Doomsday: I Get the Magma Fruit and the Campus Goddess

It's a pretty good novel, but there's still a lot of room for improvement. 1. The introduction does not match the opening story, such as the devil fruit obtained 2. The update length is average, and the content is relatively watery. The introduction of fruit abilities takes up a lot of words (but after all, it is a free novel, so I won't ask too much)

It's pretty good. The plot is not a template, and it's a standard novel about women. If you like it, you can read it. If you don't, you can leave it.

The Devil Fruit theme is good, but there are really no good apocalyptic novels recently. I hope the author can expand more. Different worlds merge or organizations rise to form cities. The male protagonist's plug-in can also allow the female protagonist to gain abilities. I hope to write two to three million more words.

It's very beautiful, and it's getting more and more exciting. I look forward to the following articles [please update]

The author writes this book beautifully! It's very imaginative, and the plot design is also very exciting. There are basically no frustrating plots. Great work for the author.

You can check it out, the dragon group plot is a bit toxic, but the rest is fine

To be honest, there is no need for you, the author, to work so hard. Give yourself a little buffer space. There is no need to keep forcing yourself to update intensively for the sake of fans. After all, we hope that quality is greater than quantity. This is my immature idea. Okay, I'm done. It's been quite some time since this chapter was released. Have you finished taking a break? Update as soon as you finish! Even the donkeys in the production team don't dare to take such a break!

The disadvantage is that it is not enough to see

Okay, okay, I can finish reading it in one day [laughing and crying]

The writing style and conception are all good. If you keep it up, it will be a classic apocalyptic novel.