Doomsday: Obtain Rockberry Fruit, Royal Sister's School Beauty

It's a pretty good novel, but there's still a lot of room for improvement. 1. The introduction does not match the opening story, such as the devil fruit obtained 2. The update length is average, and the content is relatively watery. The introduction of fruit abilities takes up a lot of words (but after all, it is a free novel, so I won't ask too much)

It's pretty good. The plot is not a template, and it's a standard novel about women. If you like it, you can read it. If you don't, you can leave it.

The Devil Fruit theme is good, but there are really no good apocalyptic novels recently. I hope the author can expand more. Different worlds merge or organizations rise to form cities. The male protagonist's plug-in can also allow the female protagonist to gain abilities. I hope to write two to three million more words.

It's very beautiful, and it's getting more and more exciting. I look forward to the following articles [please update]

The author writes this book beautifully! It's very imaginative, and the plot design is also very exciting. There are basically no frustrating plots. Great work for the author.

You can check it out, the dragon group plot is a bit toxic, but the rest is fine

The disadvantage is that it is not enough to see

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite some time since this chapter was released. Have you finished taking a break? Update as soon as you finish! Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to take such a break!

Five stars for encouragement

Okay, okay, I can finish reading it in one day [laughing and crying]

In fact, the skill description can be a little less. After all, looking at this type, I still know a little bit about devil fruits.

The writing style and conception are all good. If you keep it up, it will be a classic apocalyptic novel.

It's quite interesting. There are a lot of apocalyptic articles. This novel has a different concept. It's quite interesting. Five stars. Please encourage me. Come on.

I like picking up girls and giving them supplies.

Looks good, come on, come on, come on

Good, good, good

@ExplosionRed Fruit What's the situation with Shang Ling'er now? It hasn't been confiscated until now.

Very satisfied with the hard work of the author.

It looks good, but there are too many people. I can't remember why the score is so low. Is it protected?

Settings are OK. It would be better if the shelter tasks are well distributed, with a contribution system, points, rewards and penalties.

Shouldn't he be given a Devil Fruit in his harem? [Rolls eyes] It's okay to give him a Shashao Fruit. Just the male protagonist can beat him [Rolls eyes]

This is pretty good. I update more than 1,000 words every day, but I just stopped updating it today [face covering]

I don't care if he's good or not. It's so cool to look at so many beauties.

The main character is very funny. I have been reading post-apocalyptic novels for a few years. It is very refreshing and beautiful.

It can be pretty and not too toxic.

What strengths does the protagonist have? The military has food and weapons, and the military has more superpower fruits that can be awakened, and the protagonist has restrictions.

The writing is very good, I like it very much, but the author is getting shorter and shorter, so I can only give you four stars!

It's so beautiful. Come here and watch it with me.

It looks so good. Why is the rating so low? Has someone fucked me?