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The writing is very good, and it is outstanding among the Tomato Horse Racing Girl fanfics. The protagonist is a pure succubus [admiration], and the stickers are very strong, and she is like the queen of all females. Among them, the monsters given by the system are very small. I can see the protagonist slowly growing up, working hard and sweating hard, competing for glory on the playing field. I really enjoyed the writing. I just don't know why gender has been emphasized since the beginning of more than 30 chapters. Even if it is a setting, there is no need to keep mentioning it. I have read many fanfics except for the appearance of the protagonist at the beginning, whether the pendant is worn on the left ear or the right ear, and then there is basically no description of normal daily patching training and so on. It's clearly written well before, why do you suddenly care so much about gender? And don't you think it's against the grain to keep emphasizing? Moreover, people who watch Jockey Musume fanfiction just watch daily posts and passionate competitions. You keep emphasizing gender and it feels like a futa article, and the posts feel stale, as if the male horse can pull something out from behind. I always liked it before, but I don't know why I suddenly wrote it like this later. From more than 30 chapters, gender has been emphasized. I feel that even if it is a setting, there is no need to emphasize gender. I feel that the flavor of the post has changed as I keep writing and emphasizing it. Isn't it good as written before? [Smile][smile]

This book is so good. The main character is really my mother, sister, psychological counselor, wife, Ma Mint, Ma Niang, the tool for dealing with lust.

Objective evaluation, the only drawback is that the update is slow. Subjective evaluation, the quality in Qieli is already on par with Ma Niangju's novels. Due to the economic situation, Mao Ke couldn't stay anymore so I had to come to Qieli to read Ma Niangju's novels. I didn't expect to encounter such a masterpiece. The writing style is good and the pace is not sluggish, but the treatment of McQueen is not distorted enough and the novel is not weird enough. , If that plot was about career being the main thing and then turning around, then the degree of distortion would be increased by several levels, and I would be able to become a god in Qima Niangwen in my heart. However, following the author's arrangement, it is also very exciting (maybe because I have watched too many mygo fans recently and want to twist everything I watch😵)

Compared with the previous book "Invincible", the efforts of this book are truly presented in front of the readers. However, because the time traveler accepts it too quickly, some plots may be associated with the original owner, which leads to some embarrassment. Therefore, the score of this book cannot be as high as that of "Breaking Waves", but there are definitely scores of 8.0 And above. If you really can't accept the embarrassment, you can skip six chapters first. It's completely changed (sad, sometimes I can't keep up with Xingmang's brain circuits)

It looks good, but my suggestion is to add more competitions. The training plot seems a bit boring when there are too many daily routines. It's hard to say. Maybe it's because the author has too few updates. After all, the protagonist's goal is to be No. 1 In the world, so he has to participate in the competition. For example, can we try to get more enthusiasm by giving him a reward for seven consecutive victories? As the protagonist said, this is his adventure story, not a love story.

This is simply 🧊ah, the atmosphere brought by this book has a very relaxing and comfortable feeling, it looks super comfortable! ! [Love][Love][Love][Love]Sai Gao!

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I'm very satisfied with it so far. It's the first fanfic I've read related to Jockey Girl. The character of the protagonist is well developed, and each horse lady also has her own personality. It has not reached 100 chapters yet. I will modify the star rating and rating based on the subsequent development of the plot. I really like the author's development so far.

Can anyone really stop reading this book? I'm about to laugh out loud. Rudolph, who is domineering and forced to love, McQueen, who regrets after rejecting the protagonist, the sun god who is attracted by the protagonist, and the emperor who succeeds inexplicably (I feel that he is definitely a loser, everyone else is jumping the horse, the emperor may still be holding hands), and Xiaocao, Condor, Thousand Representatives, Eight Layers, Sky. Can anyone really hold back after watching these things? Hahahaha [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's good to read, so good to watch. I finished reading The Dark Warrior and I was very sleepy. The early part was very good, but later on I changed my taste and didn't like it anymore. The ending was also unbearable. I also finished reading Over the Top. It was also good. The writing was very good. The ending was a bit shaky. Currently, this book is almost tied with Over the Top.

Children, I am an ice skating master🤓. When I first saw the cover and introduction, I thought it was interesting. I stuffed it into the book folder of the review team. After reading a few chapters, I immediately stuffed it into the book folder I was reading😋 and I was skating again. What a delicious plot😋. I have read the latest chapter directly from the beginning. I advise the author, you'd better update soon😡

Very good, I can see the stars from the breaking waves, the big writing style is really good

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It's great. Tomato Ma Niang's book is number one in my mind. I feel it can also be ranked in the top five in Mao Ke, comparable to the book about Logistics Ma Niang and Banned Trainer.

