HP: I Became a Death Eater After Being Adopted

Objectively speaking, I think the writing is still okay and the logic is okay, but the only dissatisfaction is that Scott really doesn't want Scott. Then I hope the heroine will tell her family about this matter and be honest.

Really, I have never read an HP novel with this kind of plot (maybe I am ignorant), but I really love the character of the heroine, and the plot progresses without delay. When the heroine found out that she was not a child of the Weasley family, I really felt sad and cried, but the Weasley family has always treated the heroine as a family member (super sweet), and Fred is a little yandere (personal feeling, but not OOC at all), and Harry also has a vicious tongue. Anyway, I enjoyed watching it.

Good looking! Good looking! The author could give Fred and Harry a side story, and they would really have a good time with Flora! ! ! [Sending Hearts] The author would like to write more! [Blowing kiss]

I really like the relationship between the heroine and Scott, both CP and CB are delicious meals Their colleges are different, their genders are different, their families and childhood experiences are also different, their outlook on life or values are also different, and even their superficial personalities are completely different. The heroine is obviously more lively, and Scott's spiritual world is not easily exposed. It is only his own (perhaps due to the environment in which he grew up?). We can draw "nutrients" from each other that we don't have. Everything the other person has that we don't have is deeply attracted to each other. We have everything that the other does not have. We appreciate and agree with each other's differences, but their souls are the same inside, their ages are the same, and even if we insist on tracing their family backgrounds, they are the same. We can honestly and unreservedly reveal to each other our vulnerabilities or the sides we least want the world to see. We can also give each other our unique insights when they are confused. We can find our own "safe zone" in each other. The teacher's character descriptions are really detailed and very good. I like it and recommend everyone to read this book (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

I will always cry because the ending is too plain. Laura, your life has been too miserable. Originally, with the company of the Weasley family, I think you should be happy, but you should never have seen that letter and the subsequent rise of the Death Eaters. Laura, your life was too hasty and too short, so much so that I will never be able to let go of your final ending. Promise me that you will be happy in your next life, okay? In fact, after reading the whole book, I have always had complicated feelings about the character Scott. When you were 11 years old, you learned your identity, you knew about Flora's existence, and you wanted to drag him down into the abyss, but did you feel compassion during the time you got together? I think you have moved. Your life is like a flash in the pan, which is embarrassing. I have always thought that you were a very decisive person emotionally, so much so that you were so cruel that you were not even willing to leave a suicide note. You should still hate Laura that much, and hate her for having a relatively happy childhood, but I think you feel when you recall the kiss you had with Laura at that time? In fact, I think you are really bad. You will mark your death in Laura's heart. In fact, in character creation, many characters are neither absolutely bad nor absolutely good. In fact, I can't hate the character of Rodolphus. I think you love Laura more than Bella, but you chose the path of a Death Eater when you were young and did not accompany Laura in her childhood. After all, you are two non-parallel lines. When you released it later, you tried your best to maintain the ridiculously fragile father-daughter relationship between the two of you, and even asked Laura what color she liked. In fact, if you think about it carefully, you were also mentally affected by black magic when you were young. Your bad qualities are not pure, and your good qualities are not thorough. You are a different color from black and white. Although you didn't hear Laura call you "Father" before you died. But I think Laura called you father in the subsequent plot, and I think you should be considered complete. In fact, this story is neither complete nor complete, and it greatly saved Sirius, Fred and others. It gave a pretty happy ending to be honest. But I'm still sad when other characters die. But then I thought about it carefully and I thought this was normal. In the war, no one will be spared. Two or three out of every ten people will die. The death of the characters is not considered a bad ending, because they have fulfilled their duties. After destroying Voldemort, I think their spirits will rest in peace in heaven. Laura's final suicide was a relative relief for her, because I think she was thinking about the people she killed all the time when she was alive. She can't let go, so she may not be able to accept it from me. I think Laura should be consummated. The above are all my own opinions Thank you to the author for giving these characters new life, forever love you readers 2025.9.21

It was very beautiful, and I kept crying [crying] afterward. Characters: The author also wrote the settings of the characters other than the protagonist very vividly and richly. Scott was really upset [crying]. The original characters did not have OOC, and the family relationship between Scott and the protagonist was also very close. Theme: There are not many books about the contrast between the protagonist's identity as a Death Eater and being picked up by Weasley. I have never seen a book about Scott, a character with a rich inner struggle and a cold face. The subject matter is novel. Story: The story line of the whole book is smooth, without breaking the plot of the original work, and it also saves several people who were upset (but there is an extra Scott [crying]!). I like [admiration] very much! Follow-up review: The portrayal of the protagonist is also very vivid, and the description of details is well controlled. Also: I am talking about family love, but it can also be cp.

