Tokyo JKs Have to Write Light Novels Too!

I was very happy to see the twisted relationship between the heroines first showing up earlier. Bloodthirsty Lily Kitchen has new food~ However, the more you look at the back, the more you feel frustrated. The heroine is like a puppy that anyone can touch and bully. She is a coward who can't even get angry. The people around him are also more impressive than the others. Sakurai is sexually repressed and eats them whenever he comes up, and even has an affair with Hoshino. Hoshino is also a pure licker and touches others even if they know they don't like them. Finally, I gave the heroine a male childhood sweetheart in Bai He Wen. The author is lovesick, right? 🥰Two-star punishment. When will it be changed? Please call me back to change the rating.

So, once you let go, you will never be able to hold on again. I am really ashamed to say this. I feel like I want to die now. But taking responsibility for this kind of thing cannot just be said with words. This is not out of a sense of obligation. It should be said that I want to take responsibility, or please let me take responsibility. Maybe you don't think so, but I still want to continue to have a relationship with you, so please give me the right to distort your life. No matter how troublesome and difficult it is for you, that is the best. I will leave everything to you. If you find it troublesome, it is okay to forget it, because it is my own decision and I don't need your answer. Please leave your life to me.

It's a light novel that really tells a story. It's quite interesting. I only read it from Momona's point of view to Chapter 20. I didn't read the other student union point of view lines in detail. There should be connections later on. I'm very curious about what memory the protagonist has lost and what happened in the past. It's probably a suspense similar to that of Yamoku fans.

Starting from the first 20 or 30 chapters, I personally think that the book is of high quality, partial to group portraits, and looks like a hundred-year-old novel (in fact, you can ignore the "change", which is not very important); the perspective switching is very smooth, and most of the narrative is unfolded in the first person (this is a bit rare), which makes the plot very perceptible. Then let's talk about writing style and plot description. Personally, I think the author's writing style is top-notch. The characters' personalities and emotions are described in detail, and the characteristics of each main character are obvious. The plot is written in both breadth and depth, and is closer to reality. The fly in the ointment may be that the main line is not very clear, but it has little impact. I seem to have talked a lot of nonsense, but overall this book has a cute (?) And relaxed style of writing. Although I haven't read Nikkei before, I think the author's writing is great.

It's really good-looking, and I think it's well-written. Although it sometimes feels very uncomfortable, it's the emotion brought into the protagonist. If you want to solve the money problem, I think you can write a story where the protagonist's mother is a scientist or something like that. By the way, does Japanese law also include inheritance of debt? Wouldn't it be possible to choose not to inherit property and debts after I die? After all, it's still a problem with the house. The protagonist written by the author will definitely not take the initiative to ask others to help him. You can write a story where Sakurai discovers that the protagonist is worried about accommodation. If you want to help the protagonist, Hoshino's line, you can add a certain amount of interest that you need to repay every month. If the author wants to write a line that removes the debt problem, he can write that the protagonist becomes tough once, goes to court, and chooses to refuse the debt. But this way I have to rent a house outside. Then in order to get a high salary, the protagonist can only work in a maid shop. I feel that there can be many, many developments. It's really good, don't cut this book. The ball is gone

There are too many useless viewpoints, resulting in Momona's sense of presence being very low. Too many viewpoints are also a problem. It is too confusing and leads to too many characters being unclear. Then, doesn't the title of the main story say that she is writing a light novel in Tokyo? Isn't the light novel based on the main plot? There are student unions, light novels, interpersonal relationships, and life issues, there are too many. But despite these, there are still advantages. The writing is smooth and immersive, but as expected, the most important thing is to keep writing. Keep up the good work.

Author, when switching perspectives, can you mark the XX side like Riqing did? Otherwise it looks a bit confusing. I often read a page or two before I can tell which character's inner monologue it is.

It looks great~ It feels like it has the characteristics of sun light (there is really very little sun light on tomatoes...), Author, cheers 😘

The writing style is very delicate. If you like galgame and love games, I recommend reading the author's two books. They are both popular and not popular, which is a pity.

Even though I have to make up the exam tomorrow, I still finished reading it in one sitting today. The author's writing is very good and I enjoyed reading it 😳. I have a love-hate relationship with the characters in the book, and the ones I like so far are my younger sisters, Hina (Irie seems to be that name), and Nako. Currently I am very disgusted with the president and Kurori, and Hoshino was originally there. But I remember that in one chapter the author seemed to say that he wanted readers to fall in love with the character Hoshino. Then I'll keep a neutral attitude toward Hoshino. I seem to see some conflicting feelings in Hoshino, but I still have to wait and see. But the ones who sympathized the most were the Ichinose sisters. The younger sister was taken advantage of. Alas, I don't really like Dumi's kind of love, but it's fine if the younger sister likes it. As for Momona, oh, she always feels like she is suffering all the time. It seems like no one can give her positive feedback except her sister. Sakurai broke his guard when he saw her and Hoshino together. Come on, she is obviously chasing Mona. How come Mona seems to be a playboy? It's a carrot... Momona has been emphasizing that they are friends... It feels like Hoshino is currently using Momo to attack Sakurai. Although I am quite disgusted with this kind of controlling relationship where you don't want your sister to go to school, it is barely acceptable in the novel. The three of them are really in a triangular relationship, but now it can be seen that Hoshino has some feelings for Mo Nai, and Mo Nai is really a succubus. At present, I am more optimistic about Irie and Momona, but it seems that the author is probably Sakurai Momona. I feel like there are very few scenes in Irie, there is some foreshadowing but not much, and it seems quite normal so far, compared to other characters of course. Inexplicably, I typed too much all of a sudden, haha. I really like the author's writing style, even when he is complaining about those little blackheads haha. But to be honest, I personally still like to watch 1v1. This kind of party struggle feels depressing. I don't want others to get hurt, but if everyone wins, it is a harem novel. At the same time, I don't like harems very much. I feel that it is difficult for the protagonist in harem novels to balance the love with everyone. It is obviously an equal love but there is always a bias. I couldn't stand reading other articles about partisanship in the past, but this hasn't happened with this one yet. Finally, the word "water" is gone. I hope the author will greatly strengthen Momona. This version of Momona is too weak to play. Why can anyone attack her? Poor weakling 😳 Alas, it's a pity that this book has been discontinued. Although this book may not be very good, this book is one that I will pay attention to and update from time to time in the near future. I originally read the fourth update in the middle of the night and opened it happily, but the result was a farewell declaration [I almost cried]. But I highly recommend everyone to watch it. Although the characters may not be satisfactory, the Japanese light flavor still looks pretty good. I still prefer this brisk style. And the writing is not bad. When I read other novels before and encountered poor writing, I had no choice but to read it at a glance. After all, they are free novels. If the author is willing to write, it is already very good. There is no need to be harsh. If you don't like it, just skip it hh. In short, if you don't mind feeling the feeling of suddenly stopping while reading, I still recommend giving this novel a try, haha. Looking forward to the author's new work [sending my heart]