From Fleeing Famine to Building the Greatest Village Under Heaven

It's too bland, just like a narrative, without dramatic conflicts, the beginning of the collapse of the sky, those bandits, and so many refugees have never been written again. The journey has been smooth, and you can go out to do business easily. It's too idealistic. In half a year, you can go from not knowing the language to realizing that you can sit in a few classes of university professors and you can take the first place in architecture. When you go back, you can repair houses and make handicrafts. You can do everything. If this setting is a modern time traveling through the past, it would be acceptable, but this is an ancient time traveling through the modern era. This is a bit too idealistic.

Like the one expanded by AI, it's all a long paragraph of meaningless adjectives. After reading a chapter, there is no content and it just feels cumbersome.

I didn't expect it to be finished in just 88 chapters. Please give me a book review. First of all, the plot frame design is also familiar. Exchange currencies to earn high price differences and impart knowledge. Although the details may not be rigorous in some places, the party can avoid lightning. I really like the heroine's genius character, and it's the only way she can quickly learn modern knowledge and pass it on. From the panic of survival every day to the final saving of the world, the short description is too natural, which hints at the growth of the heroine's character. In my opinion, it is a success as a genius character, and it is also a sign of a refreshing novel. Not much to say about the other plots of saving the world, they are mostly the same. When read, the highlight is probably in the last chapter. The heroine once again traveled to modern times and was born as a female doll with a lifetime of memories and a genius mind. When I saw this, I thought the author was going to open a second volume with a modern chapter. Unfortunately, it was not. It was just an open ending. I hope this hole can be filled in the future. Finally, I saw that the author has something to say. The next novel will be about food. Food is also the type I like to read. I would like to give you a suggestion. Don't always write about a few home-cooked dishes. It is easy to get into trouble. People who like to read food articles have actually read too many. Unless the writing is particularly good and the writing is full of fireworks, I hope the author can write about traditional handmade palace delicacies and intangible cultural heritage delicacies.

Just average. The story is too bland and the pace is too fast.

It's super beautiful, and the writing is great. It's not just about showing off your skills, it's purely about the content that makes people want to put it down. There's no nonsense in every sentence. It's super profitable, and I'm very happy to read the heroine's IQ online. I finally saw a copywriting with a normal IQ. I love it so much.

The beginning is amazing! It can be seen that the author has very good writing skills! The first passer-by thought the heroine was trying to show off, but he still dropped 200 yuan before leaving. It was so funny. I really liked the heroine's unfamiliarity with the modern world at the beginning. Therefore, the heroine quickly became familiar with the modern world and was only a little surprised when the ancients received modern materials. It was not very detailed to my liking without describing it in detail. Maybe it's more suitable for people who "want to push the plot quickly".

It's too long-winded and seems bland and devoid of emotion at all [laughs awkwardly]

Stacking some useless adjectives makes it so painful to read

See Chapter 56… The protagonist can travel between the two worlds. The protagonist is not simply working as a porter to make money, but using modern technology to go back to ancient times to produce products, make money, and improve the quality of life of the family...

There is nothing wrong with the overall idea, but I am too naive in thinking about society. With so many things taken out, can the family retain any power?