Uma Musume: I Don’t Want to Do the Horse-Girl Hop

The writing is very good, and it is outstanding among the Tomato Horse Racing Girl fanfics. The protagonist is a pure succubus [admiration], and the stickers are very strong, and she is like the queen of all females. Among them, the monsters given by the system are very small. I can see the protagonist slowly growing up, working hard and sweating hard, competing for glory on the playing field. I really enjoyed the writing. I just don't know why gender has been emphasized since the beginning of more than 30 chapters. Even if it is a setting, there is no need to keep mentioning it. I have read many fanfics except for the appearance of the protagonist at the beginning, whether the pendant is worn on the left ear or the right ear, and then there is basically no description of normal daily patching training and so on. It's clearly written well before, why do you suddenly care so much about gender? And don't you think it's against the grain to keep emphasizing? Moreover, people who watch Jockey Musume fanfiction just watch daily posts and passionate competitions. You keep emphasizing gender and it feels like a futa article, and the posts feel stale, as if the male horse can pull something out from behind. I always liked it before, but I don't know why I suddenly wrote it like this later. From more than 30 chapters, gender has been emphasized. I feel that even if it is a setting, there is no need to emphasize gender. I feel that the flavor of the post has changed as I keep writing and emphasizing it. Isn't it good as written before? [Smile][smile]

This book is so good. The main character is really my mother, sister, psychological counselor, wife, Ma Mint, Ma Niang, the tool for dealing with lust.

Objective evaluation, the only drawback is that the update is slow. Subjective evaluation, the quality in Qieli is already on par with Ma Niangju's novels. Due to the economic situation, Mao Ke couldn't stay anymore so I had to come to Qieli to read Ma Niangju's novels. I didn't expect to encounter such a masterpiece. The writing style is good and the pace is not sluggish, but the treatment of McQueen is not distorted enough and the novel is not weird enough. , If that plot was about career being the main thing and then turning around, then the degree of distortion would be increased by several levels, and I would be able to become a god in Qima Niangwen in my heart. However, following the author's arrangement, it is also very exciting (maybe because I have watched too many mygo fans recently and want to twist everything I watch😵)

Compared with the previous book "Invincible", the efforts of this book are truly presented in front of the readers. However, because the time traveler accepts it too quickly, some plots may be associated with the original owner, which leads to some embarrassment. Therefore, the score of this book cannot be as high as that of "Breaking Waves", but there are definitely scores of 8.0 And above. If you really can't accept the embarrassment, you can skip six chapters first. It's completely changed (sad, sometimes I can't keep up with Xingmang's brain circuits)

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It looks good, but my suggestion is to add more competitions. The training plot seems a bit boring when there are too many daily routines. It's hard to say. Maybe it's because the author has too few updates. After all, the protagonist's goal is to be No. 1 In the world, so he has to participate in the competition. For example, can we try to get more enthusiasm by giving him a reward for seven consecutive victories? As the protagonist said, this is his adventure story, not a love story.

This is simply 🧊ah, the atmosphere brought by this book has a very relaxing and comfortable feeling, it looks super comfortable! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]Sai Gao!

Can anyone really stop reading this book? I'm about to laugh out loud. Rudolph, who is domineering and forced to love, McQueen, who regrets after rejecting the protagonist, the sun god who is attracted by the protagonist, and the emperor who succeeds inexplicably (I feel that he is definitely a loser, everyone else is jumping the horse, the emperor may still be holding hands), and Xiaocao, Condor, Thousand Representatives, Eight Layers, Sky. Can anyone really hold back after watching these things? Hahahaha [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

I'm very satisfied with it so far. It's the first fanfic I've read related to Jockey Girl. The character of the protagonist is well developed, and each horse lady also has her own personality. It has not reached 100 chapters yet. I will modify the star rating and rating based on the subsequent development of the plot. I really like the author's development so far.

It's good to read, so good to watch. I finished reading The Dark Warrior and I was very sleepy. The early part was very good, but later on I changed my taste and didn't like it anymore. The ending was also unbearable. I also finished reading Over the Top. It was also good. The writing was very good. The ending was a bit shaky. Currently, this book is almost tied with Over the Top.