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Harry Potter, who was only 4 years old, was bound to the system due to an accident and returned with the help of his seniors.
What twists and turns will happen when a different Harry Potter meets a different Malfoy?
Malfoy attacks x Potter receives
Reader comments
It's good to watch, and the plot is also very novel. I just want to be able to bring up the plot, feel some actions, and some plots. The descriptions are a little too much, which is not very good. It would be great if the descriptions of the plots could be reduced and the writing could be simpler and more direct.
Just some small suggestions. Most of the words in a page are used to describe the appearance of the characters. I don't think the author wants to describe them all as flower vases (it's over, it's a bit of a pedantic tone). I just hope that these descriptions can be reduced. This book is still relatively novel. It will be good if this point is solved. Good luck to the author! [Love]
It's pretty, but there's a little problem
1. Segmentation is not very suitable
2. The descriptions in the first few pictures are too complicated.
3. I was a little intentional about buying CP, but it's a little strange indescribably.
I'll add more after reading the others
Later, I solved problems 1 and 2, and the third problem is pretty good. Compared with other HP settings, this one is also very fresh.
Very pretty, I like it very much
Very well written! Super good! I love so much!
Draco is so possessive [laughing]
I highly recommend you watch it, it's really beautiful! ! !
It's very beautiful. When I watched it before, I liked them both, and now I have set the settings privately to make it very beautiful. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It looks great, I love watching it, and I highly recommend it!
It's quite innovative and beautiful.
Come on, it looks great
Super beautiful. My favorite🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
It's very nice and has a certain tacit understanding.
Awesome, well written
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, the important thing is to say it three times ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧
It looks good. Please don't stop updating. I will give you a small gift later.
Super invincible and so pretty! ! ! ! ! ! Go, go, go! ! ! !
Very beautiful, the author's writing is very good!
It's such a good second grade, it looks good, I just like this [you taste it carefully]
Not bad to watch! Come on, teacher! Call the teacher
It's a very novel plot. I like it very much. When I watched it, I didn't pay attention to write a review. I couldn't write anything at once. In short, it's a great plot. Why did it stop updating?
It's good to watch, and the plot is also very novel. I just want to be able to bring up the plot, feel some actions, and some plots. The descriptions are a little too much, which is not very good. It would be great if the descriptions of the plots could be reduced and the writing could be simpler and more direct.
Just some small suggestions. Most of the words in a page are used to describe the appearance of the characters. I don't think the author wants to describe them all as flower vases (it's over, it's a bit of a pedantic tone). I just hope that these descriptions can be reduced. This book is still relatively novel. It will be good if this point is solved. Good luck to the author! [Love]
It's pretty, but there's a little problem 1. Segmentation is not very suitable 2. The descriptions in the first few pictures are too complicated. 3. I was a little intentional about buying CP, but it's a little strange indescribably. I'll add more after reading the others Later, I solved problems 1 and 2, and the third problem is pretty good. Compared with other HP settings, this one is also very fresh.
Very pretty, I like it very much
Very well written! Super good! I love so much!
Draco is so possessive [laughing]
I highly recommend you watch it, it's really beautiful! ! !
It's very beautiful. When I watched it before, I liked them both, and now I have set the settings privately to make it very beautiful. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]
It looks great, I love watching it, and I highly recommend it!
It's quite innovative and beautiful.
Come on, it looks great
Super beautiful. My favorite🤓🤓🤓🤓🤓
It's very nice and has a certain tacit understanding.
Awesome, well written
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, the important thing is to say it three times ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧
It looks good. Please don't stop updating. I will give you a small gift later.
Super invincible and so pretty! ! ! ! ! ! Go, go, go! ! ! !
Very beautiful, the author's writing is very good!
It's such a good second grade, it looks good, I just like this [you taste it carefully]
Not bad to watch! Come on, teacher! Call the teacher
It's a very novel plot. I like it very much. When I watched it, I didn't pay attention to write a review. I couldn't write anything at once. In short, it's a great plot. Why did it stop updating?