Invincible Start: I Am a God on Earth

The setting is novel but the core focus and logical unity need to be strengthened This novel provides a relaxing and enjoyable reading experience that satisfies the need to relax while eating. The biggest highlight is the construction of a very creative modern monster management system setting, which is very carefully thought out. But there are also some regrets after reading: 1. The sense of character focus is slightly weak: The novel adopts a technique that focuses on group drama, and many characters and forces are depicted. This is a feature, but it also results in the protagonist's personal depth and highlight moments being slightly lacking. Readers may expect to see more of the protagonist's personal charm in the refreshing plot. 2. The setting details are slightly complicated: The author has put a lot of effort into the details of the monster management rule system, which is the cornerstone of the world view. However, a considerable amount of space in the novel is used to describe these rules themselves and their operation, which may squeeze the space for the main conflict and the emotional development of the characters to some extent, and the rhythm is slightly affected. 3. The contradiction between the protagonist's position and behavior: The protagonist is initially set as an absolutely neutral observer who "does not interfere with humans or monsters", which is very interesting in itself. However, as the specific plot progresses (such as mediating the dispute between the Green Snake and the White Snake, and intervening in the Fahai ashes incident), the protagonist repeatedly intervenes proactively, and the final stance is more on the human side. This difference in words and deeds of "declaring neutrality" but "intervening in practice" weakens the persuasiveness of the role setting and makes its "neutral" stance seem less pure and unified. 4. Space for thinking about the world view: Logical questions such as "Why do all the monsters stay in the country in an orderly manner and do not seek to go to loosely regulated foreign countries?" Are worthy of being given a more powerful explanation in subsequent plots or in the improvement of the world view to enhance the overall rigor. Summary: The novel has a solid setting foundation and enough "refreshing feeling", and does a good job of easy reading. However, there is still room for optimization and in-depth development in terms of the focus of the protagonist's creation, the balance between setting display and narrative rhythm, and the high degree of unity of the protagonist's core stance and behavior. If these aspects can be better balanced, I believe it can become a better work.

An interesting beginning. The author should not be too tired. Relax at ordinary times. Two chapters will be added when you are resting, two chapters will be added when eating, two chapters will be added when you are sleepy, and two chapters will be added when you are bored. [Sentimental]

When I saw the name "Jiang Si", I thought of... It was the Emperor Yan whose surname was Jiang, and the common people in Zegu; it was Si Yu who inherited the country, and Tai Si carried virtues. Today, there is a prophecy about overturning the boat, and the two names are stacked with snow, and the burning branches are used as sacrificial cauldrons with residual incense... "The pearls left by Jiang Shui turned into ashes, and the broken chapter of Si's surname was buried in Fengtai." King Yu's nine tripods were so heavy that he became strangled and cold. His name is Zang Sheji, and his surname is buried in the country's mourning. The iron cavalry split the palace palace, and the jade was picked up and broken into pieces. Where the battle flag is flying, the word "love" is ground into powder, just like the double-sided rhombus mirror reflecting water when Yue Jia swallowed Wu. [The hairpins buried in the mud still call the old name to the spring breeze] The humble name of "Jiang Ni" covers the true appearance, like the beacon fire playing with the princes, like the skirt of pomegranates under the jade ring. The most painful thing is not falling into dust, but when it is cold and raining outside in the middle of the night, someone suddenly yells at my real name - and in an instant, the soul of my motherland's moon passes through my chest! "The remaining characters are burned in the history books, and all the threads of the spring silkworms are dead. Where the Jiang water has dried up, a half-burned sword is inserted in the tomb of Si." The ginger is burning stars, but it is bound to the cold pond, and Si is the national seal and is broken into pieces. The bronze inscription meets the fragments of words, and the rest of my life will be healed forever. I swallowed the ink while holding the pen, the paper was stained with tears and blood, and I asked in a voice: "Maybe you redeem it? Maybe you forget it? Maybe you don't recognize the fortune-telling?" While I was putting down the pen, the candles and lanterns were burning, and I suddenly saw the seal seal floating on the silk book - it was clearly the word "Jiang Si". Zhu Huang swam out of the tears, carried half of the country, and fell into the abyss of the ink pool? The screen window cracks and the snow falls, and the scorched tail string scares the soldiers of the homeland. Luo Dai has not tied the sword of Wang Sun, and the water chestnut flower has broken into pieces in Chu Jiangping. The seal in the palm is branded with the shadow of plum blossom soul, and the fish intestine carries the moon lantern at the bottom of the sleeve. The mud hairpin and the rain at night call out the old taboo, every inch of spring cold and every inch of ice. Thousands of embers of sails shine in the shark mirror, and the sound of the tide calls out my name. The star in Jiangtan sinks and sinks the book and sword, and the moss grows on the tomb and erodes the inscription on the tripod. When the remains of the burned books turn into ashes and turn into butterflies, the spring silkworms are all tied up in cocoons. Shuiyue Jinghua's original surname is the most painful thing about calling her late in the world. Beauty changes, wrong grievances, bone-eroding blades, only hurt feelings, the curse of the sea, the embers of spring and autumn, talking in sleep, reciting the true name... (Speaking in human terms: There must be a knife~ Just take a look if the writing is not good, it only represents my personal feelings, please don't blame me if it is different from the character, hee hee😁~) (PS: I hope there won't be a BE aesthetic ending! I beg the author!)

