. The author will keep up the good work, and don't be a eunuch. Come on, author, keep reading.

The doomsday survival in the front part, the pursuit of the truth in the middle part, and the political game in the back end. A wonderful novel that has all the elements of a good book. The protagonist is still the same protagonist, with firm beliefs. Whether in the old world or the new world, it is the light that illuminates the darkness.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a good novel that makes people feel immersed in the story. Although it is a little rough in some places, it is very close to reality. Even if a young man is immersed in apocalyptic survival, he only has theoretical experience. It is normal to not be able to take it all in at the beginning or to be negligent due to the inevitable panic. The growth along the way makes people feel a lot. The promotion of the mastermind behind the scenes is also very logical, because in my impression, there is this saying that the Nazis fled to the center of the earth. Come on, it is a good work. It's just not enough to watch at all.

This is really well written. I feel like I can beat all my peers in this kind of post-apocalyptic survival article of the flood and natural disaster type. Although the author is still a novice, his writing skills are very good and his writing skills are excellent. The characterization is excellent. The detailed and emotional description is not a shortcoming, but it is a point that I like very much. There are not many authors who can fully express the feelings of the characters. The characterizations of many online articles are facial expressions, popular, witty and calm technical nerd. The leader is Su Mingzhou. Hou Polang, a man of few words and outstanding in force, and Li Chaosheng, the cheerful and optimistic logistics manager, left a deep impression on me. However, the plot progressed slowly. I don't know how many words the author plans to write. The protagonist group has just arrived in the mainland at 700,000 words. I don't know when they will be able to sail away. . . I hope the author will work hard to update [Sending my heart] As long as I don't die from exhaustion

The idea and writing style of this novel are really interesting. To me, a novel in which the author is just an ordinary person, there is no system or other supernatural forces involved, and the protagonist grows up little by little in a desperate situation is really a breath of fresh air. Perhaps the inspiration for this book came from watching the map of China after sea level rise on Douyin? I have also seen similar videos. This book is very detailed about the causes and impacts of the disaster. It can be seen that the author really pays attention to every detail. I like the protagonist of this book very much. He is not overly optimistic but always has hope. He always holds good intentions but does not let go of his guard against others. The protagonist will also make mistakes and the journey of development will not be smooth. This makes the protagonist and everyone in the article feel like a living person. Maybe the article is a bit too idealistic about some parts of industrial development. From the perspective of ordinary people, it is hard to believe that the needed machines can be found so smoothly from the ruins, and it is also difficult to accept that the protagonist can lead everyone to develop industry so quickly. But these are just minor problems that are not serious problems. After all, this is a novel and not a popular science book. Generally speaking, I am very happy to see such an eye-catching book on the platform. I hope this book can become more popular. I also want to communicate with the author if I have the opportunity.

It's rare to see such a normal protagonist. Almost all apocalyptic novels are about murder without logic and pure obscenity. The protagonist of this book has a complete mental journey, the awakening and execution ability to solve problems, and a partner. It's not a cool novel that is very attractive. I hope the author will advance the plot faster. The description is too detailed. The plot is too slow and too idealistic. The people on the protagonist's island basically have no selfish intentions. But how is that possible? Human nature is too simple.

Excellent post-apocalyptic survival writing. An offline computer and the knowledge reserve formed by forum regulars form the source of the protagonist's ability; the disaster setting is relatively reasonable, the protagonist's psychology is fully described, and the logic of actions is clearly explained; material acquisition, community development, and the protagonist's growth do not deviate from the real framework, but also bring a gradual sense of fulfillment to the readers. The meticulous description of production details, the utopian system design and the slightly exaggerated and even secondary writing style at the climax of the event always remind me of the fantasy world of adventure when I was young.

This doomsday flood-themed work is not just a disaster novel, but more like a grand tragedy about finding humanity and hope in a desperate situation of destruction. It is a perfect blend of shocking scene construction, profound exploration of human nature, gripping plot development, and exquisite writing. It shows a very high degree of completion and unique artistic charm among similar themes. I look forward to the follow-up content.

The book is very good, and the author is a doctoral student (he said so). It tells the story of a college student who loves boats and prepares for the apocalyptic floods, and builds his own "Utopia" amidst the cruel reality and "man-made disasters". The author likes to use modifiers such as adjectives, adverbs, attributives and adverbials very frequently. This happens frequently outside of emotional scenes and makes people feel tired. It may be caused by the author's reduced writing experience and personal habits.

This is one of the absolute ceilings for survival in the apocalypse. From the protagonist being weak and powerless at the beginning, to the current leader of the organization, the novel describes his growth process step by step in great detail. It also describes the thoughts and growth process of all survivors in the context of the apocalypse, which is very good. In the apocalypse, it is never possible for one person to survive smoothly and safely. Some people say that the author's writing is too idealistic. But what I want to say is that this is the basic idea of ​​a person with normal views. It is the universal idea of ​​a Chinese after receiving higher education. Finally, I want to say that the author should update more stably and make more updates, and don't stop writing. Come on

Personally, I feel very good about it, I have an immersive feeling of powerlessness, and the character descriptions are also very good. However, there is a small problem. They only eat fish as a staple food and other supplements of vitamins and proteins. There is almost no description of supplementing carbohydrates. People have to "suffocate", just like in ancient famine years, almost no one would touch fish.

It is true and rigorous. Both the assessment of human nature and the response to the current situation are full of the author's thoughts about the end of the world. This is a thoughtful and high-quality book. Although there are still some ideals in some places, aren't people full of hope? [Sending Hearts]

This is a good book. No one likes to read pure science fiction in Tomato, but I hope more people can read it. It has great social significance and benefits people a lot. It is more meaningful than those cool articles. It can really make people learn a lot. It is not the kind of unnutritious cool articles. It is still good to listen to books.

It's good-looking, but has some toxic points. For example, there are some exaggerated descriptions in the middle, such as the description of the ancient people who saw the truck, and the weak Madonna tendency in the early stage. But in terms of the overall atmosphere and rigorous data, it can be said to be impeccable on the Tomato platform. The plot is interlocking and the logic is self-consistent. To sum up, this is a high-quality apocalyptic article with no flaws, and I hope it will be updated more often. In addition, the firepower of the protagonist group is mainly cold weapons, which feels a bit insufficient. It can be strengthened. It does not necessarily have to be semi-automatic or fully automatic. You can try to make some Hanyang-made World War II guns. This will not only increase the firepower, but also prevent drama.

The content is very good, although it is a bit exaggerated in some places, and the protagonist sometimes always looks like a sentimental poet, but it is indeed very interesting to watch.

The protagonist kills resolutely and decisively. Compared with those in the apocalypse now, those who only know how to accept women, women, and women are much better!

After reading the whole process, in one sentence: I don't regret reading it. Although the new book by a new author has some flaws, the overall plot content is very real, some data are very solid, and the value is also very positive (at the request of some readers, the author did not write too many emotional dramas). Don't worry about reading it, don't die [please update]

The writing is really good. It's amazing that the first book can be written like this. However, there is a setting that I don't like very much. I will complain a little about it, which is why the glacier collapse was written as someone taking the lead. Why can't it be a natural collapse [smile].

It's really beautiful, highly recommended.

I have read many apocalyptic literature, and this book is indeed the ceiling of apocalyptic literature. It is very interesting.

Immortal product, there are few good books in the water world! Recommend

The content is exciting and the writing is excellent. I recommend it.

It's very interesting, the plot is novel, and the concept is clever

The writing is good, sharp, and the emotions are sincere. I love it.

Come on, come on, author, the writing is very rigorous and beautiful. I hope to see the finale.