Douluo Dalu: I Become Unrivaled in the Unrivaled Tang Sect

The setting is very different from the original work. Can a level 10 soul power single kill for a thousand years be able to break through the defense? When I went to the academy, I was level 13 when I was just over 6 years old, which is a fair rating. It was too 6. The only person in Douluo Continent who was born at level 20 was the Angel Martial Spirit.

After reading the first four chapters so far, I feel that I am a local and not a time traveler.

Haha, you're kidding me. My combat power is really bad. Before I got the soul ring, I defeated a thousand-year soul beast. After I got the soul ring, I still can't beat a level 14 soul master in the physical body. Let's not talk about it. Let's train. I'm not physically strong enough and I can't compete in a training match with a physical body. I vomited blood in a training match with a group of people who didn't get the soul ring. What's the loss of the physical body? This is still a top-level dragon martial spirit.

The heroine is [what] 🍉

You can see how good the author is by reading a paragraph. The reason is that the protagonist is innately full of soul power, and there is a guy who wants to take him to Tiandou City to get out of this corner..." Lin Wanmeng looked at the chimney on the roof of his house, where straight green smoke was rising, like a pillar connecting heaven and earth. He imagined that Su Wan was busy in front of the stove at the moment, maybe steaming Snow Elephant Rabbit Buns, which was his favorite He loves food; Lin Mo may be sharpening his hunting knife and planning to try his luck at the edge of the wind-eroded forest in the afternoon to see if he can hunt anything. If he leaves, who will help Wang Ya to take the sharpened knife to Li Tiejiang's house for tempering? Wang Ya is so timid and only cries every time she is bullied. What will she do if she is gone?

The competition doesn't even include martial arts, so what's the point of writing this book?

I feel that there are too many modifiers and metaphors and should be reduced appropriately.

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head hanging on it

Where are you, the author?

Gonna be poisoned to death.