It's nice to watch. The part about Sirius is very touching. I want to watch Dog Training. The braised tofu there is also good, but I don't know if there will be a soy sauce maker in the future.

Boss, why did you crash again?

Even if your contact with her is limited to books, her frequent presence in your world shows that you have developed an emotional connection with her. Characters in stories can often touch our hearts and arouse empathy through words. When you learn about her passing, the sympathy for the loss of life and the fragile sentimentality for beautiful things are all natural reactions of human emotions. This sadness does not require actual acquaintance but arises from your sincere investment in her story and existence. How many are left now?

I have not forgotten Jingtao Pilang, and neither has anyone else, just like a year ago Now I also remember the divine guardian stars. May the brilliance of the three goddesses protect you forever, and may your figure always shine on the field.

The divine guardian star travels to the collapsing iron world and is directly upgraded to become the star god of [fraternity] [face covering] Time management master! Mother! Bomb disposal expert! The multi-winged archangel! Mother! Divine protector! Mother! Lily! Gentle Swamp! The harbor of maternal love! Lily blooms! Mother! Lily! Love the Emperor! I feel it, the place is here, the pure lily is blooming here! Understand Brother Wa! Mom is coming!

Yes, it is my spiritual food after Hai Huixing (original title of the book, Horse Racing Girl: Blow Up Your Dreams) [crying] [crying] [crying] (I read it after the previous book was taken off the shelves) I just remembered to give it a good review now. Keep writing, author [cry][cry][cry]

The best Ma Niang novel I have ever read\^O^/

Gravity Shura Field, Sweet Crematorium. The relaxed writing style is full of humor and humor, creating a "horse mint" horse girl like Xing Mang. Xingmang responds to almost everyone's requests, is considerate to others, and even uses her most seductive moves as a flat A, making other horses want to do it and making people laugh. In terms of story setting, it integrates various elements from reality, comics, and games. It is real and illusory, and it is very beautiful. The author has a very deep understanding of the horse racing girl, at least he can remember the character and her personality. I am the only one who plays Ma Niang games, so I am a little more interested in what skills and feelings I have. Of course, some people like to watch hundreds of posts, and some people like horse girl competitions. Everyone has different opinions, and their evaluations naturally vary. Which one is best depends on your own preferences. By the middle of the book, the number of characters continued to increase, and in order to evenly distribute the writing, some of the characters in the early part of the book did not have too many scenes (the Rudolf story before Chapter 100 had too many plots, which somewhat crowded out other ecological niches, and he was always asked to talk about it). Advancing the Starburst story line and other horse girl relationships is mostly daily life except for competitions. The daily part is a bit suspicious of hydrology, and the frequent daily routine makes the shaping of the starburst a bit dry. My opinion is that the article can focus on McQueen and leave the rest to some dramatic Ma Niang (Sun God, Eight Layers). The later system options have also been downplayed, and they are almost completely used in daily life. I don't think it matters whether they are added or not. Overall, it looks great. This is the first Ma Niang novel I have read. Everything I say is for reference only, and everything is subject to the actual product. Starlight is still too charming.

The story is well written and the plot has good coherence. And I just discovered today that I had read the author's other two works by accident (I didn't know that the three books were by the same author at the time). I actually read them all three different themes and liked them all. This may be a different kind of fate. I hope the author's works will get better and better!

Nan Beng, I have never played games or watched anime. After reading this book, I wanted to play Jockey Girl. I created an account in the Chinese server and played for two days but it was not enough. I also bought an account in the Taiwanese server and continued to play. Now I play two accounts together every day and I have no time to read the novel. . . It feels so happy to raise a pony and watch it grow stronger little by little [eating melon] [shy]

A good book. I have never read Horse Racing Girl, but the plot description of this book is very exciting. I like it so much, and gradually I am also interested in this anime [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's quite interesting, but there are a few chapters in the middle that keep mentioning stallions and mares, which really affects the viewing experience. But I probably haven't mentioned it in the latest chapters, so I'll give it five stars first, and I'll change it later if I fix these things.

It's okay. I'll give it a five-star rating. I still prefer those that describe events, such as (Dark Warrior). I like Horse Racing Girl very much, but there are too many posts and there aren't too many descriptions of events. It's probably because the author is afraid that the description is not good and will make it uncomfortable for readers to read. Come on! I won't chase you anymore, I'm going to review the Dark Warriors again [laughing][laughing]

Thanks to the author for letting me get in touch with horse racing girls Already watched it from the first season (Also, I like the succubus physique. Is there any plot of being knocked down later [shy])

It's a very beautiful book, so aren't you going to write this book? [Crying] [crying] [crying]