The fourth grade is probably the beginning of the heroine's nightmare

Okay, I just finished reading it. I like this kind of family-oriented book. I searched for similar books and found something wrong. I couldn't find this one. Fortunately, I didn't delete the star. It must have been hidden by the author himself. It shouldn't have been removed from the shelves of Tomato, right? I just searched HP and looked it up, and I couldn't find any book titles I typed in by hand. What does it mean to just copy and paste the book title? Does that mean there are a lot of good books that I can't find, and there is a shortage of books.

It's really, really beautiful! ! I feel that everyone in it is very consistent with the original work, especially Harry, who has a super charming personality. I particularly like Harry in the original work, but it is a pity that it is difficult to see this kind of Harry in fan fiction.

Please give poisonous tongue Xiaoha a CP extra story

I am very satisfied with the first part. Although the heroine is not smart, she has a very lovable personality. But I really can't accept the plot where Scott and the heroine have a similar CP. Isn't Fred good enough? He had a purpose from the beginning, and he even calculated that the heroine drank poison and had her bones cut out. I don't care what his difficulties are, the harm he caused to the heroine is real. I am really angry. I really can't bear for our heroine to be treated like this. I hope he will take revenge on Scott later. Ah [almost crying], Scott did think about dragging the heroine into the water, but the calculation is real and the maintenance is also real. I didn't like him very much in the early days, and I still don't like him very much now, but I understand him. It's so sad [almost crying] Good night, Scott [crying] I hope there will be no war in another world. There is also Rodolphus, he cannot be a good person, but he is learning to be a father. He will ask about the heroine's favorite color, help the heroine kill the werewolf, and finally find his way back and voluntarily die. I don't know how to evaluate it. It's a very complicated feeling. I'm also sad about his death. This book is really well written. Everyone has multiple sides and is very vivid. After reading the text, I felt heavy and sad. The author is great. The extra chapter is also good. I hate Fred the most in the main text, but in the extra chapter, I don't think Fred is as good as the other two.

The male lead must be Fred, and he's really good-looking

It looks good, and Harry's mouth would be poisoned to death if he even licked it. The characters are full of personality and the plot is well connected. I feel like everyone wants to take a bite.

It's pretty good, I like the heroine's character very much.

I hope the score can be released soon, it looks great! I hate Selwyn and Fred, can we do a side story about the three of them living together? I feel like the character design is very dramatic. Logically speaking, the traffic should be better. Harry is also very original, the plot is smooth and the writing is not too dramatic. I highly recommend it. The author's writing is very detailed. I hope it will be updated soon. HP's children are always forced to grow up.

Super pretty hehe

Please give the infatuated Scott a side story.゜゜(´Ｏ`) ゜゜.

Looks good... How come the king is so good at writing. I went through a helpless and sad war with Flora, losing many people and leaving many behind. Like Scott, he hated war.

In fact, my concept of this book is probably similar to that of the author! But I feel that this book is well written, and Flora is a growth-type heroine! It can also be regarded as one of my favorite growth-type heroine stories! Because I feel like there are few good books that describe his character and description very well. So this is probably the reason why I like this book

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author

Not bad 😊 Very interesting

Good looking. Love watching. Like j watching.

Wow wow wow so beautiful

Nice! The heroine is very good

This book is quite nice.

Author, I owe you a 5-star🥹

They are among the top five HP products I have seen.

I really cried to death 😭 It was really hard when Coster died. Everyone had their difficulties back then. I don't blame you [crying]

It's well written, the heroine has a growth potential, and she's not feeling aggrieved either.