Why can't I resist reading it at chapter 30...

It's beautiful, but there are so few people. The title fits the content of the book very well, but it doesn't seem very attractive. If I hadn't read the author's previous book on a whim, I wouldn't have read it if I clicked on the homepage and saw a newly opened book.

It's beautiful, Wei Baihe, there are many female characters, support it! The heroine is very strong. I think not only the nanny, but also several people have become her disciples, and they are all girls! If teaching a disciple can also be called a nanny, then what does it mean to have a female protagonist with a master in other novels... The female protagonist is the strongest, a world leader with great love.

It looks good, but it's not my cup of tea [thinking]. My ideal should be to do whatever I want without looking at other people's eyes, not to accept disciples or lead others, and to show myself as a saint in front of others [cover face] [cover face] [cover face]

Zundu is very good-looking and I like the heroine's character. Most of the people the heroine interacts with are girls.

It's super good-looking. It can be clearly seen that the author must love the protagonist very, very, very, very much. There are no plots that make you look down. I really like the protagonist of this book.

The Nascent Soul stage is probably too much for the Earth, which is extremely short of spiritual energy. Their cultivation speed is also a bit faster than that of geniuses in the world of immortality.

It's so beautiful. I highly recommend reading this book. Is there any other book with a similar setting to this one? It's really beautiful.

Teacher Xiangcai's writing is guaranteed [shy]

I like it very much. I also read the first two books.

The quality of the content is still very good, and the author can maintain this kind of daily update. The score should be a little low when it comes out, and it will definitely increase later. Although it has no cp, there are many interactive posts of female characters, which are also quite good. I hope the author can make up for it in the extra chapter.

Okay, okay, this is what I want to watch. There is no CP but there are many female characters with single arrows. The character of the protagonist is also very suitable to my taste. All in all, I support senior sister! Quick update, can't sleep at night

The writing is as good as ever, and the writing style is as cool as ever [Like]

Nice! Teacher Xuan is a bit shady and a bit straightforward [laughing]

It's good-looking, I think it's a relaxed style, at least for now, I like the heroine and the supporting characters.

Very beautiful and very interesting😀😀

Interesting, (why five words)

It's beautiful😍The author is really awesome, come on

Five-star praise, looks good every day

The writing is quite good, and the content is also very good and very attractive to me. I have followed it, and I recommend it. If you like the heroine, you can give it a [sending heart]

The plot is good and interesting, the heroine is the strongest, I like to watch the beautiful sister

It's good-looking, the heroine is very strong, and her outlook on life is normal. Her goals are very clear and will not be affected by other things. Her impression of the earth is gradual rather than sudden and makes her feel like she's integrated into it all at once.

It's a very refreshing novel about a female protagonist. I haven't read a novel with such a high female protagonist in a long time. The female protagonist's golden finger is not inconsistent at all. It's really refreshing. I like this kind of refreshing feeling that the heroine is invincible and has no cp.

Not bad, the plot is pretty good.

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Very good book but a bit low rated

Not bad, it would be nice to have something similar